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Old 8th August 2007, 04:15 AM   #271 (permalink)
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She stood before the nothingess, trembling. What would happen if she just let go and stepped off this cliff, into the mist below? Would she soar without wings? Would she drift on the breeze? Or would she plummet down to meet true oblivion.

She closed her eyes and took a step forward, off the edge.
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Old 8th August 2007, 05:19 AM   #272 (permalink)
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I like it Leisha!
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Old 9th August 2007, 01:39 AM   #273 (permalink)
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The edge was sharp, but he was sharper.
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Old 9th August 2007, 03:25 AM   #274 (permalink)
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Gas station coffee bordered on toxic waste, but desperate times call for desperate measures.
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Old 11th August 2007, 09:40 AM   #275 (permalink)
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"Could you pass me the plastic rake," she called from the other side of the trellis fence.
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Old 11th August 2007, 01:27 PM   #276 (permalink)
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As well ask the sky about the weather, he thought and turned his face upwards.
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Old 11th August 2007, 01:34 PM   #277 (permalink)
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Gas station coffee bordered on toxic waste, but desperate times call for desperate measures.
I love this one, VintageFury!
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Old 11th August 2007, 06:23 PM   #278 (permalink)
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Ditto! If that was in a book, I'd pick it up.
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Old 12th August 2007, 04:20 AM   #279 (permalink)
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In retrospect it proberly wasnt a good Idea to call the bosses wife fat, and yeah, maybe I shouldnt have told those bikers,
(on the way home from being fired)
that they looked like piss head teenager wannabe hells bitches, and maybe, just maybe, I should have just driven away when they began to walk over. But what can I say? I was feeling stupid.

Incedently they hit like piss head teenager wanabe-etc.

author note: not sure what was going through my head here but i hope it makes someone smile
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Old 18th August 2007, 07:00 AM   #280 (permalink)
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Clinging to the rock like a barnacle, half way up a thousand foot climb, Jack's diarhea kicked in again.
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Harry sat in the Fiesta cafe, drinking their watered-down excuse for coffee and trying desperately to will himself toward sobriety.
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Old 18th August 2007, 01:48 PM   #282 (permalink)
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Out of all the books in his library, he liked that one the best: After all, no other book literally gave him the means to enter another world.
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Maya surveyed the devastation around her and wondered idly if her response had been a little too aggressive.
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Old 19th August 2007, 12:16 AM   #284 (permalink)
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I was spinning around and around watching the world fly by in a blur. colors, shapes, people running together. Then I stopped and fell to the dirt. Why is it even when I'm not spinning nothing in the world makes sense to me? Why is it even if I'm perfectly still I still feel like I'm on a roller coaster ride that I can't get off? Unfortunatly for me my roller coaster was going to get faster before it stopped.

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Old 19th August 2007, 01:05 AM   #285 (permalink)
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You're poems and lines always ring true, Mirinda. I actually had a very similar line in my poem:

I am barely standing
The world is rushing past


Spooky, eh?
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