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Old 18th February 2007, 09:14 AM   #151 (permalink)
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regardless of any physical danger,
rushed down the slope and into the throng...
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Old 18th February 2007, 10:57 AM   #152 (permalink)
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and the swoosh of her sword made an unusual deathsong...

as she aimed for the leader, and the sword found its' mark...
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Old 18th February 2007, 11:23 AM   #153 (permalink)
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and at that exact instant everything went dark

as black as tar it dampened all sound...
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Old 18th February 2007, 12:08 PM   #154 (permalink)
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and her wary heart started to pound...

but the black winged stranger took her hand...
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Old 18th February 2007, 12:35 PM   #155 (permalink)
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as one they would fight and make their stand

a flash of white light; the stranger transformed...
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Old 18th February 2007, 01:01 PM   #156 (permalink)
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And surprised, she felt that her clasped hand was warmed.

She gasped. The strange being with her was black winged no more...
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Old 18th February 2007, 04:01 PM   #157 (permalink)
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but snow-white in plumage, from head down to floor

A great, fiery broadsword he held in his hand.....
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Old 18th February 2007, 04:55 PM   #158 (permalink)
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...Which the angel-like being used just as he'd planned.

In a great shower of sparks, he swung at the rest of the foes...
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Old 18th February 2007, 05:03 PM   #159 (permalink)
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(Bit too showy, he chopped off his toes)

Angelic blood in a fountain did spurt.
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Old 18th February 2007, 05:07 PM   #160 (permalink)
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A grimace on his face showed that it hurt

But where the blood splashed, from the red drops rose...
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Old 18th February 2007, 05:26 PM   #161 (permalink)
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A horde of seraphim, all equipped with bows.

"A miracle!" she cried, as the cherubs opened fire...
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Old 18th February 2007, 07:27 PM   #162 (permalink)
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And the arrows arched up, going higher and higher.

but as they started to fall on the foe..
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Old 18th February 2007, 07:30 PM   #163 (permalink)
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The silvery arrows soon began to slow

To the Cherubs' dismay, none found their mark...
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Old 18th February 2007, 08:19 PM   #164 (permalink)
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As the foe put up a huge Shield of Dark!

From the Dark Ones front rank, a huge figure step'd out...
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Old 18th February 2007, 08:22 PM   #165 (permalink)
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bobbing and weaving, challenges anyone to bout...

from the back of the cherubs a voice is heard...
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