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Old 16th February 2007, 02:35 PM   #46 (permalink)
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Tripped up over a knot in the floor.
slid down the banisters, into the hall...

looking behind, surely these that chase seem ten feet tall!!


Tired and persued, thus I fled on trainers most underused.
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:42 PM   #47 (permalink)
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...Zigging and zagging so that my foe would be confused...

I kept on running, but I once looked behind me...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:45 PM   #48 (permalink)
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I saw what one should never have to see.

Thes beast was chasing, closing the gap fast...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:45 PM   #49 (permalink)
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and that's when I ran, slap bang, into a large tree


surely now, my end it had come...

EDIT: Damn you Lenny!!!! And so to follow your post...

and my legs at this pace would no longer last.


I had to come up with something real quick...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:51 PM   #50 (permalink)
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So I turned, looked around, and found a big stick...


I swung for the beast, but he jumped out of the way...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:52 PM   #51 (permalink)
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he came at me with anger, for that swing surely I must pay . .


rolling under his leaping charge, I sprint on from his assault, his perpetual barrage . . .
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:01 PM   #52 (permalink)
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Then the beast's shape changed, wavering like a mirage.


My eyes were focused on it's terrible new form....
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:13 PM   #53 (permalink)
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for an instant like Tony Blair, I could have sworn.


but it shimmered and waved until it became...
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:15 PM   #54 (permalink)
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a DEMON of such height n girth none had I seen the same . . .


it's hungry glare it's lustful leer, oh my lord how I quake and fear . . .
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:18 PM   #55 (permalink)
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but, hark, is that a chorus of angels coming near?


or have I gone mad like a psychiatrist?
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:25 PM   #56 (permalink)
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Not mad, I thought, seeing eyes of amethyst...


Shining with bloodlust and set in a gruesome face...
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counterposed with a body of power and grace.


Hope laughed from within me gleefully
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:51 PM   #58 (permalink)
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As I edged away carefully...

But I moved too soon, and it moved to attack...
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But I could not run, with a wall at my back.

I crouched down low, trying to hide from the beast...
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Old 16th February 2007, 03:54 PM   #60 (permalink)
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but it's eyes like beads would not release . . .

I went for a stone, pitted and worn . . .
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