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Old 2nd September 2007, 08:29 AM   #301 (permalink)
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After checking on ebay, Brandon was stoked - the UFO was his!
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Old 2nd September 2007, 09:54 AM   #302 (permalink)
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That's a good one, Dexter!

She couldn't believe that it had happened again - this was the third time she had evaded death that morning.
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Old 21st September 2007, 09:50 PM   #303 (permalink)
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With grim resolve, Vance crossed the sulfuric threshold that would take him deep into the bowels of Hell.
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Old 22nd September 2007, 12:22 AM   #304 (permalink)
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Silence.
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"You must tell Michael his brother needs him-do you understand?"
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Old 22nd September 2007, 02:10 PM   #306 (permalink)
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"Fine, I'll do it," he said, taking the knife, "but only if you promise not to hurt them."
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Old 22nd September 2007, 06:38 PM   #307 (permalink)
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The dead parrot on the carpet was disconcerting to say the least, afterall I didn't own a parrot.
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Old 22nd September 2007, 07:15 PM   #308 (permalink)
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i had just murdered a corpse
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Old 22nd September 2007, 11:02 PM   #309 (permalink)
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With grim resolve, Vance crossed the sulfuric threshold that would take him deep into the bowels of Hell.
I like that one, Monster. I'd pick it up if that was in a book.
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Old 23rd September 2007, 09:47 AM   #310 (permalink)
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That's a fantastic first line Leisha.
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Old 23rd September 2007, 01:11 PM   #311 (permalink)
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When Jason discovered that he could stop time at will, a whole world of possiblities opened up to him.
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Old 23rd September 2007, 02:56 PM   #312 (permalink)
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That's a fantastic first line Leisha.
As was yours, Joke. As was yours...

Here's mine:


I never really intended to write this book, but the barrel of a .30 revolver to my head on the quiet spring day in the park on April 29, 2004 convinced me otherwise.
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Old 24th September 2007, 08:42 AM   #313 (permalink)
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That's grand saltheart. I saw Fight Club recently and reminded me of the crazy start to that movie.
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Old 26th September 2007, 07:37 AM   #314 (permalink)
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Flames rose up from the gap in the earth, and as the continent drifted apart a massive growl told the world that something bad was coming.
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Old 26th September 2007, 10:03 PM   #315 (permalink)
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Haha! Oh, I'd never realised!


That's the monster I want, daddy!
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