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Old 16th February 2007, 03:56 PM   #61 (permalink)
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For I did not want my skin to be torn.

My questing hand found a stone, and brandishing it like a knife...
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:01 PM   #62 (permalink)
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it was useless as he tore me to bits, ending right there my life...


too slow the angel arrived at the scene...
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:01 PM   #63 (permalink)
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And he looked at the beast, his eyes very keen...


"You do not belong here" the angel then said...
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:04 PM   #64 (permalink)
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I can see just what's going on in your head!

Would you like to be pals? I can tell by your eyes...
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:05 PM   #65 (permalink)
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What on earth did Pyan just reply to, out of interest?

Hey! You changed it. No fair.

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But to tell the truth, it comes as a surprise.

So all this chasing has just been for a friend?
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:07 PM   #66 (permalink)
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said/head!

Confession - forgot to update the page!!
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:08 PM   #67 (permalink)
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You replied with "bore" first.

Don't think I didn't see! I know your sneaky ways, Pyanfaruk! You used the EDIT button!
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:10 PM   #68 (permalink)
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" if the gods hadn't meant us to edit, they would disable the button"
Anyway, I apologized!


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So all this chasing has just been for a friend?
I'm afraid it's come to a very bad end

So the moral of all this seems to be...
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:10 PM   #69 (permalink)
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:11 PM   #70 (permalink)
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You only apologised after I had posted. AND you used the EDIT button again.

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Right... confusion now sets it...

Someone reply to Pyans line, I haven't the foggiest what to put.
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:13 PM   #71 (permalink)
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lookin at the soles of his feet now dear demon he is but saying bye . . .



anger and full of rancor, the monster picked up and hurled an anchor . . .
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:18 PM   #73 (permalink)
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'ere! Memnochs doing it now! you going to shout at him, Lenny??
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:19 PM   #74 (permalink)
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I don't see the point any more... the whole thing is spiralling out of control.

I think we ought to just start a new poem, or go back to a rhyming couplet, and then another one on a completely different subject.
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Old 16th February 2007, 04:20 PM   #75 (permalink)
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Someone fish Ice Monkey out of the sea......
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