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| Lady of Autumn | Re: First Lines As he looked up and saw the rapidly falling piano, the only thing he could think of was: This would make a great idea for a comedy sketch. (I thought I'd try my hand at humorous writing. Although I guess it's difficult to write comedy well in novel form.) |
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| Registered User Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Michigan
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| Re: First Lines The five horsemen charged recklessly through the narrow moon-lit streets, silver chain glinting from beneath dark robes as they trampled those unlucky few who were either too drunk or too daft to reach safety. |
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| Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton
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| Re: First Lines (love the piano sequence, Tal, Cul, IM!) As he put his second boot on, he remembered, with a sudden qualm, the advice about shaking them out first. With the sudden sharp pain in his toe, the advice, and everything else, became irrelevant. |
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