People of The Worlds Trilogy

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The Other World Out There

Plot Summary: A present day part blind body builder named Peter Bynes is in the sewers with some friends who are doing research science and came along to help and falls into a portal to a realm called Linkin by accident. In this realm most forms of fads are illegal after the days of gang violence. Tattoos, baggy clothing and body piercings have been banned by a dictator named Jack Brill. The punishment if being arrested and placed under a firing squad. Brill’s right hand man is Quinlan. Linkin is a link to Earth. The place is under martial law. Tyrannical soldiers have taken over the land. A woman named Amy Henrickson leads the fight for freedom for fads. A tyrannical military commanded by General Hodger raids tattoo parlors and destroys them. Amy’s father and a friend want to lead the place with democracy.

Beginning

Scene 1

In New York City at day time there’s Peter Bynes at a gymnasium talking about his blind body building books with a news anchorman. Anchorman: "I heard a rumor that there’s another world out there. Do you know anything about this?" Peter: "I believe that this is crazy." Anchorman: "I heard about it there that tattoos and body piercings are illegal." Peter: "This must be fascist." Anchorman: "Do you have any relation to actress Amanda Bynes?" Peter: "No." Peter leaves the gym and goes with friends.

On the streets of New York City in the day time. Peter has 3 friends with him. Peter: "I sold my blind exercise book. I made lots of money out of the deal." Peter’s friend #1: "That’s great." Peter: "I heard something about a fascist world out there." Peter’s Friend #2: "I heard this rumor too. A world that had gang violence and after this ended a dictator bans fads." Peter’s Friend #3: "This must fascist. I heard something about a firing squad and this realm is under martial law." Peter: "Don't forget I'm 75% blind. I can't even drive. I have never even been behind the wheel or any real motor vehicle." Peter’s Friend #2: "Just like Daredevil. He was blinded by radiation." Peter: "I have been blind my whole life." They walk into the sewers. Peter taps his red and white walking cane. Peter: "Are we in the sewer system yet?" Peter’s Friend #3: "Almost there. Just keep walking and you are there."

Scene 2

In the sewers in the day time. Peter’s Friend #1: "We are in the sewers." They are walking the sewer system and Peter is hit by water and is thrown through a portal to the realm of Linkin.

On the streets of Linkin in the day time. Peter with his blind man’s walking cane have landed. There’s local cops who helps a man around. Police Captain: "Do you need any help?" Peter: "Yeah. Could you please help me around here?" Police Captain: "You are in a realm called Linkin." Peter: "Linkin. I heard rumors about this place." The cops search Peter Bynes for tattoos or body piercings. They find none. Police Captain: "We need to search you to make sure that there you are not tattoo or pierced. Here it is illegal. We are also under martial law." General Hodger and his army show up. General Hodger: "Captain. We have found a resistance. A girl and her father with a friend to her father are behind those attacks." Police Captain: "Amy Henrickson. It’s her father Jefferson with Roy Mattrick." General Hodder: "I believe that’s what we have found out." Police Captain: "I'll take this man with me under police protection from this young woman trying to bring back the gang violence." Peter: "My name is Peter Bynes. I come from Earth." Peter Bynes gets into a police car.

Scene 3

At a Tattoo parlor later on in the day. There are 3 men and 2 women in the tattoo parlor working there. There are some young men and women getting tattoos. Even piercings on the tongue and bellybutton. The young men and women are even getting piercings on the eyebrow and nose. Even the young men are getting nipples pierced. Even several earings put into ears. A young girl shows the piercing on her tongue. Tattoo artist: "I just had some rebels in here. They have already banned smoking due to the fact that it is disrespect to the air." Young Girl: "Amy and us could win this freedom."

Outside the tattoo parlor. There’s General Hodger with his many troops. General Hodger: "We estimated 20 people getting tattoos and piercings in this place. There are 5 people working there doing the tattoos and piercings. Let’s bring this place down with the demolition team." The troops draw guns and burst in with General Hodger. General Hodger: "Everyone get down on your knees. This is a raid." All those customers and employees pull out guns and a gun fight breaks out. The girl who has the double tongue piercing shoots at General Hodger and General Hodger’s troop shoots her in the head. Many rebels are being killed. A man who does the tattoos with a pierced nose and various tattoos is shot by the tyrannical military General Hodger. A girl with a pierced bellybutton and her boyfriend with a pierced nipple shoots 2 soldiers. Every other out cast of this society is shot by the military. General Hodger goes out side and address his team. General Hodger: "They are all dead. 2 men have been killed. Go in and blow it up." The soldiers go in and set the explosives. On the streets a tough man named Roy Mattrick shows up walking. Mattrick: "You can't do this. This is oppressive." General Hodger: "You. We are looking for you. You will be placed under a firing squad for speaking out against this regime." Mattrick gets into a fist fight with some soldiers. Another soldier with the handle of his gun hits Roy Mattrick very hard. General Hodger: "Place this man under a firing squad by tomorrow for speaking out against our society." Solider #1: "Yes General." They leave with their prisoner.

Scene 4

At the ocean beach of Linkin at night time. There’s Amy Henrickson (young attractive girl with long blonde hair) with her other freedom fighting friends who are in their 20’s and 30’s. Even 40’s. Amy sitting on the beach with a bunch of her friends are greeted by Amy’s parents. There is Ruth and Jefferson Henrickson. Ruth: "Amy. We have to inform you something." Jefferson: "Our others have been killed in a tattoo parlor raid by General Hodger. Everyone was killed in this raid." Ruth: "Also Roy Mattrick was arrested by the military last night." Jefferson: "Also a man from a realm or planet called Earth has showed up. He’s a 3 quarter blind weightlifter." Amy: "Tomorrow I rescue Roy." Jefferson: "The police and military are after you too." Amy: "We'll have a rally right here right now." Amy gathers up several freedom fighters with her parents. Amy: "Years ago this place was ravaged by lots of gang activity. When Jack Brill took over this place in his ruler ship he had all young men and women taken out by his new military. Now he counts many fashions to be dangerous. Now he counts us as street hoodlums with those fads. We can take over the world. We just need to take out Jack Brill with his right hand man Quentin Quinlan. We can capture General Hodger and get him to resign himself a tyrant." All rebels: "Yeah!" They all leave the beach.

Scene 5

The next day in Linkin in the office of Jack Brill. There’s Jack Brill with his right hand man named Quentin Quinlan. General Hodger comes in with Peter Bynes. General Hodger: "This is Peter Bynes. He comes from a place called Earth. He’s 75% blind." Brill: "Take a seat. I'll tell you about this place." Peter: "I was born this much blind. I have heard about your place. You and double Q can give me detail." Brill: "A decade ago gang violence was breaking out. I went into power and took on a new military." Quinlan: "Ridge Hodger declared himself General. He took out all those men and women destroying are place." Brill: "Peace is with ourselves now." Quinlan: "Today a man is to be executed for getting involved with fads. He spoke out against us. He might even be a terrorist." Peter: "My home town is New York City. The smoking ban in all public places started there due to second hand smoke. I never smoked. Yuck. I don't like body piercings. Another yuck." General Hodger leaves the office. Quinlan: "Those who are against us are terrorists." Brill: "You can come with us. We could show you around here." Peter: "Sure thing."

Scene 6

Later on in the day at a yard. The Police captain with his officers and Peter Bynes are there too. There is General Hodger with his firing squad. Vice Chancellor Quinlan is there. Somewhere in hiding are the rebels. Some soldiers with Roy Mattrick are there. Roy is being tied to a post. The executioners have guns ready. General Hodger: "It is known that Roy Mattrick has been found guilty in obstructing justice and connections to fads. He is here to be placed under a firing squad will be fired on this day to death. Ready. Aim…" Amy Henrickson swings in and knocks down the firing squad while other rebels push Roy Mattrick out of the way and free him. General Hodger (continued): "Fire." Amy uses various martial arts moves on the firing squad and incapacitates them. Other soldiers open fire. Peter Bynes finds out about this oppression and knocks out the police captain with his hands. Peter: "Sorry Captain but this is tyranny." The cops go after the rebels and now Peter Bynes. The general has his gun drawn too. He commands the troops. General Hodger: "Get them!" They all run. Peter knocks the general out with a bucket. They all escape.

Scene 7

Later on in the office of Jack Brill. There’s General Hodger and Jack Brill with his right hand man. General Hodger: "The blind man knocked me out for a short time with a bucket. He knocked out the police captain." Brill: "If he stops us we are doomed. He must've joined with those terrorist rebel forces." Quinlan: "Find him general. Have your lieutenants or captains with troops after him. Have the house of the Henricksons raided." General Hodger: "yes sir." The tyrannical general leaves with his hat being put on.

Scene 8

At a house by the beach owned by the Henricksons at night. A captain with his soldiers and a lieutenant burst in. The troops aim their guns at Ruth and Jefferson Henrickson. Military Captain: "Don't move. We have been looking for you Jefferson. Where’s your daughter?" Jefferson: "We are not telling you. I will never put my daughter in danger." A solider then aims a gun in the mouth of Ruth. Captain: "Where is she?" This soldier knocks them out with a gun.

In the attic there’s Amy with her band and the blind body builder. Peter: "My name is Peter Bynes. I come from Earth in New York City. It’s in a country called America. In America we can't have laws like this." Amy: "Why is that?" Peter: "America is a free country. We have a freedom of speech thing. Freedom of choice. We can't have a society like this in where I live. There are street gangs in where I live." Amy: "Jack Brill with his dictatorship had this entire street gang slaughtered. He says that people with fads are street hoodlums. That’s why this stuff has been outlawed here." Peter: "We had a known day known as 9/11 when terrorists have attacked America. They did this in hatred. We had then declared war on the terrorists." Amy: "Our leader has declared war here too. People who look like street hoods are to be placed under a firing squad. We are even under martial law." Peter: "We are not. We don't count people as street hoods or terrorists just for those fads. That doesn't make us bad." Someone finds the soldiers from the attic. Rebel #1: "Amy. The military got to your parents. They are going to take your father away." Amy: "Let’s then man our battle stations."

Scene 9

Back to Amy’s parents and the military. Military Lieutenant: "They are in the attic." The soldiers head to the upstairs with a lieutenant. Military Captain: "Bring me everyone. Even the blind man from Earth." They go after the rebellion. Peter Bynes sees the soldiers with 25% sight. He knocks one out with his bare hands. 3 open fire on the rebels. They fire back. Amy with her gun shoots 4 soldiers. Peter battles a lieutenant using his walking cane. We whops him good and knocks him out. Amy chases after the captain. She fights him hand to hand. She knocks out the captain. Amy: "Dad." Jefferson: "Amy." Amy: "I saved you. We have the general to find." The rebel band with Peter Bynes show up. Amy: "Dad there’s Peter Bynes. He’s a body builder." Jefferson: "I know that you were there when my daughter rescued Roy Mattrick. I knew from her." Peter: "Yes. I knocked out the police captain. We eluded police." Jefferson: "They are after you too now." Peter: "I need if we can end this dictatorship to get back to my home. Somewhere in the water I was sent through a portal to here." Everyone leaves now that they are on the run.

Scene 10

The next day on the beach a few near the office of Jack Brill. General Hodger comes in to see Jack Brill and Quentin Quinlan. General Hodger: "They have all escaped and incapacitated many of my troops." Jack Brill: "Find them. They going to be somewhere on this beach. There’s a clothes designing going on. Find the illegal clothing designer and kill him. Destroy the baggy clothings. Every tattoo parlor will be raided sooner or later." The General leaves the leader’s office with his hat put on.

Scene 11

Later on at a clothing industry nearby. A man named Tom is designing ripped jeans and ripped clothing. Even short shirts. There are young people there buying baggy clothing. There are some hot chicks buying ripped jeans and young guys buying them too. A girl has a pierced bellybutton and a tattoo on her back. Tom: "Did you girls here about this blind man here who comes from a place called Earth?" Young Girl: "No. But I bet that he’s hot." Tom: "He might end this oppression over us." General Hodger bursts in with his demolition team. General Hodger: "We kill gang people. Everyone get down on your knees. This is a raid." Tom goes for a gun and is shot by the military general and he dies. Young Girl #2: "What are you doing?" General Hodger: "I am raiding this place. You are possessing illegal clothing. You will all be fired on since the female gang leader took out my firing squad by me." The soldiers knock down all those people and then drag to a wall. General Hodger: "Have them fired upon. Our real executioners are knocked out." Solider #5: "Yes General Hodger." General Hodger: "Ready. Aim. Fire." The soldiers all fire on all those offenders of the society. They are all slaughtered. They soldiers shoot holes in the illegal clothing. They all leave.

Scene 12

Later on at the beach in the day time. There is Amy with her rebel band. There is also Peter Bynes. Peter: "I'll get into the office and deal with Jack Brill. You can then battle this General and his troops." Some soldiers show up and attack. Peter Bynes knocks out a few troops. The rebels with their leader draw their guns. Jefferson and Mattrick show up. They get into the building of Jack Brill. The tyrannical military and the rebel draw guns and get into a gun fight.

At the Brill building there are some guards there too. Peter, Mattrick and Jefferson all take out those guards with surprise attacks. Mattrick and Jefferson draw their guns. They shoot some other armed guards who shoot at them. The police show up looking for Jefferson and Mattrick. They fight the police hand to hand. Peter gets into the office of Jack Brill. Brill: "You. I will have you killed." Peter: "The police and security are dealing with Jefferson and Roy." 5 rebels show up and in the window fight with Quentin Quinlan in a gun fight. Peter Bynes fights Jack Brill hand to hand.

Scene 13

Back on the beach 7 rebels are shot by military officers. Amy kills 2 soldiers. The gun fight breaks out. Amy fights General Hodger in a fierce gun fight. General Hodger: "Now babe you will die."

Back in the lobby of Jack Brill’s place Roy Mattrick and Jefferson Henrickson get passed police and security. They get to the office of Jack Brill.

Back on the beach some soldiers are being killed by rebels. In that fierce gun fight Amy Henrickson kills General Hodger. All those other tyrannical soldiers throw down their weapons. Rebels: "Yea!" They are all captured by the rebellion led by Amy Henrickson.

Scene 14

Back at Brill’s office. Roy Mattrick bursts in and shoots Quentin Quinlan dead. Jack Brill and Peter Bynes beat each other up. In that fight Peter Bynes throws Jack Brill out the window many stories down. Jefferson: "I am now the president of this land. The vice president of here is Roy Mattrick." Mattrick: "Jefferson’s daughter saved my life too. I am not crazy about tattoos and body piercings but there was other oppressive stuff over me by Jack Brill." They all leave the office.

Scene 15

Outside later on at night at the place now run by Jefferson Henrickson. A rally is going on. Jefferson: "All the soldiers who survived our fight for freedom have resigned. I will build a democratic military. You people are free to any kinds of fads that you like." Mattrick: "We were living under oppression of Jack Brill and now he is dead. Our new president’s daughter has the freedom to wear baggy clothing."

At a place by the beach there is Amy Henrickson with Peter Bynes. Amy has on ripped jeans and a bellybutton shirt. Amy: "Let’s just hope you won't live this oppression in your place." Peter: "I shouldn't. I could tell people that I freed you all from oppression." Peter leaves through the portal back New York City.

Scene 16

Back in the sewer system in NYC. Peter comes back. His 3 friends are back. Peter: "I was in this rumored realm. It is true. I gave freedom to the oppressed. I defeated the dictator there." Peter’s friend #1: "It’s good that you are back." They all leave.

End

The High Crimes in The Worlds

Plot Summary: Peter Bynes is back. Peter Bynes foresees a possibility of New York City looking like this realm that he was in. There is a war between Neo Nazis, Russian Mobsters and Street Gangs called the Tattoos. The Tattoos are various races. Some of them are women. His cousin Rocky Bynes a New York City cops is teaming with him in the battle. Steven Olsen is the leader of the Russian Mob. The leader of the Neo Nazi band is Glenn Smith. The leader of the gang called the tattoos is William Norton. This is a war that Peter and his cousin are caught in fighting.

Scene 1

Opening Credits & introduction

Beginning

Title Card: In the very near future

Scene 2

At a gymnasium in New York City in the day time. There is Peter Bynes working out there bench pressing. He has his cousin Rocky there spotting him. Also in the gymnasium are some tattooed or pierced thugs. Peter is doing several lifts. He is done. Peter: “I am done now Rocky.” Peter gets up carrying his towel for the sweat. Peter takes his walking cane. He is tapping his cane. The thugs approach Peter and Rocky Bynes. Gym Thug #1: “You must be the famous blind body builder.” Peter: “I am.” A thug punches Peter. Peter smacks that thug with his walking cane. Rocky: “I am arresting you men for battery.” The other thugs come up to the Bynes cousins. Rocky Bynes throws a punch on another thug. Those thugs go to beat up on the Bynes cousins. The 2 cousins fight back. All those men are beating each other up. A thug grabs the towel from Peter Bynes. Peter Bynes only 75% blind can find this thug’s eyebrow piercing. Peter: “I might be blind but I am blind by 75% meaning that I can see by 25%. I know which eyebrow that you have pierced.” He yanks it off. Gym Thug #2: “You jerk. You ripped the earing off my eyebrow.” That thug tries to throw a punch on him. Peter grabs his hand. He throws that thug to the ground. Rocky pulls out his cell phone. He calls his work place. Rocky: “Hello. This is Rocky Bynes. I at a nearby gym. I am with cousin Peter. I will need back. I arrested members of the gang called the Tattoos. They are under arrest for battery.” Rocky pulls out his hand gun on those thugs. Rocky is calling for back up.

Later on outside. There is Captain Brinkman and his officers. They have those tattooed or pierced thugs in this office. There is a truck to take away those thugs. Peter Bynes and his cousin Rocky show up. Rocky meets with his Captain. Captain Brinkman: “I think that we know who is their leader. I suspect that it is someone named William Norton.” Rocky: “I’ll find out.”

Scene 3

Later on at night time at the apartment of Rocky Bynes. There is Rocky with his wife and daughter and son. His wife’s name is Christine. His son’s name is Max. His daughter’s name is Megan. They are sitting on the couch in the living room. Christine: “Rocky. You are on television.” They have on the television. There is something on about the gymnasium fight. Newscaster: “Early this after Police officer Rocky Bynes on his day off of work was at the gym with his blind cousin Peter. Peter and Rocky Bynes dealt with gangs in the gymnasium. Rocky Bynes arrested them for attacking his cousin and himself.”

Scene 4

The next day at NY PD headquarters. There is Rocky Bynes in the office of Captain Brinkman. They are meeting up. Captain Brinkman: “Rocky. You are being promoted to detective. I think that we found out the boss of the Russian mob. We even found where our Neo Nazis are headquartered in New York City.” Rocky is promoted to Detective.

Scene 5

In the squad room. There are many men and women in the NY PD there. Detective Rocky Bynes and Captain Brinkman enter the squad room. They have pictures of things. Rocky: “I have pictures of our criminal leaders. We are after Russian mobsters, Neo Nazis and a criminal gang called The Tattoos.” There is a briefing about a criminal war in New York City. They show pictures. The first picture is Russian mob boss Steven Olsen. Captain Brinkman: “This person here in the picture is Steven Olsen. He is the Russian mob boss. We know where the turf is of those Russian mobsters.” Captain Brinkman shows the second picture. It is Neo Nazi leader Glen Smith. Captain Brinkman: “This person in the picture is Neo Nazi leader Glen Smith. He claims that he is bringing peace to the world by eliminating the Jewish religious once and for all. He is the Adolph Hitler of New York City.” Now Captain Brinkman shows the next picture it is William Norton leader of a gang called the Tattoos. He has tattoos all over his arms. Captain Brinkman: “This tattooed man here is William Norton. He runs the gang called the tattoos. The gangs all have certain tattoos to mark them members of his gang. Many of them also have piercings. Yuck.” Rocky: “I am now a detective. I just got promoted. I will be working with you people.” Captain Brinkman: “Let’s get up and start trying to catch them now.” They all get up.

Scene 6

Flash back to Linkin a few years ago. There is a war going on in the streets of Linkin. There is Jack Brill with Quentin Quinlan. They are taking over Linkin. There is Marco Maroon leading the gang. There are cops out on the streets too. They are fighting the gangs in a gun fight. All those thugs have tattoos or piercings. A couple of the women gang members have pierced bellybuttons. Quinlan: “General Hodger. As I am declaring martial law go out there with your troops and destroy the gangs.” Some gang members are being killed in battle. The gangs starts shooting at the military. The leader Marco Maroon is starting to flee with small guns in his hands. General Hodger: “I am going after him.” Brill: “I am getting domination. I have Linkin now. Without those gangs I will bring fourth peace to Linkin.” General Hodger goes in pursuit of him. The rest of the gang members throw down their weapons.

Somewhere else on the streets of Linkin. There is Marco Maroon. General Hodger is behind his back. Marco Maroon opens fire on the tyrannical general. Maroon: “Die you general!” General Hodger shoots Marco Maroon 3 times. Marco Maroon falls dead.

One week later at a trial for the gang members in a court yard. There is General Hodger with his soldiers. All those men and women in the gangs who survived that are tattooed or pierced are brought fourth to be placed under firing squads. There is General Hodger’s soldiers. Jack Brill and Quentin Quinlan are at the trial. Brill: “Bring out the sentence General Hodger.” General Hodger: “Those felons before you have been found guilty of gang activity and terrorist acts. They are this day to be placed under a firing squad. They have what are now illegal fashions.” All those thugs are brought to the post. General Hodger: “Open fire!” All those soldiers fire on those thugs. They are all dead. Quinlan: “I have had all those tattoo parlors raided Mr. Brill.” Brill: “Good. There will be no more tattoos and body piercings on Linkin.”

Scene 7

Back to New York City in the near future. At the turf of Neo Nazis. There is Glen Smith there with his gang. There are pictures of Adolph Hitler. They are having a Nazi rally. Glenn Smith: “The black people and the Jewish people have been trying to take over New York City. What are we going to do to them?” All Neo Nazis: “We are going to get rid of them.” Smith: “This is cleaning the ethnics of New York City. Only white people will live there.” Detective Rocky Bynes with his captain and other officers burst into the Smith building. Rocky: “NY PD. Give your selves up.” The Neo Nazis pull out their guns. Captain Brinkman, Rocky Bynes and his officers get into a gun fight with the Neo Nazis. Rocky Bynes kills a few Neo Nazis. A cop gets shot on the shoulder. Rocky: “No. Someone cover the officer down.” NY PD officer: “Hello. We are at the Neo Nazi’s building. We need an ambulance. An officer has been shot.” Another radios for an ambulance. The leader gets away. Rocky fights a gun fight with another Neo Nazi thug. Rocky: “I’ll go after Glenn Smith.”

Scene 8

At a nearby ally. There is Glenn Smith fleeing. There is gang leader William Norton. He has a knife. Norton: “You are the Neo Nazi leader.” Glenn Smith pulls out a gun. Smith: “I will burn your tattoos just as I kill you.” William Norton cuts the Neo Nazi leader with his blade. William Norton vanishes. Later on Rocky Bynes shows up with Captain Brinkman. They find the Neo Nazi leader dead. The 2 cops have their guns drawn. Rocky: “It looks like that Someone with tattoos killed him.” Captain Brinkman: “I had to have been Norton and his gang. In the World War 2 era Nazis would rip off body piercings.” Rocky: “My cousin Peter in another dimension freed people from fascism a few years ago. He defeated this deadly dictator there. He fought against the tyrannical soldiers teaming up with a rebellion there.”

Scene 9

At a restaurant in New York City. There are several Russian mobsters seated at a table with the boss Steven Olsen. They have wine glasses with them at the table. There are people in the background serving the tables. Olsen: “The Neo Nazis in New York City are dead. The survivors all got arrested. We get to kill gang leader William Norton. He trashed our turf.”

Scene 10

Later on at the turf of the Russian mobsters. There is Steven Olsen with his gang.

Outside there is Detective Rocky Bynes in his car driving by. The building has spray painted messages written by the gang. He finds the turf of The Russian mobsters. He parks his car somewhere. He gets out of his car. Other cop cars are behind him. Captain Brinkman parks his car somewhere. Captain Brinkman gets out of his car. All those cops draw their guns. Captain Brinkman: “You men follow my lead. I’ll split up from the rest of you. We should catch Olsen and his gang in the building.”

Inside the Russian mob headquarters. Pan back to the Russian mob lead by Steven Olsen. The Russian mob boss suspects intruders. Olsen: “There are intruders here. The police are after us. There is Captain Brinkman and his officers. Go kill them.” He sends a bunch of his men with guns to the downstairs part of his building.

In the lobby of the Russian mob’s headquarters. There is Rocky Bynes and his officers. Rocky: “Police. Nobody move or we will shoot.” The Russian mobsters open fire. Rocky Bynes and his officers fire back. It’s a gun fight. Another officer in the gun fight gets hit on the arm. Rocky: “You here cover that injured officer.” That Russian mobster is shot and killed by Rocky Bynes. Captain Brinkman heads to the office of the Russian mob boss. He pulls out his gun. A Russian mobsters shoots at Captain Brinkman. Captain Brinkman shoots that Russian mobster killing him. Rocky Bynes kills 3 more Russian mobsters. Other officers in the gun fight kill some more Russian mobsters. Other Russian mobsters thrown down their guns.

In the office of Russian mob boss Steven Olsen. Captain Brinkman bursts in with gun drawn. There are mobsters in charges. There are also bodyguards there too. Captain Brinkman aims his gun at all of them. Captain Brinkman: “All of you put your guns down. You are under arrest Olsen. You and your men in charge for alleged organized crime.” The mob body guards throw down their guns. Captain Brinkman puts his handcuffs on Russian mob boss Steven Olsen. Other officers show up. Rocky Bynes also shows up. Rocky: “The rest of them gave up. We have another officer down. We called for help on the officer down.”

Scene 11

Later on there is a prison van to take away those Russian mobsters. There is Rocky Bynes with Captain Brinkman. Captain Brinkman: “Didn’t your cousin go to another dimension when he was in the sewers with some friends?” Rocky: “What he told about that there was an accident that threw him through the portal into another dimension. He told me that a young lady lead a resistance. They won their freedom. The rebel leaders father became the new ruler of the land. He threw this dictator out of the window. The place was also under martial law.”

Scene 12

Later on at gang turf. There is William Norton with his gang. There are many younger females and males in his gang. 4 of the women gang members have pierced bellybuttons. They have various cars there too. Norton: “I will go look for Peter Bynes. He works out at his famous gym in New York City. You people could shoot up the city.” They all depart.

Scene 13

At the gymnasium. There is Peter Bynes there. He is doing curls. William Norton shows up in the gymnasium with some other thugs of his. Peter Bynes is done with the curls. He puts down the weights. Peter picks up his walking cane. William Norton approaches Peter Bynes. Norton throws a punch on Peter. Norton: “You’re the one who got my thugs that were here put in jail.” Peter: “Your thugs attacked my cousin and I.” Norton: “I am William Norton just in case you couldn’t see me.” Peter throws a punch back. The 2 men are beating each other up. They are throwing punches on each other. William Norton throws Peter Bynes to the weight bench. Norton and his gang leave. Peter: “One of you. Call the police.” Someone else in the gym gets onto his cell phone and calls the police.

Scene 14

Somewhere else in New York City. There are many people on the streets of New York. A car is going by carrying the gang members. One of them in the back is a woman. They all pull out guns as the windows are rolled down. They open fire. A few pedestrians are hit. Other people dive for cover. The car is going down the streets. The shooting is going on. Allot of windows on buildings are damaged to the shootings.

Scene 15

Later on there is the police. There are police cars parked with flashing red lights on. There is also yellow tape on the street. There are paramedic vehicles there too. There is Captain Brinkman with homicide detectives. Another car shows up. There is Rocky Bynes giving his cousin Peter a ride. Peter Rocky Bynes get out of the car. Peter is carrying his blind man’s walking cane. Captain Brinkman: “Detective Bynes. We had a few people killed in the drive by shooting. They were young people. A few boys and a girl were killed. Other people were laid down in fear.” Bynes: “This must be the work of William Norton. My cousin was also in the gym where he works out was attacked by Norton.”


Scene 16

At the home of Peter Bynes the next day. There is Peter Bynes in the kitchen. He has his cousin Rocky with him and Rocky’s wife and kids. Christine: “Did you catch the tattoos gang yet?” Rocky: “No. but we caught some members at the gym when they attacked Peter here.” Peter: “I fought with them. I arrested Steven Olsen. William Norton killed Glen Smith the Neo Nazi leader.” Megan: “I got an A+ in school today.” Max: “Did anyone die in the shooting?” Rocky: “Yes. Some young men and a girl were killed. I am after them.”

Outside there is William Norton and his thugs. There are those men and women. One of the women has a navel piercing. They pull out guns. Norton: “He should be coming out right here. You can shoot him.” The gang leader vanishes.

Back inside. There is Rocky Bynes looking out the window. He sees gang members. Members of The Tattoos. Rocky pulls out his gun. He goes outside. Rocky: “You all stay here. We are in danger.” Max: “What is going on Dad?” Rocky: “There are members of the Tattoos out there. Peter call the police.”

Outside. There are the gang members. Rocky comes out. Rocky sees them. He has his gun aimed at them. Rocky: “Police. Freeze. Put the guns down now.” They open fire. Rocky fires back. Rocky kills the woman with a pierced navel. 2 more are shot and killed by Rocky. The gun fighting is going on.

Back inside. Peter is walking over to the phone tapping his walking cane. He gets to the phone. He calls for backup. Peter: “Hello. I need the police. There is a gang outside. They have guns. My cousin needs back up. It’s Peter Bynes.”

Back outside. The gun fighting is going on. Rocky kills the rest of the thugs in the gun fight. Later on the police show up. There are also paramedics.

Scene 17

Later on in the day at gang turf outside. There is William Norton with the rest of his gang. They are partying. There are some thugs with guns. The police show up with a SWAT team van. Also Rocky’s car shows up. There is also Captain Brinkman who shows up in his car. Rocky has his cousin Peter with him. Peter is to testify against Norton for attacking him in the gymnasium. They get out of the car. Rocky: “Peter. You stay by the car. I’ll go deal with the gang.” Captain Brinkman too gets out of his squad car. They all pull out guns. The SWAT team officers get out of their truck too. Other gang members pick up uzis. Captain Brinkman: “This is the NY PD. You are all under arrest.” They open fire on the NY PD. They get into a gun fight with the SWAT team. Rocky Bynes and Captain Brinkman also get into a gun fight with the gang. Others without guns go up to Peter Bynes. They have their hands and chains. The men and women with chains swing them at Peter. Peter smacks them with his walking cane. Peter: “I don’t see much but I do know how to detect danger.” William Norton pulls out his revolver. He gets into battle too. He shoots Captain Brinkman somewhere on the arm. Another officer stays down to help Captain Brinkman. Captain Brinkman: “I’ll be fine. It’s not too much of a fatal wound.” This officer gets onto his CB while Rocky fires on William Norton. SWAT team officer: “We are the turf of the tattoos. He have an officer down. I need an ambulance.” Norton fires a few shots on Rocky. He fires 2 more on the SWAT team. Norton starts fleeing. Other gang members in the background attack Peter. Peter bangs them into each other. He bowls over the rest. Rocky: “You could help me catch Norton. He’s out of ammo.” He and Rocky split up going after the gang leader William Norton. Some gang members with guns are being killed by the SWAT team.

Scene 18

Somewhere else on gang turf. There is William Norton fleeing. There is Rocky with his gun drawn. Peter is on the other side not being seen by William Norton. Norton sees Rocky. Rocky: “You are under arrest.” Norton: “I’m out of here.” Norton starts running. Rocky Bynes sees William Norton. He throws a punch on him. Norton throws a punch back onto Peter. Peter: “I’ll help my cousin Rocky take you down. You attacked me at the gym. It’s pay back time.” Rocky jumps on Norton. Rocky: “You are under arrest. Give yourself up.” Norton throws a punch back onto Rocky. Norton: “Never.” Rocky and Norton beat each other up. Peter smacks Norton with his blind man’s walking cane. Norton clobbers Peter. Rocky throws a punch back to Norton. Peter with his walking cane trips Norton. Rocky gets on top of Norton. Rocky put his handcuffs on the gang leader. Rocky: “You are under arrest for murder, vandalism, attempted murder and resisting arrest.”

Scene 19

Later On. There is an ambulance for Captain Brinkman. He is being carried away in a stretcher. Captain Brinkman: “I should make for their trial. I saw that you caught Norton with your cousin’s help.” Rocky and Peter Bynes return with William Norton in handcuffs. There is also the SWAT team with a prison truck. All those surviving gang members are being loaded into the prison truck. William Norton is being loaded into the prison truck with his surviving thugs. Norton: “I want my lawyer. I’ll be out by next week.” Rocky: “The heck you won’t.” The women will go to the women’s prison. The ambulance carrying Captain Brinkman leaves for the hospital. Peter and Rocky Bynes get into the car. They drive off.

Scene 20

6 Days later in the court room. There is the judge at the stand. At the trial there is Peter and Rocky Bynes. There is the gang captured by Rocky Bynes and his officers. There is William Norton in the court room. There are also many witnesses in the court room. Judge: “William Norton. You have been charged with murder, attempted murder, vandalism and resisting arrest. You are responsible for this drive by shooting. The court finds William Norton and his thugs guilty. William Norton you will be sentenced to life in prison. Your gang will be sentenced 10 years in prison. Bailiffs take them away.” The men in uniforms take away all of the prisoners.

Scene 21

Outside of the court room. There is a prison truck there to transport the prisoners. The Bynes cousins come outside of the court room. Norton: “You’ll pay for this you blind body builder. I’ll one day get out and kill you and your cousin.” The men in uniforms are taking the prisoners to separate trucks. There are 2 women being transferred to a truck for the woman’s prison. The others are put onto a prison truck to take them to The Tombs. Peter: “Is this over?” Rocky: “Someone is going to take over this criminal gang and I will be there to stop them. This is only the beginning of the war in New York City.” Rocky and Peter get into the car. Rocky drives off on the road in patrol.

End

The New World Of New York

Plot Summary: New York City was destroyed by gangs called The Tattoos. A man named Kirk English takes over. His 2nd in command is named Brett Baxter. There is General Williams who leads this military in New York City. New York City is under marital law. Freedom is outlawed. Fads such as tattoos and body piercings and many other types of fads are punishable by firing squad. Randal Bynes who is descended cousin of Peter Bynes is a deputy sheriff in New York City. A deputy of the tyrannical sheriff Blane. There is General Osborne who leads this tyrannical military. The resistance is lead by the Jones brothers. There is Michael Jones and Jonathan Jones. In the resistance there is also Jacob Harrison. Deputy Bynes could end up joining the rebellion.

Scene 1

Beginning

Introduction and Opening Credits

Title Card: New York In the future

Scene 2

On the streets of New York City in the day time. There are several gang members that are females and males. They have guns. They are shooting the streets of New York City. The leader is Max Hiller. All those thugs have tattoos or piercings. Max Hiller has tattoos all over his body. There are people diving in fear. The gangs are destroying buildings. Many windows are being broken. Max Hiller: “Let’s take New York City. No one messes with the Tattoos gang.”

Somewhere else on the streets of New York City. There is the car with the Sheriff and his deputy Randal Bynes. Randal is driving the car. Sheriff Blane is riding shot gun. Randal is driving down the streets. There is a call over the radio about the gang attacks on Southern Manhattan. Radio Dispatcher (OS): “All available units. There is an attack down the street of Southern Manhattan. There is the Tattoos gang shooting up the street.” The sheriff answers the radio. Blane: “This is the Sheriff here. We’ll cover that.” The deputy drives down to this street. The Sheriff pulls out his gun. The car goes on Auto Drive. Randal Bynes now pulls out his gun.

Scene 3

Back to the gangs. The shooting is going on. The other gang members are bashing stuff on the streets of New York City. The Sheriff’s car shows up. So do cars from the New York City police department show up. Max Hiller: “Cops!” All those cars park somewhere down the street. All those cops get out of their cars. They all have guns drawn. Officer Randal Bynes of the Sheriff’s department aims his gun at Max Hiller and his gang. Randal: “Police and Sheriff’s Department. Don’t any of you move or I will shoot.” All the other cops have their guns aimed at the gang. The Tattoos members and leader open fire on the cops. The cops fire back. Randal Bynes kills some gang members in the gun fight. Blane: “Drop the gun. You are under arrest.” One thug shoots at Sheriff Blane. Sheriff Blane shoots that thug. Some other cops are killed or wounded in the gun fight as they are shot down. Sheriff Blane goes over to the wounded officers. Blane: “You deputy Bynes deal with the thugs. I will deal with the officers down.” Deputy Bynes is fired on by a woman in the gang who has a navel piercing. Deputy Bynes fires back. He shoots that woman in the chest. There are gang members with guns running down the streets. Other NY PD officers go after them. Randal puts away his gun. Randal: “You are all under arrest.” He pulls out his baton. He goes after other gang members too. Max Hiller: “Get him. Trash him.” Some gang members with baseball bats run up to the deputy sheriff. They swing baseball bats at him. He blocks them with his baton. He throws a punch on a gang member. Another one that is a male with a pierced nipple throws a punch on the deputy sheriff. The deputy sheriff throws a punch back. He grabs that man’s nipple piercing. He rips it off. Male Gang Member #1: “Hey. You ripped off my nipple ring. Now I will kick your butt.” He knocks that thug down. He trips 3 more with his baton. Deputy Bynes sees Max Hiller the gang leader. He runs after him. Max Hiller: “I’m out of here.” The Tattoos leader starts running. The deputy sheriff starts running after the gang leader. He chases him down the street. Randal jumps on Max Hiller. Max Hiller throws a kick on Deputy Randal Bynes. Max Hiller: “Get off of me.” The Deputy Sheriff throws a punch back onto the gang leader. They are beating each other up. Max Hiller jumps onto the lamp post. He swings on it throwing a double kick onto the deputy sheriff. The deputy sheriff throws a kick onto the gang leader’s ankle. He trips the gang leader. Randal pulls out a pair of hand cuffs. He puts them on the gang lead. Randal: “You are under arrest for endangering innocent lives, assaulting an officer and resisting arrest.”

Scene 4

Later on there is a prison truck. There are some ambulances. They take away the wounded or dead cops. There is Sheriff Blane with his officers and Deputy Bynes. They have Max Hiller taken prisoner. Blane: “There is someone who could bring peace to New York City. He could end this war.” Randal: “Who is this person?” Blane: “He is Kirk English. He could run New York.”

Scene 5

At the Empire State Building at night time. There is Kirk English with his assistant Brett Baxter. There is a tyrannical military taking over New York. There is General Osborne. Sheriff Blane and Deputy Randal Bynes are present. They all meet up. English: “Deputy Bynes. I am Kirk English. I now run New York. Your grandfather Rocky was a cop here years ago.” Brett Baxter: “I am Brett Baxter who is associate to Mr. English over here.” English: “Sheriff Blane. Deputy Sheriff Bynes. This man here is General Osborne. He runs a military that could take over New York. I will declare marital law.” General Osborne: “You Sheriff Blane and Deputy Bynes could join my military. Come with me outside. I will show you something.” There is also General Osborne’s soldiers. There are the prisoners taken by the Sheriff’s department. They are Max Hiller with some other men and women. The soldiers have their guns ready. They escort Max Hiller and his gang to the outside. There are troops with their big guns.

Scene 6

Somewhere else at the exterior of the Empire State Building. There is General Osborne with his soldiers. There is Sheriff Blane and Deputy Randal Bynes. General Osborne: “I have the gangs here. Under my martial law tattoos and body piercings will be illegal. Most kinds of fads are illegal. They will be punishable by firing squad. People with tattoos or piercings are considered thugs. I have the criminals that you captured right here.” Randal: “My descended cousin Peter was killed in gang violence. He was 75 percent blind.” The general has the gang lead by Max Hiller placed to a post. General Osborne: “Max Hiller and his gang have been found guilty of attacking New York City. They are this day to be fired on. Soldiers shoot him.” The soldiers have their guns ready. The soldiers fire on Max Hiller and this thugs. They are killed. General Osborne: “You 2 could start training now.” Blane: “I am a sheriff. I worked with people in the military.” General Osborne: “Then I could make you Blane a commander.”

Scene 7

At Central Park the next few days. There is Kirk English with his assistant Brett Baxter. General Osborne is there with his soldiers. The sheriff and his deputy Bynes are new to this Tyrannical military. There are many citizens gathered together at Central Park. Kirk English is making a speech. There are fads outlawed. English: “On this day fourth I am declaring martial law on New York after all those gang attacks. All of you tattooed or pierced must remove your tattoos or piercings. If not then you will be killed. Most other fads are illegal here in New York. I am your new leader now.” Brett Baxter: “If any of you speak out against us you will be killed. Simple. You people tattooed or pierced are considered thugs. Our military will look out for tattoos and body piercings.”

Scene 8

Title Card: 5 years later

In the Sewer systems in the day time. There is a freedom fighting band. The Jones brothers Michael and Jonathan are leading the rebellion. Jonathan Jones has various tattoos on his body. Also in the resistance is Jacob Harrison who is older. He has a mustache. He is muscular. Then there is a young girl named Melissa Weber. She is a beautiful girl with long blonde hair. She has some small tattoos and a pierced bellybutton. She has a short shirt showing her bellybutton to show her bellybutton ring. There are a bunch of young men and women with tattoos or piercings. Most of the rebels are tattooed or pierced. Very few including Jacob Harrison have no tattoos or piercings. Melissa: “Some friends of mine are going for tattoos.” Michael: “They have got to look out for military. We want to get rid of marital law. This is oppressing us. I want to take over the military.” Jonathan: “I believe that a blind body builder was in another realm with a society like this. I think that he might’ve ended this dictatorship.” Jacob Harrison: “You are referring to Peter Bynes. He was killed long ago in a battle with the gangs. His cousin was a New York City cop.” Melissa: “His descended cousin is with this fascist military. We have got to try to get him on our side. Explain his descended cousin named Peter and what he did in another realm years ago.”

Scene 9

At the Empire State building at Nighttime. In the office of Kirk English. There is Brett Baxter there too. Also in the office there is General Osborne. They are consulting in there. English: “General Osborne. There is a tattoo parlor on the opposite side of Times Square. I will need you to raid it.” General Osborne: “Yes. I will bring my soldiers to there. I will destroy the place.” English: “Good. There might be resistance there getting tattoos.”

Scene 10

The next day at a tattoo parlor. There are tattooists in there. A few of them are women. One is a man at the desk. He has tattoos all over his arms. One of the women is wearing a midriff revealing her top. She has some tattoos right there. Another one has on a short shirt. She has a navel piercing. Male tattoo parlor employee: “We might have the military coming after us. I have a gun here. I’ll stop them.” There are some young men and women. Male Tattoo Parlor Rebel #1: “We are here for some tattoos and piercings.” Female Tattoos Parlor Rebel #1: “I have come here to get my tongue pierced.” Male Tattoo Parlor Employee: “Come right this way. We have some women here who will give you your tattoos. Show us the tattoos that you want.”

Outside somewhere near this tattoo parlor in New York City. There is General Osborne with his soldiers. There is also Commander Blane the former sheriff. Also there we see Corporal Randal Bynes. There are many soldiers there too. General Osborne: “We have some rebels in there as my senses tell me. You men go in there on the count of 3.” The soldiers ready their guns. General Osborne: “1, 2, 3.” Commander Blane, Corporal Bynes and their soldiers burst into the tattoo parlor.

Back inside the Tattoos Parlor in New York City. A young woman is getting her tongue pierced. The soldiers burst in. A person sitting at the desk pulls out a gun. Commander Blane shoots that person in the tattoo parlor. All those soldiers have their guns aimed. Blane: “You are all under arrest for possessing fads.” Randal: “You all get down on your knees and place your hands above you heads.” Some other customers pull out guns. They open fire on the military. Randal Bynes shoots back with his soldiers. There is a gun fight going on. This girl getting her tongue pierced pulls out a knife. She is dashing at Corporal Bynes with it. Randal shoots her. She falls dead. Corporal Bynes captures some other women that are employees in the place as they go for guns. He aims his gun at them. Randal: “Don’t even try it or I will shoot.” Woman Tattooist #1: “He might shoot us anyways.” They put their hands in the air. All other rebels in there throw down their guns. They are all captured. They are all escorted to the outside.

Later on there is General Osborne. General Osborne: “You soldiers of mine have captured them. Now I have you soldiers shoot down the tattoo parlor. Shoot down the signs.” He has his soldiers shoot down the tattoo parlor in New York City.

Scene 11

In the Underground at Night Time. There is the Jones brothers Michael and Jonathan with Melissa. There is also Jacob Harrison. Jonathan: “It looks like that some friends of your’s were killed Melissa in the tattoo parlor raid.” Melissa: “I had a friend getting her tongue pierced.” Michael: “I believe that she is dead.” Melissa: “This is like Adolph Hitler and his act of fascism.” Michael: “Hitler was against tattoos and piercings because he considered them insane. That’s only if he knew about them.” Jacob Harrison: “Body piercings got really big in the 1990’s. They weren’t recent. They just weren’t too well known to the axis.”

Scene 12

At the Courtyard outside of the Empire State building. There is a trial going on. There is General Osborne with his soldiers. There is also Randal Bynes with Commander Blane the former sheriff. There are the captured resistance members. Also in the background there is Kirk English and his right hand man Brett Baxter. The soldiers are bringing the prisoners up to a post. English: “Carry out the sentence General Osborne.” There is General Osborne’s soldiers. The prisoners are placed to their posts. General Osborne: “It is known this day that those felons here have gotten tattoos and piercings and also putting them on other people. They are this day to be fired on dead. Ready. Aim.” The soldiers draw beads on the prisoners. General Osborne (continued): “Fire!” The soldiers all shoot the prisoners. They all fall dead. The soldiers go to pick up their dead prisoner bodies. Brett Baxter: “Let’s have their piercings burned up.”

Scene 13

The next day in the underground resistance hideout. There is the rebellion. There is Jacob Harrison. There is Michael and Jonathan Jones with Melissa Weber. Michael: “I will need you Jake to help at Madison Square Garden to capture Corporal Bynes. We have to talk him into joining us. Inform him of his descended cousin named Peter.” Jonathan: “You Melissa could go with the 4 of you people there too.” Melissa Weber and Jacob Harrison with rebel fighters leave the sewers to go to Madison Square Garden.

Scene 14

Later on at the office of Kirk English in the Empire State building. There is Kirk English with his associate Brett Baxter. With them are General Osborne, Commander Blane and Corporal Randal Bynes. English: “I had you men back into here because I think I have found some resistance fighters at Madison Square Garden. There is Jacob Harrison with Melissa Weber and some other people that she is friends with. General Osborne. Bring Corporal Bynes to the computer screen and show him.” The general brings Randal to the computer screen. They are pin pointing some resistance fighters are Madison Square Garden. General Osborne: “They are somewhere in the Garden. You Corporal Bynes are on your own with some soldiers. Capture them and then we will place them under firing squads.” The Corporal leaves with some of his soldiers.

At Madison Square Garden Somewhere. There is Jacob Harrison with Melissa Weber. There is also 3 men and a woman in the resistance. There are at the former hockey rink. Jacob Harrison: “I’ll take over as leader when we over throw Kirk English. I’ll surprise the Corporal and we’ll talk to him.”

Outside Madison Square Garden. There is Corporal Bynes with his soldiers. Randal draws his hand gun. Other soldiers are carrying bigger guns. Randal: “I think that they might be at the hockey rink. You troops need to split up from me. I’ll search the hockey rink.” The corporal splits up with his soldiers.

Randal Bynes is searching Madison Square Garden with a gun in the hand. Randal Bynes goes over to the former Hockey Rink. Randal: “Come on out where ever you are.”

Scene 15

Somewhere by the former hockey rink. There is the rebels detecting military there. They sense Corporal Randal Bynes. Randal has his gun drawn. Randal shows up. The rebels are hiding somewhere. Jacob Harrison jumps onto Randal Bynes. Randal Bynes looks for this rebel with his gun in the hand. Randal: “Alright. No more games. You are under arrest. You people have violated our martial law.” Jacob Harrison grabs Randal Bynes by the arm. Jacob Harrison throws punches onto Randal Bynes. Jacob Harrison so strong grabs this soldier and throws him to the ground. Jacob Harrison: “I got him.” Other rebels come out with Melissa. Melissa pulls out her gun. Melissa and other rebels have their guns aimed at Randal Bynes. Melissa: “Don’t move. We want to talk to you.” Randal: “You are all under arrest. You are thugs.” Melissa: “We are not thugs. We just want freedom. I heard about your descended cousin named Peter who was blind.” Randal: “I never heard much about him in another realm. I know what you are thinking.” Jacob Harrison: “There was this kind of fascism in a realm know as Linkin. Peter ended this dictatorship there. He help the rebels win their freedom. Peter wouldn’t want you in this kind of fascism. You could join us.” Randal: “I think that I will. They might find me after my acts of treason.” The rebels give Randal his gun back. They leave the area. Jacob Harrison draws his gun too. Somewhere else at Madison Square Garden. The other soldiers show up. MSG soldier #1: “I thought that you got attacked.” Randal: “I was. They might’ve gotten away.” Randal Bynes aims his gun at them. Randal: “Put your guns down. I am helping the Jones brothers against Mr. English. This is an act of fascism.” MSG soldier #2: “You are committing treason. I will shoot you.” Those soldiers open fire. Randal fires back. 6 of the rebels fire back. There’s a gun fight between the rebellion and tyrannical military. Randal kills a soldier. Melissa then kills a soldier. 2 male rebels are killed in battle. Randal kills one of those soldiers that killed a rebel. Another one is killed by Jacob Harrison. Randal: “I’ll collect some guns. You have got to show me your hideout.” Jacob Harrison: “Yes. But don’t tell your general.” Randal collects some guns from those tyrannical soldiers. They all leave Madison Square Garden.

Later on in the underground hideout of the rebels. The leaders Michael and Jonathan Jones. Melissa Weber, Jacob Harrison and a couple of other rebels come back. They bring corporal Randal Bynes with them. All those other men and women in the resistance aim their guns at Randal Bynes. Michael: “Are you crazy? This is a fascist soldier. You haven’t betrayed us. You aren’t any of them infiltrating my rebellion.” Jacob Harrison: “I am not in the military. This is the descended cousin of Peter Bynes. So lower your weapons.” Jacob Harrison has them lower their weapons. They lower their weapons. Randal: “My descended cousin Peter was killed by gangs. My grandfather retired too. He killed those who killed Peter.”

Scene 16

At the office of Kirk English at night time. There is Kirk English at his desk. General Osborne shows up in his office. General Osborne: “My report to you Mr. English is that I had rebels who got away. My soldiers were killed at Madison Square Garden. Also I suspect treason in my military.” English: “Go and find out. I think that it’s Corporal Bynes. Got find out.” The tyrannical general leaves the dictator’s office.

Scene 17

The next day at Times Square. There is Randal Bynes walking down the street with Melissa Weber. Randal: “I was a deputy sheriff before marital law on New York.” Melissa: “I want the freedom for tattoos. I want to be free to get my bellybutton pierced. The military might be after me anyways for my tattoos and pierced bellybutton. There are even after me for the clothes that I am wearing.” Randal: “We are. I could just kill English.” There is Commander Blane with his soldiers. They have big guns. They are after Melissa Weber. Blane: “I think that it is Corporal Bynes who has betrayed us. I see him with a rebel. A woman who has a pierced bellybutton. She has some tattoos. Let’s go bag them.” They found her somewhere on the streets of New York.

At a nearby alley. There is Melissa Weber and Randal Bynes kissing. Commander Blane shows up with his soldiers. Commander Blane has Randal Bynes with Melissa Weber captured. Blane: “Corporal Bynes. Melissa Weber. You are under arrest.” Randal: “You could just join us. This is fascism. You could turn your back on English.” Blane: “You are charged with treason Corporal. I will have you placed under a firing squad.” The soldiers aim their guns at the 2. They are put in handcuffs.

Scene 18

Later on at the office of Kirk English in the Empire State building. There is Kirk English at his desk. Brett Baxter walks in with Commander Blane. There are some soldiers taking Randal Bynes prisoner. They show him to the leader. Blane: “This soldier here has betrayed us. He claims that his cousin was in a society like this in another realm and killed a dictator there. What do you want done with him?” English: “I’ll have him placed under a firing squad. He was even making out with a rebel. We’ll kill them both.” Randal: “Body piercings don’t make people thugs. I won’t even tell you the hideout.” Brett Baxter: “We don’t need to know. We are figuring out their hideout. The rest of you will be captured.” Randal: “That was a big mistake to join your fascist military General Osborne.” The leader makes a decision.

Scene 19

Later on in the underground. There are the rebels with their leader brothers. Jacob Harrison goes over to the rebel leader brothers. He goes to give them the NEWS. Jacob Harrison: “Melissa has been captured with Randal. I think that Randal is going to be placed under a firing squad with her. Randal one time ripped out a nipple piercing off of a gang member who attacked him.” Jonathan: “Let’s go save him then. When’s their execution?” Jacob Harrison: “It’s tomorrow.” Michael: “We have got to stop this tomorrow.”

The next day at the court yard. There is Melissa Weber and Peter Bynes taken prisoner. They are being escorted by many soldiers.

Somewhere else by the empire state building. There is the resistance. There are the Jones brothers and Jacob Harrison. Jacob Harrison: “I’ll take Baxter the right hand man. What are you going to do Michael and Jonathan?” Jonathan: “I’ll deal with the general. My brother will deal with the commander and former local sheriff. Let’s go save those 2 love birds.” They all have guns ready. They head to the court yard.

Back at the Court Yard. There are the 2 prisoners being brought to a post. Kirk English and Brett Baxter are on the top of the Empire State Building. The soldiers have their guns ready. General Osborne and Commander Blane are standing there too carrying out the trial. General Osborne: “Melissa Weber here has been found guilty of fads possession. She has small tattoos, short shirts and a pierced bellybutton. She is this day to be placed under a firing squad.” Blane: “Also here Randal Bynes has been found guilty of high treason against us and speaking out against the regime lead by Kirk English. He was making out with a thug. He is this day to be placed under a firing squad.” General Osborne: “Ready.” The soldiers have their guns ready. Jonathan and Michael Jones aim their guns at the soldiers. Jonathan: “Drop the guns.” General Osborne: “Let’s deal with the Jones brothers first. Jacob Harrison is somewhere out here too. Kill those rebels.” Those soldiers fire on the rebels. The gun fight starts there. Michael Jones gets into a gun fight with Commander Blane. Jonathan Jones gets into a gun fight with General Osborne. Other rebels go to free the prisoners. The 2 are given guns by other men and women. They get into a gun fight. Jacob Harrison goes over to Randal Bynes. Jacob Harrison: “Let’s go over to the roof. I’ll take Baxter and you take English. I’ll leave your girlfriend to deal with the tyrannical military. My daughter was killed under the dictatorship of Kirk English. She was killed for having many piercings. Her tongue, her bellybutton, her eye brow and she had multiple earings. She was wearing bagging clothing. Baxter was responsible for her demise last year.” They head for the roof top. Jacob Harrison and Randal are being fired on by some soldiers. They fire back and kill them. They get to inside the building. At the court yard outside The rebels are fighting the tyrannical soldiers. General Osborne and Commander Blane fight alongside their soldiers. The Jones brothers are fighting along side the rebels.

Scene 20

Inside the building. There are soldiers there with big guns. They open fire on Jacob Harrison and Randal Bynes. These 2 men fight back at those soldiers with their guns. Randal Bynes kills a few soldiers. Jacob Harrison kills the rest of those soldiers. Randal: “It’s the rest of them gone.” They head to the roof top.

On the roof top. Jacob Harrison and Randal Bynes go over to the dictator and his right hand man. Jacob Harrison and Brett Baxter get their hands on each other. Jacob Harrison: “You are going to pay for having my daughter killed. What you men are doing is an act of fascism.” Randal Bynes gets into a hand to hand fight with Kirk English. English: “I will kill you for your treason Corporal Bynes.” Brett Baxter throws a punch on Jacob Harrison. Brett Baxter: “You will join your daughter. My even your ex wife will be killed. She spoke out against us.” Randal Bynes throws a kick on Kirk English. It’s a violent hand to hand fight.

Back to the rebel fighters and leader vs. the tyrannical military. In this gun fight Michael Jones kills Commander Blane. The fighting his going on. Melissa kills a solider. 6 rebel fighters are killed in battle. Many other soldiers are being killed. Jonathan Jones kills General Osborne in the gun fight. As the tyrannical general falls dead all those surviving soldiers throw down their guns. They are captured by the rebellion. Michael: “Now you will all sign a surrender and your lives will be spared.” Melissa heads to the roof top. Jonathan: “Where are you going Melissa?” Melissa: “I am going to the rooftop. I am going to help Randal.”

Scene 21

Back on the roof top. Jacob Harrison is finishing off with Brett Baxter. Randal Bynes throws a punch on Kirk English. Brett Baxter chases Jacob Harrison to the edge of the roof. Brett Baxter pulls out his knife. Brett Baxter: “With this knife I will send you to meet with your daughter. She was a thug. Your ex wife is a terrorist and will be executed when she is captured.” Jacob Harrison grabs Brett Baxter by the back. Brett Baxter tries to stab Jacob Harrison. This tough rebel grabs the dictator’s right hand man. He throws him off of the roof falling to his doom. Jacob Harrison: “That was for Emily.” Now English throws some kicks into Randal’s stomach. English: “I’ll have my people replaced with you 2 gone.” He throws him into Jacob Harrison. Randal Bynes and Jacob Harrison on the roof are being stomped on by the dictator. Kirk English pulls out his gun. He points it at the 2 people. English: “This is the high price you pay for treason.” Melissa Weber shows up. Melissa: “English.” Kirk English now goes after Melissa Weber. English: “I will kill you.” Melissa: “It’s over. Your general is dead. So is the commander. You are finished.” Kirk English pulls his gun on Melissa Weber. English: “I’ll kill you for this.” Melissa Weber shoots Kirk English a few times. Kirk English falls dead. Melissa: “This is for some friends of mine.” Randal Bynes and Jacob Harrison get back up. Randal: “Melissa you are there. Joining General Osborne’s military was a stupid mistake that I made. I thought that I was cleaning up New York of gang violence.” Jacob Harrison: “You Randal with me could throw his dead body off of the roof. You grab his head while I grab his legs.” They on both sides grab the dead dictator. They drag him to the edge of the roof top. They both throw his dead body off of the roof top.

Back on the court yard. There is the rebellion watching the dead dictator fall off of the rooftop. They all celebrate. Jonathan: “Yay. We did it. We are now free from tyranny and oppression.”

Scene 22

The next few days at Central Park. Jacob Harrison there. Jacob Harrison is the new Governor of New York. He now runs New York. There is his assistant Jonathan Jones. There is Michael Jones who now runs the military. Also there is Randal Bynes the new Sheriff. There are many cops there too. Also there is Melissa Weber the new girlfriend of Sheriff Randal Bynes. There are many people gathered together at Central Park. There is also the rebel survivors. Jacob Harrison: “I am your new leader now. You people are free to do what you want to do. I couldn’t have overthrown Kirk English here without the help of Randal Bynes.” Randal: “I am now the sheriff. We have the police back. I made a stupid mistake of joining the fascism of Kirk English. He is dead now. We are now free for fads.” Michael: “I am the new general. The sheriff and I could prevent more crimes from taking place here in New York.” Jonathan: “I am the assistant to our leader. I am the attorney general. The constitution is back.”

Scene 23 and end credits

Later on there is Sheriff Randal Bynes with Melissa Weber by a tree. Melissa: “Kirk English could’ve killed us if the military had killed me in battle.” Randal: “Peter Bynes has been avenged. My grandfather is long retired. He moved to Liberty Island.” They are kissing.

End

[demolition18]

The Other World Out There

Vin Diesel (XXX, A Man Apart, The Fast & The Furious) or Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson (WWE wrestler who played in The Rundown and The Scorpion King) as Peter Bynes

Jim Carrey (Ace Ventura movies, Bruce Almighty, The Mask, Batman Forever) as Jack Brill

Hoku (singer who performed the song called Perfect Day from the Reese Witherspoon movie called Legally Blonde) as Amy Henrickson

Harry Connick Jr. (ID4, Copycat) as Quentin Quinlan

Kane Hodder (the actor who played Jason Vorhees in some of the Friday The 13th movies) as General Hodger

Randall "Tex" Cobb (Raising Arizona, Police Academy 4: Citizens on Patrol, Blind Fury) as Roy Mattrick

Dan Ackroyd (The Blues Brothers movies, The Ghostbusters movies) as Jefferson Henrickson

No thoughts on who should play the soldiers, The Female Rebel leader Amy’s mother or friends of Peter Bynes.

The High Crimes in the Worlds

Sean Astin (The Lord of The Rings Trilogy, Encino Man, Rudy) as Officer Rocky Bynes NY PD and cousin to Peter Bynes

Casey Affleck (Soul Survivors) as William Norton NYC gang leader

Vin Diesel (XXX, A Man Apart, The Fast & The Furious) or Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson (WWE wrestler who played in The Rundown and The Scorpion King) as Peter Bynes

Tobin Bell (Best of The Best: Without Warning, Black Mask 2: City of Masks) as Russian Mob Boss Steven Olsen

Jim Belushi (Jingle All The Way, Red Heat) as Neo Nazi leader Glenn Smith

Jim Carrey (The Mask, Ace Ventura Movies, Batman Forever, Bruce Almighty) as Jack Brill

Harry Connick Jr. (ID4, Copycat, Excess Baggage) as Quentin Quinlan

Kane Hodder (the actor who played Jason Vorhees in some of the Friday The 13th movies) as General Hodger & Captain Brinkman

Marco Leonardi (Once Upon A Time In Mexico, From Dusk Till Dawn 3: The Hangman’s Daughter) as Gang Leader Marco Maroon

No thoughts on who should play everyone else like the wife and children of William Norton or various criminals in New York City.

The New World of New York

Eric Bana (The Hulk, Black Hawk Down) as Deputy Sheriff/Corporal Randal Bynes

Treat Williams (Deep Rising, The Phantom) as Kirk English

Melissa Joan Hart (TV’s Sabrina The Teenage Witch) as Melissa Weber

Dan Ackroyd (The Blues Brothers movies, Ghostbusters movies) as Brett Baxter

Hulk Hogan (pro wrestler) as Jacob Harrison rebel fighter

Johnny Depp (A Nightmare on Elm Street, Pirates of the Carribean, Donnie Brasko, Sleepy Hollow) as Jonathan Jones Rebel Leader

Jim Carrey (Ace Venture movies, The Mask, Batman Forever, Bruce Almighty) as Michael Jones Rebel Leader

Geoffery Rush (Pirates of the Carribean: The Curse of the Black Pearl, Mystery Men) as General Osborne

Harry Connnick Jr. (Copy Cat, ID4) as Sheriff Blane/Commander Blane

Rey Mysterio (pro wrestling) as Max Hiller leader of the criminal gang called the Tattoos

Everyone else should be played by unknown actors.

[demolition18]

I am moving the trilogy scripts down to here with the word documents.

The Other World Out There.doc

The High Crimes in The Worlds.doc

The New World Of New York.doc

[dustinzgirl]

Now, I don't want you to take any of this the wrong way, these are just my opinions.

First off, in all the scripts you posted there is a lovely use of cliche action mingled with horrific/sff elements---if this is going to work, you absolutely must pump up the violence and gore. Think Sin City, Grindhouse, Devil's Rejects, Hills Have Eyes, all these are extremely cliche stories but they were great because they made fun of the cliche through the overproduction of lovely darling violence and gore.

Your characters need more flesh. They need substance. They need reason, not just action.

Think of every Steven Segal movie---he wasn't just a military man, he was a family man, a tough guy, a lover, a vindicator of evil. Mix that up with some good old fashioned Evil Dead gore and Rambo violence, and you've got a great flick.

And Vin Diesel is cute and tough, but he is eye-candy. So if you are going to put him in a movie you better have a very strong --- and I mean air tight--- character history or he's just eye candy and then people like me will yawn.


PS: Once again, Hulk Hogan should never be in any movie. EVER. And I've been a hulkamania fan since I was old enough to walk. But his movies suck.

[demolition18]

I have made changes like on the number of chapters and just wrote them as fan scripts. There aren't changes on my fan scripts.

The Other World Out There.doc

The High Crimes in The Worlds.doc

The New World Of New York.doc