Another short excerpt...

[Young stormlord]

Publish it, damn it. Than send a contingent straight to Serbia. (actually one hardback copy will suffice. pirate's will do the rest )

[Culhwch]

Originally Posted by Teresa Edgerton

If you start posting scenes with whips and torture chambers, and a bad prince who says, "You've spoiled my fun, Brother" when the good prince interrupts him raping villagers -- then I might rethink my rash promise.

But from what you've given us here, I'm eager to read the rest.

Actually from this point on it's nothing but whips and torture, so if that's the case I might have to restructure a little...

Peter - good suggestions all-round. I have done a few edits since I posted this but I'll certainly go back over it with your comments in mind.

And thanks everyone for the kind words and encouragement. It's good to know I'll have a ready-made audience if I ever manage to finish this thing and get it published. Big 'if', there, but I'll do my best...

[Tansy]

From what I have seen so far it is certainly something I would read. I like your style of writing and I'm already curious enough to read more

[Doctor Sax]

This does read very well.