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The Damned · 19th March 2009, 11:11 AM

My wings asunder, I fell to a field of flax,
Oh, what a blunder, it's back to the books.

Interference · 19th March 2009, 12:43 PM

What monster is this, with hands made of hooks
And a sneer on his face that marrs his good looks
Approaching with stately and measurèd tread

chrispenycate · 19th March 2009, 04:56 PM

Of prosaic disposition, or poetic instead?
We're not easily led through this oeuvre of dread
Are we right in the head to be creating thus?

Interference · 19th March 2009, 05:00 PM

To tell you the truth, I don't get all the fuss
I write most of my stuff while sat on the bus
And figure out later if it meant anything

Cudaer · 19th March 2009, 06:09 PM

But with joy and enthusiasm I now sing
Of verse and rhyme and wearing my bling
I hope you forgive an old fools whim

Interference · 19th March 2009, 06:33 PM

A whim for the whimmin', forgiveness for him
A him and four women, forebearance the sin
Who tallies the plot with a blot on the lot?

chrispenycate · 19th March 2009, 06:46 PM

What I've got is a lot, but in couplets it's not,
Can you spot where we're hot? Consider the plot
To internally knot our creations by threes, to appease

Cudaer · 19th March 2009, 06:52 PM

I bow down to kings and fall down on sore knees
If I've lost all sense, Just aiming to please
Be in good cheer, don't give me a sneer

chrispenycate · 19th March 2009, 06:57 PM

I've had it to here with this terrible beer,
What now doth appear to delight eye, and ear?
Should we not interfere with the trend that's developing?

Interference · 19th March 2009, 07:01 PM

Fear not to interfere, for fear is enveloping.
Heaven forefend the unworthy endurance of defenseless things

Cudaer · 19th March 2009, 07:18 PM

A breath of fresh air on a cormorant's wings
I think I have caught the jist of this Poetic string

chrispenycate · 19th March 2009, 08:28 PM

If ye'll jist wait a momint, I'll get off me chair, and sing
To the honour of the flinging of unlikely rhymes around,

Interference · 19th March 2009, 08:31 PM

And perhaps even the occasional metre-go-round
Oh, joy, oh rapture, it can't be quite beaten

chrispenycate · 19th March 2009, 08:49 PM

Though what a deceit, when it's not a complete 'un
We're not yet replete; an inordinate hunger for rhyming persists

Interference · 19th March 2009, 08:59 PM

Even part-rhyming near-rhyming is bliss
Bet you can't think of anything else that is better

19th March 2009, 11:11 AM	#691 (permalink)
The Damned Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 13	Re: Creative rhyming My wings asunder, I fell to a field of flax, Oh, what a blunder, it's back to the books.

19th March 2009, 12:43 PM	#692 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming What monster is this, with hands made of hooks And a sneer on his face that marrs his good looks Approaching with stately and measurèd tread

19th March 2009, 04:56 PM	#693 (permalink)
chrispenycate resident pedantissimo Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,379 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming Of prosaic disposition, or poetic instead? We're not easily led through this oeuvre of dread Are we right in the head to be creating thus?

19th March 2009, 05:00 PM	#694 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming To tell you the truth, I don't get all the fuss I write most of my stuff while sat on the bus And figure out later if it meant anything

19th March 2009, 06:09 PM	#695 (permalink)
Cudaer Space Monkey Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Highland Posts: 43	Re: Creative rhyming But with joy and enthusiasm I now sing Of verse and rhyme and wearing my bling I hope you forgive an old fools whim

19th March 2009, 06:33 PM	#696 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming A whim for the whimmin', forgiveness for him A him and four women, forebearance the sin Who tallies the plot with a blot on the lot?

19th March 2009, 06:46 PM	#697 (permalink)
chrispenycate resident pedantissimo Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,379 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming What I've got is a lot, but in couplets it's not, Can you spot where we're hot? Consider the plot To internally knot our creations by threes, to appease

19th March 2009, 06:52 PM	#698 (permalink)
Cudaer Space Monkey Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Highland Posts: 43	Re: Creative rhyming I bow down to kings and fall down on sore knees If I've lost all sense, Just aiming to please Be in good cheer, don't give me a sneer

19th March 2009, 06:57 PM	#699 (permalink)
chrispenycate resident pedantissimo Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,379 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming I've had it to here with this terrible beer, What now doth appear to delight eye, and ear? Should we not interfere with the trend that's developing?

19th March 2009, 07:01 PM	#700 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming Fear not to interfere, for fear is enveloping. Heaven forefend the unworthy endurance of defenseless things

19th March 2009, 07:18 PM	#701 (permalink)
Cudaer Space Monkey Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Highland Posts: 43	Re: Creative rhyming A breath of fresh air on a cormorant's wings I think I have caught the jist of this Poetic string

19th March 2009, 08:28 PM	#702 (permalink)
chrispenycate resident pedantissimo Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,379 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming If ye'll jist wait a momint, I'll get off me chair, and sing To the honour of the flinging of unlikely rhymes around,

19th March 2009, 08:31 PM	#703 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming And perhaps even the occasional metre-go-round Oh, joy, oh rapture, it can't be quite beaten

19th March 2009, 08:49 PM	#704 (permalink)
chrispenycate resident pedantissimo Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,379 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming Though what a deceit, when it's not a complete 'un We're not yet replete; an inordinate hunger for rhyming persists

19th March 2009, 08:59 PM	#705 (permalink)
Interference Destroyer of Words Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 2,575 Blog Entries: 11	Re: Creative rhyming Even part-rhyming near-rhyming is bliss Bet you can't think of anything else that is better

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