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Old 20th July 2008, 05:51 PM   #466 (permalink)
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Like when observing the wreck of a train

One can't tear one's eyes from the sight
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Old 20th July 2008, 05:54 PM   #467 (permalink)
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Oh the humanity! Of senseless plight!

The downfall of man is ignoble at best
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Old 20th July 2008, 08:53 PM   #468 (permalink)
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But funny, even so, when he wears a string vest

So disaster befalls and the clean-up ensues
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Old 20th July 2008, 09:06 PM   #469 (permalink)
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At last every man must pay his own dues.

So remember to give pause, and contemplate on
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Old 20th July 2008, 09:33 PM   #470 (permalink)
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That no one remembers Simon Le Bon.

(Which sounds a bit like an ending to me. Am I correct? We'll just wait and see... )
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Old 20th July 2008, 11:49 PM   #471 (permalink)
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Just then, a piano fell out of a tree,
With a walrus on top - now what could this mean?
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Old 21st July 2008, 01:21 AM   #472 (permalink)
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John Lennon the peace chanter I'd surely seen

With an ugly old asian clinging to his side
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Old 21st July 2008, 01:44 AM   #473 (permalink)
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Silly robot, what matters is inside

Just then the penguin on the TV exploded
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Old 21st July 2008, 01:53 AM   #474 (permalink)
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"I'll have to clean that." the janitor noted

Flammable foul was the least of his worries
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Old 21st July 2008, 03:25 AM   #475 (permalink)
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Being topless in a convertible with impending snow flurries

But now the sky began to crack
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Old 21st July 2008, 08:58 AM   #476 (permalink)
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with clouds of crimson edged in black

down came the snow as up rose the storm
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Old 22nd July 2008, 02:39 PM   #477 (permalink)
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And with such winds of nearly human form

Intent on decimating all it met





(iambic, you might note, pentametres,
should anyone care to join in with me?)
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Old 22nd July 2008, 06:21 PM   #478 (permalink)
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But perhaps the End is not nigh yet

For winds of change are aloft




(Is that it? A 6-8 pattern?)
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Old 22nd July 2008, 07:32 PM   #479 (permalink)
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(No, friend Zoob, I do apologise,
My goal was something more like this in fives
The way one William Shakespeare wrote his stuff
Dee-dum dee-dum dee-dum; the rest is bluff )

With luck and fortune, let the fall be soft

So all the world around it may not shake
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Old 24th July 2008, 02:01 PM   #480 (permalink)
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But for all men to learn faith

And suspend their folly e're forward

e're?
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