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Old 16th February 2007, 01:39 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Thank God! 'twas only a bird!


The scraping I heard once again...
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:43 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Sounded like nails dragged down a window pane.


I turned to see the source of the sound...
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:46 PM   #33 (permalink)
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a spectral, horrible Hound!

With a growl, it sprang in the air....
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:48 PM   #34 (permalink)
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...teeth gnashing, ready to bite and tear.

I threw my hands before my face...
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:49 PM   #35 (permalink)
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Oops! Beaten to it! I'll try again.
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:50 PM   #36 (permalink)
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..Struggling with my can of Mace..

Wooah! All stop!

Shall we go on from " ..ace"?
ready...set... GO!
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:56 PM   #37 (permalink)
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All stop, you say? Is that just for this poem?

Or could I start another and we'll just keep on going?

(as normal, I mean)
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Old 16th February 2007, 01:58 PM   #38 (permalink)
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All stop, you say? Is that just for this poem?

Or could I start another and we'll just keep on going?

(as normal, I mean)
Ok with me!
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:01 PM   #39 (permalink)
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I like the idea of keeping going with that one! It was getting good!

Okay, from "mace" then:

I hurried to get the lid off the can...
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I'd show the rabid beast who was the man!!


smashing glass, in it came...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:08 PM   #41 (permalink)
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but failing, turned and ran, and ran

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head..
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:19 PM   #42 (permalink)
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To Ice.monkey:

Smashing glass, in it came
Shattering the windowframe...

Otherwise:

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head...
For a minute there, I thought I was dead!

Fearing my life, I ran for the door...
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Dam that rumpled rug as I tripped to the floor. . .

thumping to a stop, my heart surely it would pop . . .
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:26 PM   #44 (permalink)
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Tripped up over a knot in the floor.
slid down the banisters, into the hall...
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Old 16th February 2007, 02:27 PM   #45 (permalink)
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Can I just pop in and say that Pyan seems to be really slow this morning? And pop out again goes I.
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