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pyan · 16th February 2007, 01:39 PM

Thank God! 'twas only a bird!

The scraping I heard once again...

Talysia · 16th February 2007, 01:43 PM

Sounded like nails dragged down a window pane.

I turned to see the source of the sound...

pyan · 16th February 2007, 01:46 PM

a spectral, horrible Hound!

With a growl, it sprang in the air....

Culhwch · 16th February 2007, 01:48 PM

...teeth gnashing, ready to bite and tear.

I threw my hands before my face...

Talysia · 16th February 2007, 01:49 PM

Oops! Beaten to it! I'll try again.

pyan · 16th February 2007, 01:50 PM

..Struggling with my can of Mace..

Wooah! All stop!

Shall we go on from " ..ace"?
ready...set... GO!

Talysia · 16th February 2007, 01:56 PM

All stop, you say? Is that just for this poem?

Or could I start another and we'll just keep on going?

(as normal, I mean

)

pyan · 16th February 2007, 01:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Talysia

All stop, you say? Is that just for this poem?

Or could I start another and we'll just keep on going?

(as normal, I mean

)

Ok with me!

Talysia · 16th February 2007, 02:01 PM

I like the idea of keeping going with that one! It was getting good!

Okay, from "mace" then:

I hurried to get the lid off the can...

ice.monkey · 16th February 2007, 02:07 PM

I'd show the rabid beast who was the man!!

smashing glass, in it came...

pyan · 16th February 2007, 02:08 PM

but failing, turned and ran, and ran

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head..

Talysia · 16th February 2007, 02:19 PM

To Ice.monkey:

Smashing glass, in it came
Shattering the windowframe...

Otherwise:

I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head...
For a minute there, I thought I was dead!

Fearing my life, I ran for the door...

Memnoch · 16th February 2007, 02:25 PM

Dam that rumpled rug as I tripped to the floor. . .

thumping to a stop, my heart surely it would pop . . .

pyan · 16th February 2007, 02:26 PM

Tripped up over a knot in the floor.
slid down the banisters, into the hall...

Lenny · 16th February 2007, 02:27 PM

Can I just pop in and say that Pyan seems to be really slow this morning?

And pop out again goes I.

16th February 2007, 01:39 PM	#31 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming Thank God! 'twas only a bird! The scraping I heard once again...

16th February 2007, 01:43 PM	#32 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming Sounded like nails dragged down a window pane. I turned to see the source of the sound...

16th February 2007, 01:46 PM	#33 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming a spectral, horrible Hound! With a growl, it sprang in the air....

16th February 2007, 01:48 PM	#34 (permalink)
Culhwch Keep Moving Forward! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Australia, Queensland Posts: 6,473 Blog Entries: 9	Re: Creative rhyming ...teeth gnashing, ready to bite and tear. I threw my hands before my face...

16th February 2007, 01:49 PM	#35 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming Oops! Beaten to it! I'll try again.

16th February 2007, 01:50 PM	#36 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming ..Struggling with my can of Mace.. Wooah! All stop! Shall we go on from " ..ace"? ready...set... GO!

16th February 2007, 01:56 PM	#37 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming All stop, you say? Is that just for this poem? Or could I start another and we'll just keep on going? (as normal, I mean)

16th February 2007, 02:01 PM	#39 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming I like the idea of keeping going with that one! It was getting good! Okay, from "mace" then: I hurried to get the lid off the can...

16th February 2007, 02:07 PM	#40 (permalink)
ice.monkey Ice...Mon...Key! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Hampshire Posts: 427	Re: Creative rhyming I'd show the rabid beast who was the man!! smashing glass, in it came...

16th February 2007, 02:08 PM	#41 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming but failing, turned and ran, and ran I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head.. Last edited by pyan; 16th February 2007 at 02:13 PM. Reason: forgot to add a new line!

16th February 2007, 02:19 PM	#42 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming To Ice.monkey: Smashing glass, in it came Shattering the windowframe... Otherwise: I dodged its teeth, as it flew past my head... For a minute there, I thought I was dead! Fearing my life, I ran for the door...

16th February 2007, 02:25 PM	#43 (permalink)
Memnoch Devilish in a fun way! Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Lancashire Posts: 280	Re: Creative rhyming Dam that rumpled rug as I tripped to the floor. . . thumping to a stop, my heart surely it would pop . . .

16th February 2007, 02:26 PM	#44 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming Tripped up over a knot in the floor. slid down the banisters, into the hall...

16th February 2007, 02:27 PM	#45 (permalink)
Lenny Press "X" to Admire Hat. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: [I am a spambot, selecting the default option - ban me!] Posts: 3,281 Blog Entries: 3	Re: Creative rhyming Can I just pop in and say that Pyan seems to be really slow this morning? And pop out again goes I.

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