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Talysia · 14th February 2007, 01:05 PM

I tried to pick it up, but it was stuck there with some glue!

I walked past a wishing well, but had nothing to throw...

Lenny · 14th February 2007, 01:10 PM

So about it I made a poem... shame it doesn't flow.

Sorry! I couldn't think of anything else!

When answering a poetic post I couldn't think of anything to say...

Talysia · 14th February 2007, 02:08 PM

You'd be surprised how much that happens, it always works that way.

The day breaks, and warm light fills the sky...

pyan · 14th February 2007, 02:13 PM

My heart breaks, as soon away she'll fly...

My heart is hers. Alas, she knows it not..

The Ace · 14th February 2007, 02:13 PM

As I think 'Another ten minutes,' the baby starts to cry.

Sod you, Pyanfaruk, you beat me to the punch.

Lenny · 14th February 2007, 02:16 PM

Ace! You've left me with only half a poem! *cries* I'll have to write it in, now!

The cursor flickers, and I stare at a blank screen
Idiot at the shop told me my hard drive to clean

---

I'll answer Pyan, too:

My heart is hers. Alas, she knows it not..
Won't she be surprised when she finds it it's rot.............. ted.

Daffodils are yellow, thorns are sharp...

pyan · 14th February 2007, 02:16 PM

Sorry, Ace - yours is better though - and much more likely!

Talysia · 15th February 2007, 05:07 PM

Daffodils are yellow, thorns are sharp...

Both of them appear on my decorative harp.
(Bad, I know. Sorry.)

Rain drops down from a leaden sky...

pyan · 15th February 2007, 05:14 PM

She's gone, thank God! Now I can cry....

I wish I was an Elephant, sitting by a tree...

Lenny · 15th February 2007, 05:18 PM

For then I would be the one, who discovered gravity.

I creaked along the floorbaords, towards a daunting door...

Talysia · 15th February 2007, 05:52 PM

As I'd heard a peculiar noise within I'd wanted to explore.

A spark, then a rush, and everything catches fire...

The Ace · 15th February 2007, 06:10 PM

He told me 'Wake me up at ten,' now it was half past four.

I saw the stars come out on a cold, clear winter's night
(Sod, Talysia beat me this time)

pyan · 15th February 2007, 06:26 PM

A spark, then a rush, and everything catches fire...
I saw the stars come out on a cold, clear winter's night
A spark, a rush, a Viking's funeral pyre,
A lamp, a fire, a pyre - We worship thee, oh Light!

(phew!)

In Morocco, in the evening, as the harbour lights come on...

Talysia · 15th February 2007, 06:37 PM

Good one, Pyan! Combining two lines like that!

In Morocco, in the evening, as the harbour lights come on...
The waves are calm, the port at rest, and the day's bustle has gone.

As I walked, strange shadows played havoc with my mind...

ice.monkey · 16th February 2007, 01:38 PM

and reaching home I was glad to leave them behind.

From the attic, a scraping I heard

14th February 2007, 01:05 PM	#16 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming I tried to pick it up, but it was stuck there with some glue! I walked past a wishing well, but had nothing to throw...

14th February 2007, 01:10 PM	#17 (permalink)
Lenny Press "X" to Admire Hat. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: [I am a spambot, selecting the default option - ban me!] Posts: 3,285 Blog Entries: 3	Re: Creative rhyming So about it I made a poem... shame it doesn't flow. Sorry! I couldn't think of anything else! When answering a poetic post I couldn't think of anything to say...

14th February 2007, 02:08 PM	#18 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming You'd be surprised how much that happens, it always works that way. The day breaks, and warm light fills the sky...

14th February 2007, 02:13 PM	#19 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming My heart breaks, as soon away she'll fly... My heart is hers. Alas, she knows it not..

14th February 2007, 02:13 PM	#20 (permalink)
The Ace Scottish Roman Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Perth and Kinross Posts: 3,811	Re: Creative rhyming As I think 'Another ten minutes,' the baby starts to cry. Sod you, Pyanfaruk, you beat me to the punch.

14th February 2007, 02:16 PM	#21 (permalink)
Lenny Press "X" to Admire Hat. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: [I am a spambot, selecting the default option - ban me!] Posts: 3,285 Blog Entries: 3	Re: Creative rhyming Ace! You've left me with only half a poem! cries I'll have to write it in, now! The cursor flickers, and I stare at a blank screen Idiot at the shop told me my hard drive to clean --- I'll answer Pyan, too: My heart is hers. Alas, she knows it not.. Won't she be surprised when she finds it it's rot.............. ted. Daffodils are yellow, thorns are sharp...

14th February 2007, 02:16 PM	#22 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming Sorry, Ace - yours is better though - and much more likely!

15th February 2007, 05:07 PM	#23 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming Daffodils are yellow, thorns are sharp... Both of them appear on my decorative harp. (Bad, I know. Sorry.) Rain drops down from a leaden sky...

15th February 2007, 05:14 PM	#24 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming She's gone, thank God! Now I can cry.... I wish I was an Elephant, sitting by a tree...

15th February 2007, 05:18 PM	#25 (permalink)
Lenny Press "X" to Admire Hat. Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: [I am a spambot, selecting the default option - ban me!] Posts: 3,285 Blog Entries: 3	Re: Creative rhyming For then I would be the one, who discovered gravity. I creaked along the floorbaords, towards a daunting door...

15th February 2007, 05:52 PM	#26 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming As I'd heard a peculiar noise within I'd wanted to explore. A spark, then a rush, and everything catches fire...

15th February 2007, 06:10 PM	#27 (permalink)
The Ace Scottish Roman Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Perth and Kinross Posts: 3,811	Re: Creative rhyming He told me 'Wake me up at ten,' now it was half past four. I saw the stars come out on a cold, clear winter's night (Sod, Talysia beat me this time)

15th February 2007, 06:26 PM	#28 (permalink)
pyan Ubi amici, ibi opes... Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Southampton Posts: 7,890	Re: Creative rhyming A spark, then a rush, and everything catches fire... I saw the stars come out on a cold, clear winter's night A spark, a rush, a Viking's funeral pyre, A lamp, a fire, a pyre - We worship thee, oh Light! (phew!) In Morocco, in the evening, as the harbour lights come on...

15th February 2007, 06:37 PM	#29 (permalink)
Talysia Lady of Autumn Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Lincolnshire Posts: 4,672 Blog Entries: 17	Re: Creative rhyming Good one, Pyan! Combining two lines like that! In Morocco, in the evening, as the harbour lights come on... The waves are calm, the port at rest, and the day's bustle has gone. As I walked, strange shadows played havoc with my mind...

16th February 2007, 01:38 PM	#30 (permalink)
ice.monkey Ice...Mon...Key! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Hampshire Posts: 427	Re: Creative rhyming and reaching home I was glad to leave them behind. From the attic, a scraping I heard

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