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Old 17th December 2007, 11:40 PM   #376 (permalink)
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Sabrina was looking at his brother's message when the room exploded.
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Old 19th December 2007, 11:09 AM   #377 (permalink)
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He blinked hard but the smiling angels had refused to vanish.
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Old 20th December 2007, 02:56 PM   #378 (permalink)
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Everyone hated papercuts, that was a common fact, but when you accidentally cut your skin and found highly advanced circuitry and wiring, then it was reason for concern.
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There could never be a good day really, for sinking up to your neck in mud.
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Old 21st December 2007, 09:13 PM   #380 (permalink)
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John learned the hard way that death isn't sweet.
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Old 24th December 2007, 09:30 PM   #381 (permalink)
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It snowed that night, the first snow of the year, and in August, no less.
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Old 24th December 2007, 10:03 PM   #382 (permalink)
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Even seventy-four light-years from Old Earth, Christmas Eve still held some of its old magic.
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Old 24th December 2007, 10:10 PM   #383 (permalink)
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"I'm getting too old to climb down chimneys," On the roof, the reindeer sniggered.
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Old 24th December 2007, 10:23 PM   #384 (permalink)
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It's not often you hear "Silent Night" being sung in four-part harmony by a group of mice, but somehow it didn't seem odd at all after fourteen pints.
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Old 1st January 2008, 12:28 PM   #385 (permalink)
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As the stormclouds rolled in, he could swear he could see visions of horses at the front, complete with riders bearing swords, like an army was descending to the world.
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Old 3rd January 2008, 01:23 AM   #386 (permalink)
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"This could hurt", falling and heights had never bothered him before, falling from this height, bothered him alot!!
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Old 4th January 2008, 05:47 AM   #387 (permalink)
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Real first line, current novel -


Oh God, what have I done?
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Old 6th January 2008, 01:53 PM   #388 (permalink)
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The grip on her ankle tightened, and she could feel the claws biting through her skin as she tried to get away from the beast that had emerged from the ground.
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Old 6th January 2008, 01:57 PM   #389 (permalink)
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Old 6th January 2008, 07:02 PM   #390 (permalink)
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"Call me Angel" ,he said "Cause no one this perfect could ever be human"
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