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Old 25th July 2007, 10:15 PM   #181 (permalink)
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The wall closed rapidly on him, and for a second Tom couldn't remember ever having been in a cannon.
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Old 26th July 2007, 08:04 AM   #182 (permalink)
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He threw the bundle into the river, watched it float away in the moonlight, then got back into his car where he cried until the sun rose.
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Old 26th July 2007, 11:09 AM   #183 (permalink)
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Precious little time remained.
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Old 26th July 2007, 11:11 AM   #184 (permalink)
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So she didn't love me,big deal.
Fish in the sea,bla,blah,blah.
Where did I leave the bullets?
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Old 26th July 2007, 01:29 PM   #185 (permalink)
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theres no business like showbusiness, but sticking a gun up someones nose and grinning is a good second.
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Old 26th July 2007, 01:45 PM   #186 (permalink)
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I couldn't stop the letter as it fluttered out of my hands and into the fire, and I would never see those words again.
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Old 26th July 2007, 02:59 PM   #187 (permalink)
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I was in LA to look for my killer
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Old 26th July 2007, 03:56 PM   #188 (permalink)
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The release of blood as I slit her Jagular vein was ecxtacy; the taste of it was even better.
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Old 26th July 2007, 03:58 PM   #189 (permalink)
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I banged the lid of the coffin,hard,then kicked upwards.Nothing gave,nothing even creaked.
They had done a good job,those carpenters
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Old 26th July 2007, 05:30 PM   #190 (permalink)
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This is a longer one, but it just came to me.

They had faces like angels. Flawless beauty...on the outside. Inside they were vile, disgusting and ugly. Hunters, but not your normal hunters. Their prey were people. It's like a game if you get caught they kill you, you lose. If you get away alive you win, but they never let anyone get away, they hunt you forever, so guess what you always lose. I'm their personal caddy. What is my prize for assisting them on their murderous rampage? I get to live another day, that's incentive enough for me.
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Old 26th July 2007, 05:45 PM   #191 (permalink)
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When she woke up, she saw that the box she had been entrusted to keep safe and never open was gone.
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Old 28th July 2007, 06:11 AM   #192 (permalink)
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He was going to disappoint an unbelievably large number of people today.
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Old 28th July 2007, 06:51 AM   #193 (permalink)
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'Veelis incanti arntaro, il cervao, il cadro,' the dark man said, and raised a glowing hand.
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Old 28th July 2007, 07:29 AM   #194 (permalink)
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As the dropped crampons tumbled into the depths of the North Face, he realised that the mountain had killed him. Oh, he would breathe, think, feel a little longer - but he was dead, nonetheless.
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Old 28th July 2007, 10:48 AM   #195 (permalink)
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How Andy wished it was only the wind battering the shutters.
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