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Old 26th September 2007, 10:22 PM   #316 (permalink)
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The bullet stopped right before her face.
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Old 26th September 2007, 10:33 PM   #317 (permalink)
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Here's one inspired by your avatar, Chaser

"If it isn't an angel," the tall man said to me as we looked up at the sky, "then I don't know what else it could be, with wings like that."
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Old 26th September 2007, 10:37 PM   #318 (permalink)
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Thank you, Talysia, that's lovely.
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Old 26th September 2007, 11:03 PM   #319 (permalink)
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As he watched the man fall from the roof of the temple, Anthorn could not help but think. Life is looking up.
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Old 26th September 2007, 11:21 PM   #320 (permalink)
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I watched the man turn invisible, the first scientist to achieve this, and I smiled, because I was already invisible.
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Old 26th September 2007, 11:21 PM   #321 (permalink)
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"What?" questioned young HJ.
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Old 26th September 2007, 11:22 PM   #322 (permalink)
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In the time it took to say his name, he was gone.
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Old 27th September 2007, 12:57 AM   #323 (permalink)
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The marmalade had an odd taste, but only the dog seemed bothered by it.
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Old 27th September 2007, 01:51 AM   #324 (permalink)
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the clown pointed the waterpistol at me.Energy beings hate water .
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Old 27th September 2007, 09:39 AM   #325 (permalink)
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"So that's it then? It's over?" Battered and bloodied, he crouched low to the ground, not believing the voice crackling from the radio, as news of peace came through.
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Old 27th September 2007, 10:26 AM   #326 (permalink)
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I looked through the spy hole.Apparently not all killer robots had been
scrapped.Just my luck.
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Old 27th September 2007, 11:15 AM   #327 (permalink)
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Each step was like walking on jagged shards of glass, and there was still a long way to go.
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Old 27th September 2007, 04:00 PM   #328 (permalink)
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"I'm glad you could make it to our celebrity remake of Nine and a Half Weeks", said the producer - "you'll be paired up with that arrogant lump of lard Australian PR bloke with the stupid mohican."
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Old 27th September 2007, 05:26 PM   #329 (permalink)
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Each step was like walking on jagged shards of glass, and there was still a long way to go.
I like this one Talysia. It's emotional.
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Old 27th September 2007, 05:36 PM   #330 (permalink)
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Thank you, Chaser.

Here's another:

"Surely this can't be right?" I said to myself as I saw the trickle of water coming from the tap slowly turn to ice.
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