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Old 16th February 2007, 09:34 PM   #121 (permalink)
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why did it leave her feeling so low?

slowly she drifted towards the moon...
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Old 16th February 2007, 11:00 PM   #122 (permalink)
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but her black winged stalker was not shed so soon

And as he drew near she percieved with a start...
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Old 16th February 2007, 11:12 PM   #123 (permalink)
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..he had in his talons a magical chart
which showed him where she was al the time..
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Old 17th February 2007, 07:48 AM   #124 (permalink)
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an object he thought was real sublime

cos he could jump out on her whenever he wanted...
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Old 17th February 2007, 08:02 AM   #125 (permalink)
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No wonder she thought the place was haunted! (sorry!)


Shw started to run for her home, near the farm...

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Old 17th February 2007, 08:48 AM   #126 (permalink)
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...and over her did settle an unnatural calm.


As she ran, she was no longer afraid of the stranger...
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Old 17th February 2007, 08:50 AM   #127 (permalink)
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the further behind she left the danger,

the more it seemed like just a bad dream..
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Old 17th February 2007, 08:55 AM   #128 (permalink)
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like being whipped up in a bowl of cream

but silently following above in the clouds...

(p.s. do you guys not sleep!!!)
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Old 17th February 2007, 09:09 AM   #129 (permalink)
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...his dark wings covering him like shrouds...


was the stranger she had met before...
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Old 17th February 2007, 09:12 AM   #130 (permalink)
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grinning face as he knew what's in store

whilst she casually drifted towards home...
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Old 17th February 2007, 09:16 AM   #131 (permalink)
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(I dare not sleep - I may dream!)

and hoping she wouldn't go near the crowds

of people that would be near the inn......




Clouds! Pah! we'll have orange next! or wolf!

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Old 17th February 2007, 09:48 AM   #132 (permalink)
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Ok, here goes.

Whilst she casually drifted towards home
Thinking that she was alone...

but above her the stranger was laughing amongst the clouds
and hoping that she wouldn't go near the crowds

of people that would be near the inn
or else his mischief he could not begin.

Phew!

She neared her home, all unaware...
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Old 17th February 2007, 09:50 AM   #133 (permalink)
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(Limerick metre!)

Of what was above, in the air,
When down came the beast...
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Old 17th February 2007, 10:04 AM   #134 (permalink)
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who wanted to feast
ate dirt; she's spirit - no fair!
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Old 17th February 2007, 10:12 AM   #135 (permalink)
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(claps)

She managed to reach a safe place...
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