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| Sequel bit-3 chicks and a dude fight aliens Sequel bit-3 chicks and a dude fight aliens This is the sequel bit and so forth to a story which was about an era that fought satanic soul enslavers and alien mining contract slavers-the main dude-three sisters are the triumphant ones and after-basically killing satan-this is what is next "and what we've now started speaking about as the dark ages, actually wasn't the first on the three worlds-however emergence is contested by each world-ridiculous as it probably would unravell -in each who is 'logics' mind" "but that probably didn't make much of it for these people,kind people,who've come here to exhume what there is of you're legendary journey" "wrong word,wrong time,-well ok i am fair-best is known to any who should endevour to ask me that,i might rattle for hours over a bitter evil battle of charcoled remains of beans-the sentinel 3,4,-i give a summery,chop off my finger-...but most contritely- it would hold about zero percentage of the pain and truimph and bizarreness of satan,the old man,the wizards magic and my magic and fighting prowess" "oh-let me begin with the portal ceremony?!"Fentesa-raised Tiesa's arm and spoke in a girly voice to overshadow her sister's taking over of my little highly valued treatsie on the fortunes of lore...'to those beyond say-this -some stare-great castle of light'. We finished up -the room abounded with awe,and similarily with that word were they struck -lagging my glances and mingling with the individual by him or her-that are met and greeted.Was it you who saved this world of ours,"oh the sweet laydels of buttery froth and the lamenating of continual free seasons on the spirit";That was inclusively a guess at my outrageousness on their conciousness's. "hey there Henry"-my new name if you are quick of wit you'll understand the patronage connection. "yes good man" "my name is mr. Daltozti,should i continue" "you might"- be it though i was in on the grandeness of his name, normally i might make a bit of a jist-but not this night. "aah-so you're going to not see that connection,i'll give you another bit" "mr Daltozti-Daltoz-mr Daltozti,i'm fairly certain that unless there's some strange block interrupting me i can't recall you" "i had gained the friendship of the alien bonds workers in the mine nearest towne" "oh - that settles that,continue" "there are fealings that a return of the snaincy overlords completely and uncoordinated with a series of evil forces will occur,do you have battle abilities,can we bring our forces of technology and magic to a culminates of artillery might-to defend?!" I'd ever taken this issue up within myself from a mournings waking to a dream or two,but absolute good supremacey had cleared the lands,all lands,but it was just as likely that in the way a reptilian camen preys upon the fish or birds or deer,or baby helpless deer,so does the alien miners seek replenishment again predatorily,an innocence of nature. "i should like to begin a resistance build up as well if you're suggesting such" "much more than that i'm suggesting you endevour to take a spiritual journey to conclude what is the greatest protection Earth might have,on iether end of technological and enchantment within itself" "of course there is the likely help from our brother planets,i like you're idea where should i go to,one of them,or do i have a ceremony"-hopefully including a naked woman catalyst. "it is said Melcore remians-"cutoff by Niombe. "nice try trying to get Fentessa but she wouldn't be affected so much(she winks an eye)" "i'm you're dreams i know why women wink" i replied with what else but a pungent rebuttle-i warned her as i might as she might have gone a-bis- of hainous far fetching to admonish my sarcastic efforts. "hey,love birds we have real business perhaps,Niombe,pleased to meet you(he made a slight curtsy)you should get the two other ladies" "so" "so the ceremony is a simple one in which we will give a piece of your toe flesh,-each participant,that being five me included,then we toast blood filled chalices and sip some then pour the rest out on an artifact not yet in my possesion,-a song of several words and then it will reveal what is our strength and so forth" This was not an unserious man but the whimsicallness of the last bit he said cast some doubts,does this possibly include his turning into an arch devil,does this actually only bare to raise his social status,of course i personally don't feal i'm much of a fool for that ladder,or more in tune with what i really thought,some evil intent. "now if you could read my mind mr Daltozti,that would surely-"i aired at this early juncture-obviousely evil burning and a trap devious to any questors mind. "ah you're thinking damn,it must not include a vital connection with you're first one,ha,ha"Daltozti said looking to the three sisters now virtually before our reposing circle. "he is not!well actually"Niombe said - a fuss said strictly yet playfully the latter as if it ment a force was behind it. "my fealing is that there can be only one true force,it saved us and brought us together before-doesn't it seam premature"Tiesa explained. "i'm willing for any precuations that in turn could stop evil or the aliens from taking over once again!"Fentessa interjected. "i can prepare a detection and warding from evil spell just to be sure mr Daltozti isn't in tune with the unwholly dark one"Niombe "I have that spell too but if yours is prepared,the time to get this ceremony done could be much sooner" i said. "and therefore better and safer for us all"Tiesa said. We made preparations to meet at an abondened factory as most everything was still,at this point,the birth rate of the population however becoming more of a measure against the lack.I wondered if a new handfull of mages and protectors of special enchantments such as myself would come from rising generations.I have thought of training young ones often,but if this ceremony carries me to a different end to prepare Earth then that is how i will go about such ends. It was a foggy morning,usually a sign that a heavy event was in focus.Where will the portal gate land us,i hoped i was prepared on account of suprises,but evil detection from Niombe would help calm me.I approached the old rusty waves of tin door with a dead latch and lock ring and felt the strength of movement of my fresh powerfull body against the chest level latch.One sister,mr Daltozti and chalices were in the center of a dirt floor,ocassionaly clumps of machinery on the outskirts,and an omnipresence potentially completed the scene. "where are the two other lovely paticipants" i hoped to beg an openess in my line. "Fentessa is helping Niombe clean the dagger,mr Daltozti required we make it our artifact"Tiesa said. "my favorite drink should be in my salutation set at hand but i fear the worst of nature,the blood of a newly sluaghtered animal is what we can sip on this day" "me.i don't fear any regents of a ceremony,only what it induces,have you talked about what words we'll be using" "unfortunately deleton satan are the original two continued by altawa naztema wenir" "starting without me and my important help!"Niombe said playfully entering with Fentessa and the dagger held in her right hand by the handle. "now we must do the ceremony while everyone is fresh it could cause problems to wait"-the two briskly came to the circle. "set it in the center and lift your mugs"-which were the same stone carved marble like ones as in the original ceremony with the three sisters.He encouraged us with a look as he began lightly saying the words deleton satan etc. We repeated the verse in a changing pitch tune several times,it may have been say six times.He lifted his chalice and we followed and all took a sip and then poured the blood onto the dagger.I hoped that Niombe had already used her detections magic but if she hadn't then what i hoped for was the quick cunning of my blade.A holographic like image emerged from the air just above eye level about two feet by two feet and a half.It showed what was possibly the devil amongst trees with a golden set of three strings encasing him within a clearing,the twine tight around five trees,not coiled around any.A red rain began to fall and the devil looked up and called out in an evil gesture of pleasure as it moved about a bit in pain perhaps but it was a joy and manifestation of evil.Then the scene depicted an alien whipping a miner in a fairly well lit mine corridor where the man laboured with a pick-he was gathering some basic stone then magically beyond the opaqueness we were shown a vain of shiny metal and a gold light resonated-making a rough circle of light about the ore.The image fell away evaporating completely before reaching the ground and all the blood was gone. "thank god" i said quickly in light of wether Niombe had checked the man for evil. "now that we are done are you as curious as to what our next step may be"mr Daltozti asked each of us still holding a chalice. "where did you get this ceremony from"i asked still preturbed by the non-comradery level that perhaps not only i was experiencing. "the many generations ago ancestors of magic kin who now work for each planet to revitalize what they have-sent me to have you participate,i know that you didn't have Niombe check me but it really may have delayed far too long"mr Daltozti explained placing his chalice on the ground. A high tech engine sound whirled outside and two,what i could recall,-alien voices spoke out. "we're trapped"Fentessa said "we must destroy the chalices so that there is no chance for them to get the information"Daltozti said as he tossed his to the center of our circle.A lazer fired past us and the craft outside was most likely unloading more sentinels. "what is the nature of the chalices,i could use magic"i asked. "they are not protected"Daltozti said as Niombe fired a magic spell which made an orange rectangle at the doorway to prevent our demise in the last seconds before battle was bound to ensue. "make this semblage of stone to dust upon the cast of my sword down upon them"i recalled my spell for this as i rolled my eyes back already holding my sword,arms curled directly in front of me.The blade clanked and it was effective;no more did one beknownst threat bare down ,but still the shadows of evil,i felt,were about,all unscripted in ever this alien attack.Warily i stepped back shocked from the force i exhuded. "come this way,how powerfull is you're magics?combined,we might hide here"he pulled at a cement block and i followed using my sword to pry it up and hold it some three feet open;the steps inside were of wood;and the three sisters stalled for a moment to allow Daltozti down first,him not noticing in the flurry of this act. "he may have been the traitor"Niombe spoke as a lazer- blue,and following a firing sound,whizzed through the wall of the area enclosed and then many fired clear of us but it was enough for me to push them into the well, as Fentessa fell down the steps into the middle of the three,myself coming last and cunningly removing the prying tool and additional great combat and warriors'gold'my sword. The chamber was dirt and aglow with a blue resonance which Niombe was casting-it lasted for twenty seconds.The man lit a torch conventionaly and looked seriously to us. "so he is a friend"i commented. "a friend at hart it would seem,but this is a dangerous encounter!"Tiesa said holding her sword still wary. "will the sentinels detect us,you may know this?"i inquired upon him as i scabbarded my blade and sat against the wall wondering why my energy from one conjuring came to such a heavy hit. "my guess is most realisticaly we will be overlooked,not vouching for our safety yet-i might-should you put together some spell"he made a long stare at the stairwell saying this. "maybe we should be quite"Tiesa said standing at the bottom of the steps after her words. "are we safe here"Fentessa asked in a whisper. "i hear a drilling sound"Niombe said looking towards the cieling. "that reminds me of dynamite blasts"Daltozti in a warning matter as if it was about to take place. "they'd kill us and our secrets"i inquired. "perhaps they watched our ceremony"Daltozti unmindedly settled. "we must use a shielding spell,mist may not be a great enough strength to the pressure,Henry?"Niombe made aware to me. "i'm sorry but there is no way to combine our arts,so remember the bitter pain of satan's reign and challenge your inner self"i said as we all got to holding together. "i shall try"Niombe said several words in a whisper to herself holding one arm extended palm up above her.A blue light resonated in a dome around us,as we in anxiety wondered when the misfortune may land.Debree stormed down around us,fortunately the dirt covered us afterwards and for two minutes we waited wordless for fear we may alter Niombe's succesfull concentration. "may i suggest we get to our first position above"Daltozti said. "everyone shield your heads and watch the sides,jump i guess"Niombe announced ceasing the spell the walls of dirt around came in as the cuttery came down,but we ended up just a bit scuffed and up to our knees. "many of us have seen the reconasiance craft on the brother worlds but we couldn't cause alarm,only raise defenses secretly,now we have the power the force of wizardry shown us,you can see this"Daltozti made aware while we came to a decency on the collapsed torn up ground. "now we have a situation on our hands it can't help to not have help but let's not trust anyone"i conjectured along the line of aftermath thoughts. "it's lazer versus magic now,but should the dark one bind with this threat we will be defeated"Fentessa commented throwing a dirt clump against the ground that rested on her shoulders. "it has already started,evil is the only presence that could begin this destruction,you see,everything that's happened"Tiesa pointed to the ground while making her point. "isn't anybody going to ask how i feal after that"Niombe numbly accounted. "good work Niombe you need to refresh,strong meat always makes a better mass of meal,let's not fret,come on i suggest we leave" We sat at the marble round table in the new house we found for the sisters and myself.The entire bottom floor was carpeted in white with yellow almonds on the border,representing a regent known for good magic,wether this was done at the time we decided for protection or celebration nobody let on to. "who's to say who's at fault"Niombe protested. "who's to say the source of this encounter and what we know of isn't the unmentionable"Tiesa furthered. "well mr Daltozti i'm more suspicious of you,but i can't be sure there are really deep rooted evil sources in you if in fact it was you who betrayed us"Fentessa contended from her initial accusations. "a spy with no way out innocent at hart,under some alien blackmail,i might suggest,is what Fentessa you are making aware to us all"i pointed out. "north american"Daltozti prompted as if another assualt were coming.We spoke not but heeded his words-he continued. "we will penatrate deeper in the few mines which carry that form of rock and know for ourselves exactly what we have pursued" "let us make travel preperations"i finished. Later that afternoon Tiesa practiced throwing the dagger on a tree trunk 20 yards away and i was interested in seeing her skills.I asked her lightly- "powerfull dagger for a powerfull lady,yet wouldn't a moving target prove more acutely a prowess for the skill" "what are you making it known you'd better me in that remark"she asked going to collect from trees. "perhaps a blindfold"i called out enjoying the sporty atmosphere. "very well just give me your shirt"she asked now before me again. "i'll make it secure for you,i wouldn't want cheating"and i tied my shirt around her closed eyes-she trussed a quarter turn and threw just as a woodpecker landed as a previous mark and it was struck by the dagger through one wing though it managed to fly away.We followed it to a tree the same distance from the target there as we intitially stood from it. "the ceremonial dagger may have an effect"Tiesa said as we looked at the bird-blood now dripping down the blade.It began to glow a bit then the image of satan like before appeared again,only this time the dagger was in the picture and he began to consume the drops of blood as they came off the hub at the top of the handle. "quickly we must get the dagger free from blood"i moved forward but the bird attempted flight but only made it a few yards to the ground the image following it.I grabbed the handle pulled it free and used my shirt handed to me by Tiesa immediatly cleansing the blade. "i should destroy the dagger,it was my choice to begin with"i angrily announced. "we will,we will help you if you want to melt it-let's tell the others immediatly" The dagger sat as the focal shirt and all at the round table. "if only Melcore could help us"Tiesa said. "ah but he already has,and quite a large bit as well" i said. "then we will find him again!"Fentessa said. "he is gone now,rest your eyes,if you seek Melcore,Melcore can only bless you with his former life"i spoke to her in a soothing respectfull way. "lest he be forgot let's all remember him"Niombe said-each of us holding hands. "may i break the silence,there are perhaps wizards elsewhere"Daltozti mentioned quite firmly as if there was a misccue for our prayers. "we live in a land which is filled with natural wealth and alive again but could a wizard be found-i might not give a happy note to that" "to witch end can we pursue our preperations if there shant be a wizard"Tiesa asked. "the Dentron forest is safe once more,at his palace answers could be gained,do you agree"Niombe lifted the state. "it may be gone but i shall embark once more,unlike before i would like a companion" "someone must remain to be here if there is a sign of something or a clue to what end our protection of Earth will come"mr Daltozti said. "yes Daltozti and i will go to the palace-i have trekked far at that end of the area,have i not,let you three keep word of aliens and such"i announced knowing that i could discover his true nature on this trip and save a possible set of negative outcomes with it being only me. "are you going to sneak off again,what of our talents-i'm sure if the need arrives our combined strengths will ensure our journey is completed to the palace"Fentessa said. "well my point is only a simple one,men travel fastest as do women with their own kind"i said lying to conceal my true reasons.Should i let them go on this journey they might see my true battle abilities then my wisdom would become fanfare only,i couldn't let that happen;i prompted to myself as an additional brownie point to my charade. "the dagger my friend -should such strange force be taken along"Daltozti asked. "melting it seems a far better choice,you can imagine what might come of it providing it was stolen or taken in an ambush"i conjectured. "well i suppose there is oranizing to be done to begin our defense army,Tiesa,Fentessa and i should do what we can here"Niombe capped off. We made neccesary preperations including supplies,ambush plans and helpfull points i could give including bringing a nice sleeping cot.As Daltozti layed a view in pretexts at the hills beyond i thought to myself-oh am i glad the demons aren't alive-surely he'd be gashed and history in two shakes of a lambs tail-even if i could use the geratest techniques known;such as when i was younger two fighting blades attached to my boots provided a quick solution to roving minor demons that sometimes attacked. The way was layn with the typical fauna-shrubs some ivy,some native vines spruced with violet flowers,and evergreen trees.Occasionaly a deranged cactus with acute leaves with side needles furled against a tree place derriving shade-though even more cold to a novice eye were the live oaks that billowed 80 ft high carrying great and secure branches and fliffing acorns about the ground over the tan cutting leaves abounding at the ground. "such majesty as the great oak,legends of scorcerers might have often used these beautys as an eramark to their truimph"Daltozti said sniffing in the air and taking a canteen as we set to some oak shade. "well,even i may believe in the arts and trees,but even more so these oaks are of a catagory of their own"I replied-swiping the water from him-and nearly finishing it. The girls were intented on being a true valiance to the cause,and they naturally got involved with egressions concerning their talents and made do with a scintilating ceremony.They each had but black pantys and silk gold streamers about their busts-as they walked about a pentagram of black chalk and some other cross etchings.Fentessa and Tiesa had a sword and spun it held-using their wrists in a sort of dance-and Niombe stood at the circle after casting a spell that made flickering blue fairy like lights go about the night air.There she removed the streamers in a special fluid way and as she set each upon the circle perimeter it blazened into a pink flame and dissapeared-how supple the rythems of ceremony and their skilled ways!Tiesa and Fentessa stopped and put their swords forward at Niombe's nipples and she held the blades with her bare hands! "se ye seays the te ye yea yeeys"Tiesa and Niombe chanted lightly and alive- Niombe closed her eyes and a swirl of ether at her eyelids masked the first infusion of magic she felt,then a lightening cack went from her breasts to the swords-the two girls fealing the new power summoned bringing them to a whole new level of necromancy.They too removed their streamers and spun in place(with special movement)and held the swords skyward-the gold fluctauted and flew about from the ground to a reasoning of appearance that looked like the swords controlled them-then again the pink ether flame dissapated the golden flutters.The three were done with the magical journey and knelt at the ground the refurbishment cycle complete and the lives of ritcheous defenders of Earth against evil and aliens as best as could be stated glorious and true within their nearly nude bodies and souls-'we have made a significant leap for the doings which must be done'they thought.Indeed powerfull girls these were. Little beknownst to the wayfaring citizens of Earth a fleet of 10 alien spaceflyers was making route to the once enslavement center of their planet-oh and satan bonded soul contracts too.The winged craft(of which there were 4)were mettalic metal and had sections like that of a anthrolopod-the sides were made meldo meldo with black stripes that had serpant dragons with horns in neo-purple and gold within the stripes-as one might question why the answers that they had deranged yet partially chinese religion may become thynes focus.They aliens were a different species than the enslavors but they knew...yeah they knew about it buddy-malicious chops gettin set to **** the human race again was all they were about.They looked mostly like the blank featured aliens we know of-not unlike Copernicus-but they all wore skirts with tight leggings that had metal bands.The leads were signified with two lazer guns that gleaned of hight tech for low mass-though sometimes a govern was noted with frilly shoulder patches and a cascading physcedelic decoration at the chest.The women of course whom served in the military only were used for communications teching-and not to untimely was an act of employer molestation-but you don't need to understand-it's just sex-nipple slash ripe rip peel-oh like a sweet orange freshened with a swash of crystal water-well anyway they were indeed a faction of powerhungry aliens and they thought they could get Earth-little did they know Henry,Fentessa,Tiesa,and Niombe were on the planet's payroll for just such problems. "they have but one hope-to commit suicide unless of course we strike quickly this could happen and we will lose thousands of slaves"the Lead alien(frills etc costume)(actaully in alien words). "then let us use a swift calculated strike at the main rebuilt city places"the 1/2 lead alien replied,yet as gracefull as they were struting just over a serpant insignia at a hall window looking to the first forms familiar to the milky way galaxy. "attention-lord leader we are recieving transmission that the warrior suspects have gotton away-supposed heros"an intermic at the costumes buzzed through. "then we will dispatch a crew specifically to slay them when we arrive"lead alien "all orders explicit and accounted for-my moogi man"a female this time responded through the comm. At the house the sisters now how wholesome as wholesome could get led themselves through a vision of sorts-and sure enough as the black vorlon of perceptions scatched through their beauty and wits the occurance of some crafts unkown though definately an enemy snapped their assed knecks in half and Niombe cries out first after each had wwoosey woofed in shock. "oh dear the new aliens-Daltozti-doesn't know they wish harm and slave labour camps to all of us our children and worse..."Niombe exsaperatedily yet loudly fouched. "what evils-dear magic Niombe-what evils did you feal?"Tiesa asked(they were still sitting croslegged at a summoning cloth). "when i feal pain i feal-that they take away a force of innocence from even what we knew as the alien slave bonders-and stalk the night as if they were creeping disease-bareing the nude wounds all the way from children to the oldest pookaninny"she said in a gallant self assured response-that did a curtsy to the sisters taking an extra breathe and set escue as to what they could find in the way of defense-while lurching on the hopes that the cross the forest battle journey of their cohorts had answers. "i'm taking a bath to get more saucey about answers to this...to all of this"Fentessa exclaimed and made her way at the upstairs hall to a gold(actually fakey)tub set in a luxurious bathroom. Looking into the mirror while using some hush hush powder for her skin(face...entire body)- "how can I fight the aliens when the death of millions has been taken through our sense of worthyness before...oh dear God if i use my sword battle techniques against lazers-let the furry be -oh-oh-oh ...magical"with that she set into the tub-and sort of fancy girl smoothed the wettened hush hush-scorceress no-hush battle girl any fine-yes! Durring the flight from the place of "homeworld"to the respectable yet harshened 'Earth'several of the higher ranked aliens took a persuasive look in to the void into the spirit of their path and found that an elementry describable as derrived error was impending about their crusade-could this be the wrong move,after all they did kill Satan-and had a new power of hope and esteem-what could lazers do that magic of ages and deceptive scorcery couldn't take from them. In a back seperated room,from the action -gears fears and computers- two aliens,a female and a higher rank with special frills and thought,-too the skirt design, sat at a crate and touched their hands together-open eyed the thought about love-marriage-death-conquering-their words traveled an underworld of conciousness to eachother. "who ever is so told to lead a human to the grave" lead alien. "should ever open their eyes to a dark sunrise"female alien. "then purity of our own universe-you and i shall" "live with a fruitfull bond like mists kissing a new england coast" "or the words i have shown thee may melt to" "a disease instead of the soul of eternal crash crazy fires and lightening fast night disco dancing" "take me now as a warrioir sent to...to.." "oh Mthzeriwth i open my hairless ***** to this session and take a vow to unite your soul against the ...the..the more hairy human females and the lot of scoundrels"-with that she set for a kiss now and soon they took care of all that was clothing to these creatures and the cold spacecraft floor opened new dimensions of squibis sex and the revealing eye of indifference to the world's problems beyond..'oh'..'oh oh oahh'..'oh yees'-they got that baby cruisin-little did their crew know. At their way to the Dentron forest--the sisters were always a special meaning in any young man's life even if it was about fighting rather than-i don't know marriage or perhaps an evening summoning.The reasons for giving them the shank as this supposed mr Daltozti flanked me kept an arch to a spiraling mind supermart for me-as if dancing demons,rash aliens and a cascading waterfall of what were once the alien money coins used for slaves washed me and my repressive journey-when could the damn first challenge await-what could Daltozti do that was being unforeseen by me.Ahh at last the mountain reached a cliff- a sporadic flattened and quilled mountain mind you-and the cliff was some 100 ft to the ground-and of course,there the Dentron forest was,clear and visible. "what about the insurmountable mountain range"Daltozti supposing that makings were fine and our path easy and true enough for now. "what-? no **** no -that'll be a piece of cake-as soon as we make through the...ahh yeahp-partly burned to **** Dentron pup-there are easily some lag easy jumps across the mountains-no demons i reckon" "witch,the forest or mountain-what are you gunna do jump 100 ft to the death of you and us..dangerous boy" "young man if you don't mind-no i'll just babe a spell"the reactions of this badly developed warrior known as mr Daltozti was getting a bit questionable-but who am i to deny a rif raffing oldish man a respite-after all i only killed the friend of the girls,- ol geezer.Chanting i did indeed ;who could afford two to float through the air nicely-i could, but i mustered strength and did so with a touch of class. "who may you ek thane eck terra fayne-i may i more than one the spell to the earth has begun"i used my sword too-swaffing about quickly as the forces of magicitiux swifted-and made simple the trip to safety. "thank god-i don't know what the hell magic you're part of..does some of that satan soul contract remain ..or am i being uncool to ask"mr Daltozti was set back by my superficial tech. "no,i'm ok-the actuall power i get going such as that babe-are part of higher sources than a hell guiny-and with proper care you could feal more comfortable about that -are you ok with this guy"i countered the insult of accusations. "no-please-no more mr mc-guy stuff-lets just hope there aren't any demons left-"with that he strided before me-of course obviousley everyone knew that there probably wasn't. "sisters of light sisters -if night-please..pray i make a safe passage"i wheeled my soul against the yes and no of don't worry babe there aren't any enemies in good ol Dentron. "Henry-i've followed the invigorated fear in their eyes-the demons must hunger to conquer-to kill-my own dealings with the wiked ones of satan's work have been very shallow-can i hold my fear and expect my detaunt statis as a warrior against them to lay alive"Daltozti asked of me as we reached the first few trees-which were burnt yet still awsome-the blackness appeared to be in tacat-who knows why-perhaps the devil and god battle was not yet all the way portrayed yet-and i the fearsome master of light and dark was to kill and kill again till purity found the resolve of finer elements- "well bus-let me put it like this-the wholesome mind is always elusive and desiring a source be it a solution of battle arms or the fearless eyes of ...of ..a saint-worry not-we go"I knew the type of battle that weilded a sword could await-and yet of course i wasn't into waiting. The billowing charren structures were like orafices of hells creation screaming 'the darkness has a turn of storming witchery to portary and you've stepped to the foray'-I didn't expect to find another yet fully blossomed unborne demon as i did last time-but a who's who in the might of a treatcherous journey could make the trite snippets of mr bohoo learn a valued lesson before we took the palace to our goal. The makings went benumbedly-for me at least-some trees were alive still-the curse of evil power must have protected them-but that wasn't all that i sensed was thwarting a lovely romp in the good ol Dentron-the sounds of hissing-not of leaves eventually were appearant as a form other than nature's breezes-swaafing and deferating an implicit sin of calousness-who lays in the breezes,diseases-blackened ashes and waits to strike-the serpant of death-the reapers second hand reptile-a strange new 1/2 alien 1/2 demon-uuh yeah crossbreeds now there's a theory for a revolution- "you know the likelyness that we will soon encounter a fight to the core-of man versus strangeness is-..pardon my english-damn good"I enlightened the rooky man with no sword or wit. "hey well good is ok-but fight-now let's be serious here-you know what i think i need a weapon-i mean i have this little lazer pistol i didn't tell you about-look"with that he sported a black with stylin metal trim mini-lazer from an inner shirt pocket and switched a flicker and shot a tree one time'boof'nice range good fire power fairly impressive. "so you think that lazer is not enough and you wish to fight with the folcrum identity of a warrior with a dashing sword"I asked as we had stopped walking. "well yes" "haha ha aha ha haa-that's a good one-well-let's see senior Daltozti if such is to be true we need a metal source for the spell which i'm afraid may have to be the trim on the gun-what'll it be sword-or gun - sword- or lazer- huhn-huhn make a decision" He was ruffled and sat on a rooty exposure-and put his hands to his face-rubbing in contemplation and 'under'delight-like a rump willy ol fool tryin to wax me for the extra sympathy.None of that with me-i knew the ways of valiance dashing to the mirths the contempt of the fights of darring do were about all that stood between helplessness and great success at times-but the chump didn't=maybe a philospher round could help i surmised. "well you know tis not to fight the enemy with cold hands whence the rules of weaponry are hotter than the coals that fuel the ethergy of wars-take now you're final step make the sword of might the key to the lips of the golden queen of wars victory-eyhe-eyhe-i'll make you one -eyeh"i riled idea-what the hell a sword for thought who needs the little beuffer anyway. He stood and set the gun forward to me-as a new sss'ing sound made a more familiar to the world of living debut than the other times.I had to be expediant-and devious and dauntless and wild all together -the summons of power surged through me-oh night crystals from the forbidden empire-oh hated spirits of woe and battle-oh furry of the forgotten bade of the black castle-i begin the incantation-i flip flapped some agents of spell casting to myself. "listen now-the priests and priestesses of lore-this battle must slice once more-as fusing the shale of forgotten metals fuse now the greatest of swords one to kill minnions those of the devils!" Swirling my hands-a glow of purple might-awashed in saturation of an energy unexplained took place.The metal scurried off the gun-like quicksilver-i dropped the beuffer-and the floating metal and magics-turned with eachother and spun-the spinning was like a raucious pup of an anger-fighting-crashing-....creating-the sword dropped to the ground the spell was completed and the light against the dark was abridged-so was Daltozti's new way to glory or death. "go on pick it up-we have an impending evil-i believe look to the south-i fear it approaches"that was no joke-unlike the warriorness of Daltozti-but what the hey a few gimpshaw reasonings with any new sword beneficiary and all was set. "i am power-i am the fighter-oh goodness the sword is -simply immaculate-the carnation of rose gardens-no wait the incarnation like a country garden-eeeh the bud of a jasmine vine garden excepted when it's night-oh forget it-i hear the beasts"Daltozti swooned with it -sure was a great sword-how absurd is it- a novice and a powerfull sword-not at all-i think. Crackings of trees emminated-the rapture was near-a blackened sprite of hush breezed evil awoken our clearing.The feature of a for curser to a stranger than strange power beast for certain i thought-the breeze swishes and nearly cut our arms in passing-the calous vail of a vicious tooth or claw awaiting was spoken for-a concise surgence of fear in the mind of the prey-not on my watch-i liked the power against power happening-maybe Daltozti should get a hinter i thought as i yelled to him-the sounds ever greater. "no-no scare the final wrath from the warrior of good-the curtailed strength of the approaching enemy is all that means" "yes-i got ya-fight me little mommy woo hush demon-we will(looked to me-half a smile-what the hell we're doin fine)kill and murder and enswirl our swords at thee-thee **** ass weakness!!"Daltozti stepped a bit towards the rucus. Then bam!the service of enemy in vision was there-a night beast,a demon-a serpant,a goat-a whore-(well maybe if transvestite-you know how quasi B movie zombies sometimes look)was escue and hissing-but there were more than one.The eyes glowed in multi hues and the claws of 6 arms railed about set to swipe us down-the following war party-you'll never believe this -were 3 ft high dwarf-demon serpants-that had tails and legs and carried daggers and little cooty hats that had green and brown stripes-like a joke nearly.They were all of a purple color- "fools the Dentron -sss- fores-sss is a nature of evil and power you-sss-may-sss never know!"the monster spoke english. "what are you a vorlon garden snake with a genetic disease-run now!"i returned a blasphemizer of sorts-magic was in the air. The monster struck all of 3 limbs at left forward as the 'dwarfs' -4 of them rushed at us-the delight of a blaze of ether fire was flying from our enemy-it has spells i realized-oh dear-i might need to make Daltozti step away if he's going to live through this- "maliki fein zerti-serpent i defy-saints and gods refine!"i cast an ice as well as blocking spell at the blast while motioning to Daltozti to step away-maybe fight the dwarfs while i killed the priest of Dentron over there. "i can fight these mini-moofs you got it Henry"-he started dueling them multiply while i dueled claws versus sword against the ,monster. "die-sss-frail-sss human"the montser was set for magic again-even i could see that in it's elusive power phazing. A stench of corpses ran past us-and as i tryed to stab at it making a confusion of it's summoning-which it was indeed-it didn't work-and five more undead dwarves appeared and began attacking me-piece of cake. "fool you're so weak i could have -sausage for lunch after killing you-"I remarked as i quickly cut the naps off of the 4 dwarves attacking me-though one small slice was made on my leg. "blood of victory-sss-die!"it went at me and tryed to smash-i looked to Daltozti who was still against 2 dwarfs the other 2 were dead-as if i could'nt believe how silly this serpant was- he saw and nodded-and i jump flipped to the side-the monster smashed into a charcoled tree making black dust about. "there you go-some charcoal for a charred remains of life demon-"I spoted at it-it turned and we fought claw to sword some more. The tally wag-was harsher-i was harsher-the slap effect -a little fruitless but i got some slices in-then it smashed my shoulders-in a quip of a manuever-eyeh so what i thought as i fell to the ground- "yeeow!!"Daltozti was sliced on the leg twice in a two go i go attack by the little ones- OK now what i needed to do was entrance the fucker-i crawled a bit and looked in awe as it approached for the kill-or so it thought-then when i needed to-i flipped the sword twice-it watched in amazment and special powers threw it-impaling into it's chest in it's ignorance of my abilities- "ha ha -you loze-i win-bammers across the board!"I stood and did a side kick after knocking a swipe away-and the sword went to the hilt-into it's vital organs-the end of life. "oh damn it!"Daltozti jump slam pounded 1 dwarf-the other was limping away from the area in desperation for it's life. "hey hey-the true evil one-is dead-"Daltozti saw the serpant demon on it's side and it's eyes go blank. "nice slam-dude-one got away though-let's cruize-you and i we can fight our way now-you see-confidence and the good fight"I proclaimed as using one foot to free my sword and wiping it with a rag-then re sheething. "wel-suffocation and broken ribs instead of number three for my first sword killing blood furry is-ok -thanks a nice slam after all"Daltozti kept alive and happy following me from the area as we made on. This treck of woes and fights can be a real challenge of purity-and might lucky i have my entire spell worths available-even though i could've spell blasted four of those demi-demons if i had wanted to-i just wanted the sword war trip to settle in for the first stages. Niombe was walking on her own gathering flowers as the sun set-the washing of violet and yellow-to pink fracas scooped her wits into beautifull ice cream while her sense of conciousness melded into the petals and floaura of the wonder flowers aurora-alive in contemplation.Tomorrow i shall be the nervous one-such as i have felt-she thought.Why you may ask-of course stupid-the bonding of the powerstream-the fight was just interpreted on her end. "i have the fealing-glorious one-oh freer of alien contracts-and satan bondage-that one battle won-has the ooh ouh makings of war just begun"she walked towards the house and passed the flower of lucious scents across her-nose as Fentessa and Tiesa watched her approach. "fealing the petals of our union-across the sea of fading light-dear Henry i can see you too"Tiesa said to her sisters-Niombe knew the mutual cost of the events could be getting greater. "i must defend and fight like the valiance of all the chosen free ones-i am Fentessa-the fighting girl-sleep well all-"Fentessa was gravitating to helplessness about being great as well-and turned around once upon her words-hands escue-as if ritcheous. We continued on for a ways still hoping that the dubious evil cast nature of 'her'(the Dentron)was going to lack through and roll over,leaving few risidual problems,but only time can tell in such issues,after all one attack thus far was making the scene uncool as it was. Then we happened to a clearing that held a pool of radiance,a calibration of magi-sweetness and carolling mights,a violet pond,who's surface spoke of strange wilds,uncanny worlds and darker forms of fatal flesh incarnations.The banks wreathed with dark fine sand were strange,a preturbing hold all be all for the questionable liquid,and the water itself spoke of lament and bewildered terror waiting to strike.I for one knew that such a depot could be an untimely error if safety was our issue,but poor mr Daltozti wasn't quite as hip to the realities as myself,so he approached with a smoothe step and nearly put his hand in. "well well,a little pond of reminiscent beauty of nature,such a spot as this must have a reason for it being here,hopefully not a bad one,i dare say that i almost put my hand in,what do you think Henry?"Daltozti bade to me not looking a bit away from the interest. "i think we should forget about it and make tracks,a demon a day keeps the doctor away and scince this could summon another after our first battle-it'd be fuel to the fire we don't need."i replied thinking my expertise should qualm the effecture of wisdom. "well if you really think so-i think it might be blessed water,you know a counter measure from you're first crusade,if take some...." "no! don't touch it,there is equal amounts of distrust as luck i find within a spectral search concerning this-the result of ignorance could be-bad,ok bud"i told to him again the problems,i was the adventuring leader so this time my statement should hold. "ahhh but look,the simple swept liquid of clarity-is it not so fine that only a an angel could have placed it here" Uh oh-this was taking an effect on the dude,the stratospheres of mind control could easily be latching into his mind.If i wanted a result of safety obviousely i was going to have to make the matter more clear. "look,i know what i know-and the damndedness of angels has been proven in the past,besides what are you going to do empty a water canteen and dish in just like that".But even as i finished sure enough that's what he did,and i took my sword in a quick step towards him,set to strike down the eels of under dark if that was to be. "aah yes,maybe a sip for the journey will bring strength,it's so pure-so me-so effervescent,some for me-you want any."with that he gulped some,as i saw motion in the water-i knew it- a gaurdian was about to make the matter any more problematic. "i am the angel of Dentron water's and i have allowed you a supple bit of it to quench the doubting soul-the ways of the underworld can make evil take it's hold and sow-the hate of thye enslaving ones wish a war-to hells course they believe they shall kill and lose - nor-if you make this pact i will ask of a toll -that the demons and aliens will destroy that they can never have a hold-do my bidding now and maybe i will send anothetr charm,but deny the water dranken it will do less good than harm."-sure enough there was a she-angel in gowns and glowing in a non-material form,swifted by unseen breezes,a masqeraude smile across her powder fine face.OH and she was violet too. "well met miss angel-we are only trying to do as you say-prevent the enslavory of humans-a war may be near-and if you offer a blessing ....we'll do you're bidding with great...cheer"i said being flippant trying to gather wether or not she was to be trusted. "oh yes,i feal the energy my angel love,how nice the world is today when such wholly waters cleanse the soul...the rrrgh aaahh-oh..oh no what's happening!"Daltozti tried to speak to her all lovey alive-and was doing fine but suddenly the wash of pond mirk he gulped started to have a physical effect,and as he writhed fallen to the ground,contortions on his back wretched,and electro sifts of magic went about,he spazed about,yelling,as i watched and looked at the bitch-her fault easily-i've never faught an angel before-she was actaully probably a fallen sort if you think about it.His eyes turned black,then sprouting like time lapsed photography two black feathered wings were on his back. "oh my-(standing the shock over)i have wings!well this is truelly a...a...(looked to me in a strange still blessed escueness)blessing-i must do thy bidding mis...?"asking for her name,in a new world of strange half-bestial form he flitted them once. "i am Sheiiza-the angel of torment of war-and my bidding is that you free the crown of platinum thorns from Melcore's palace held within a chest-this will ensure that the battle of your kind versus the aliens is attended by my powers-the crown must be used by a female-one who can use magic-do you understand my prettys" "hey-i may be cool but i'm no beauty pagaent goer-anyways if you say so i fear we must-i don't know what you did to Daltozti but scince you don't look like an evil incarnation hiding behind a chick-we will try-may i ask-what is the reason for the wings"i replied putting my sword back in it's scabbard and wryly noting how stupid Daltozti looked. "these will lend flight in situations of terror-so that you may have a fighting chance to do my bidding,and if you are against a foe who has fallen from heaven itself the wholly water will burn like acid of a thousand nuclear generators upon it-if you are keeping the promise-understood-got it-get it - good-fare well my underlings"with that a great light scaffed as she dissapeared,and 20 some daizys swashed,some into the water,some on us,like silly hippies-oh well what can you do with zealots of a cause like she was. "well you've really done it this time dude-i mean it might be ok,but i warned you're ass"i said picking the flowers off as he took one to purchase upon each wing. "la te da-joy to the world the angel blessed slayers are made true-joy to us we know what we've got to do-come on race you to the next oddity" Ok he was crazy-sure enough as we started to dash,i didn't want to start **** with the new found sense of duty-he flapped a bit-and got some air-making 10 ft bounds with the wings' help-but i was fast-and when he ran into a tree on a leap i cruized past and we reached a strange set of stairs going into the ground,the race marker as fate had it-i won! "oh-oops i didn't see that tree-i felt so free flying-well it's ok i let you win so you could feal like that occorance was a benefit too,actaully is the reason...hmm steps-maybe" "oh no you don't-enough is enough-you got you're wings-but into the ground towards hell we aren't going-ok"i had my hand at my sword-he slumphed-couldn't beat me in brawl so that was that and we continued. At the house,Niombe,felt a strange shock,and sense of need to be involved more with her magic.The crown certainly the reason,she made to a summoning room on the second story and cast off her shirt and used magi powder on her nipples,and fell into another dimension of concentration-reaching through the void-a sense of power-a series of glowing celestial stars,-a dancing ceremony-the purity of being-a world at war-a being in peace-the lashes of swords-,the need for a wholly might-,the eyes of Dentron forest,there an angel,her furry of the war to be,a sign-a strange sense of magi-bond-a platinum crown of thorns-there in her vision in the blackness it floated sending a message of take me-bind the eyes of sweet Niombe with the torment of war,with the powerfull loving touch of Sheiiza,you will be pure sweet girl.-bam!She fell to the floor-spent yet with virtue and hope,a visionquest of sorts unlike any before-the answer to a prayer. |
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| well... does anybody have a word about this,i know the 'frames' got shortened but the rest doesn't chop so badly,it's a sequel of course the first of whitch i can't really transfer to comp...but with no messages about what's written i can't make any more leaps for imaginativce writting.... still no beta reader...but that may be ok,just a run through 'novella' really thanxs... |
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| The Dentron Forest has written it's woe's,resurfaced the squeels of absent demons,and layd a bemused passage for the two fine adventurer's at it's footsteps:the dark and linguring prints of doom,distrust,but a hope for purity-or a sound emmeliorent to the worlds egregious Satanic problems:and I the asured master of treasons lucidious bounds,and what a fighter needs to take the disgorgement of militant like magical forces and slam them back to their grave.All in all it stood to stay-that we should be able to make past any more traps in our,way:little of soul statured,Mr. Daltozsti,and me Henry:what foolish creature,undead being,or alien even after knowing this presence,and illustriative strength should dare go before'st us(ha ha forEST get it pun). "no doubt,good Henry,there's a strange wave of mist approaching in the clouds beyond"the senoir,with beety wings and new found charisma also eloquized the situational,stating the image that approached. "yes,i see that,-in fact,the tree's are sparse,tis the end of the forest,and there....are the mountain ranges that we shall find Melcore's Palace...shall we"i conjectured,good and good was all **** the damn mists. "oh....well...i suppose i could try an extra energy surge when we're beneath them and investigate myself" "or you could turn to **** walk in a circle and talk about it even if you try...ha ha ha"i had a laugh off that one. None the less we continued,the void of open space even a bit too elusive for tastes after the blanket of trees,webbs of moss and rubbled scraps from mountain quakes lay about,searing desolation and darker magics into the minds eye.As we stopped to take a place check,and of course perhaps even further argue about wether mr Daltozti should you know check the weather,a dragon screetch pitched through the sky. "ah ha!i told you the fiends of mists approach and we aren't prepared because you did-"I cut the bud off. "that's a dragon dear friend of a fool,and the sword in my hand and words of eloquence i believe is all we should need for this encounter"I had my reasons,a beast of mythical powers,certainly it couldn't be part of messy Alien takeover,or re-hashed Satanical themes. The flurries whipped into revenance from the dark wings of the in flight granduer of a mighty dragon,as sure as it was black in scales and 30 ft in length it's awefull horns and snarling teeth,held together a wonderous appeal to all of the form of grandeur:for tail or nought or dragons and wrought iron:tis the day i speak with the beast!!! "hail...friend...we are on a mission to Melcore's Palace....i am Henry and this is mr Daltozti!"i still held the sword,but vocalized an asured nobility for a greeting. "rrghrgh....so seekers of fortune from the huanted realms...dare i say the palace of Melcore in itslef is a dungeon of many vast forms....so be' st it...I am Kelfoe...the Dark Master...i fly from region to region,killing the demons that fail to kneel before me...and their corpses are drained of strength,and what power's i can take while side stepping the unhwolly one,i use.....well...therefore the title master!" What-this was a most irony set encounter,i've heard of wit,but the mortar and philospohies of this great wyrme were exceedingly interesting.As i luaghed a little,not really doing other than feining delight in the answer,to remian a suitable host,i knew i must countinue to strike a conversation,and hopefully the sidekick wouldn't jump in and start a befumbled arguement. "Then we shall fare well with thyne's appeal,friend,however i ask,what safe paths are there leading to Melcore's palace...for though i have once met with him,this place i know not so well" "and a little midevil lingo ..toodoo"mr Daltozti agreed,and beet a few wing flaps as well. "ah ha!you're friend has wings,best they are from an Angel,for if not-!"the one known as Kelfoe,refurled a talon,and staunted a swipe from several feet away jisting the death that was to be someone's who's been touched by demon wings. "Sheiiza has sent us a blessing,the uhm...well wings for him,and i've this wholly water,to burn demons in ways that are cruel,if it pleases you?" i opened the container,and approached,and it wryly took hold making a googled eyed expresseion,smelled it first,exhaling like a avid entrepuneur,then let a drop on a finger and tasted it,closing the lid himself,and setting it on the ground before me. "yes yes...quite a fine seal of heavens river of cleansing...the demons shall hate thee and hunt thee as badly as myself should they find you have,these blessings...perhaps i shall just take you to thee's end of quest as it is for now...hmmmm?" The winds strapped our expressionedly free selves,the beast working powers of flight that belittled the endentured servitude to gravity;tail switching groove for swoops,and snarls following quick straffs past cavities in the valley's that made over the first cliff facade.Though Insurmountable,they were a glory to float past,oblivious to the rough hewn rubble and shrubs that bonded them to their name as well as their distance.As the sky turned to colors of washing golds,against the blackening sky,the severed ties to what was real fell to an eye and ear for each of us.What words were there,was this a meditation,is there some strange assimer calling from the palace?! "there are messages sent for thee freinds...from a great female witch i don't doubt"The dragon held the unchanged rythem,whilke still as concentrated as we were on this oddity. "Niombe,she has two sister's Fentessa and Teisa,they work with us....it must be"I hoped so,perhpas a word that they were at least safe from the aliens,may lighten the mood for conquest of what the beast claimed was a dungeon. Soon enough we had an etheral image of Niombe,lit by a the light flicker of a candle,in deep meditation it looked,then her eyes oponed and of course she spoke,somehow the image following us perfectly. "there is a crown,for certain i can't say however i have a fealing,it will be found at Melcor'es Palace....it has platinum thorns about it,and is of a great power...Sheiiza sent message,perhaps if you suaght prayer with her...an answer you will find"she sounded nearlyt ghost like,and the fact that this was ablack magic illusion sent by god onlky knows to make us eat ****,was there,however i played along. "yes,of course Sheiiza,great...great,we will certainly find this,what say you of it's powers dear Niombe" "there will be a war,the aliens soon will attack,the crown has a power,a blessed way,this angel is" "i know the angel of war torment....ok...say what happened to the you know metal problem",celeverly i spoke as i normaly do,with jabs into the intellect,using metal for knife,hoping the question could make good for this little trick. "what?..." "uh oh...did you sense what i did about this ...message,i know what you were asking"Daltozti whispered to me behind Niombe's back. "wait...you mean the dagger,yep we melted it,we've done some nude ceremonies,no dwarfs this time,but a great energy,we were enlightned,even special powder that rubbed all about for a bath,while touching-" "ok,yeah yeah,just wanted to be sure it was you.....we shall go with this in mind...oh and if you can see or not,this -" "Kelfoe the Dark Master,i rid the lands of demons,and eat them relatively" "oh marvelous..hail great Wyrme,heaven be with you journey,good luck mr Daltozti,kisses Henry,fare well"with that she dissapeared,no real flesh exposure,none the less,one of those cutesy girl talks butterflies type of encounter,and we were on our way anew. |
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| Dear God!Melcore's palace....surely that's what they were think when non other into view fell the place so named.A brgidoon general's place,a mighty unflawed perfect power structure,a darkened yet curiuosly powerfull looking defier of logic,no....the amzement nearly smaked right of the dragon,and into the courtayrd,where fortunately moments later we were able to make a landing. "so a perfect castle,neat,shall we" i offered,after all no need to anounce houseguests to someone who wasn't there,even if at one time he was part of Satan and involved with saving the world. "yes i think i may have to wait awhile,till the tea is brought to a place i can fit,such as this beutifull courtyard"Kelfoe stated. "i need a shower,but admittadley i can smell the power"mr Daltozti was also pretty well enthused,at least for a person who had just spouted a set of fairy assed appendatures. I looked about,Jesus Kelfoe was telling it like it was,the vines though left to no gardner for some time still looked perfectly annointed across some of the walls,creeping to the fine ironwork that branded the windows as non other than grande.The water well,next to us had a copper canopy still fine and unblemished,and the bucket was set to roll.So we drank,trusting our instinct that this could prove a well worth it pit stop,not endless pit mind you. "rhrhgm eerhmm uueyhm,ahhh that's better,now for that shower" Daltozti led the way to the largest 10 ft wide double door,and cranked them open using body weight. Creeeek..rgghcreek....chink!Well that's done it,if any spells of protection or dejection or entrapment of ghouls was placed there,we'd know....but there wasn't. "how do you say yo!Staff attend the guests in Abysall...ha ha haa....get it i know all about Melcore" "so funny i nearly forgot to laugh"i replied,as the little looky loo instinct in me kicked in and we jammed past the first few closed doors and found ourselves ina grande,waiting chamber.The columns were bled with gold,like a cheapy house handy,trick,but more worthy looking,the ornation was rich,it was nearlt what Taj Mahal ish,with baby demons and angels sketched dancing with flutes lutes,and banjo's on the ceiling,and the heavens shall praise the mortals i thought....truelly stunning if the sister's could see this now,they might...well you know what they might do. "nice....now then how about the mission,the crown,probably in the dungeon" i took my sword for safety,after all empty one second filled with the luster of evils the next did ring true to the varainces of this degree. |
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| Hello mr and misses doorway and stairwell where for art thee,fealing free,why don't you tell me.well the rhymes in my mind didn't exactly help,but it stayed the sillyness of Daltozti's super power efforts,and justly so becuase after awhile we found a peculiar door set several steps in from the hall.Repleat with curling vine work,midgaurd evangualistic etvhings,and iron latchwork all about it,there was a sign that this could be it.The sign that said in slang....Dirty Downstairs Damnation Zone.Ha ha...so Melcore does have a sense of humour,quite blunt too,for it was so written on the fabrications of this fine palace.I took precuation and turned the handle,....3 seconds later there she was,the turning stairwell into the darkness,but that was ok,becuase there were torch holders on the wall that soon gave way to our merry masquerade by being lit as we went. "now let's play a game," i spoke in a nearly reprimandel tone to the comoanion 'angel'. "yes....a game...i hear that,damn i haven't played Halo 3,or Mazey Mist for years,miss that triple action plazma rifle you can" "no!i meahn this...if i say stop you stop if i say fight you fight if i say run....get it" "well,don't trust my instincts as much as you're own,very well,consider the game on,....let's see now,if i were you and you were me,jump!!Barf!!Fart!!Luagh!!" "funny,i smell evil so just keep what i said in mind"i responded as much as i felt i shouldn't,perhaps keeping the cue of what i needed for him to be at ,but what can i say,the dude was reckless and needed guidence,and i was there to ensure that we worked together. The strange elucid floor,was creeping with resonant magics,a sluff of cream there,a dash of powder over there in trhat corner,a mirage of oilish splatters leaving raindow encampments for the bonds of the craft that most have touched off in the place.Don't fear my little Niombe i shall be on the way,with you're platinum crown so soon i could nearly feal the ******* snowlflakes falling off the evrgreens looking from the castle window....or some saying such as that. "you suppose we might find a weapon or interest for ourselves as well" "you don't think the sword i got you is hot,i think our weapons are fairly smoothe"i jirated getting the idea that maybe there were weapons that had greater money value,but certainly not developed powerlord structure and vying wholesomness as these. "no,fine....Jump!...ha ha ha got you almost didn't i"the poor old friend had reached the limit in this confined space,mustering foolish wit to keep fears locked away. There before us the tortur room lay,yes that's no euphimism,there were chairs,wheels,chains,objects of clamping fascinations,and needles,and pokers and culdrens,and more.The blackened image of the arrea only discounted by the occasional blood smears on wood shackles and the sort.Well well well waht do we have here,a power chord attached to one of those massive 5 ft tower super conductors,say i wander if killed so painfully as it didn't,maybe i could brainwash Daltozti a little,impreganting attitude changes as i went,....naw **** that stupid idea. A shower is what twas asked for and i dare say,over in one corner there appeared to be one,clouted into the remains of a cage,that look smashed by vicious claws,the spot was golden,but the drain beneath was clogged with bits of flesh,raggedly scale beast sorts,even some gizzard,liver,globuls etc were there.I scooped some into my hand and stepped to Daltozti who was looking for the knobs. "i think this is more of an acid shower bro....so don't go there" He sniffed the muck,then took a finger swip and taste,then said to himself 'hhmm...mmmh..hhmm..mmhmhmm' "what"i knew there was another shielded mishumor there,...had to know despite this. "lizard asses,not demon or other,i think maybe the man was making a legion of lizard gaurds,and did some...shall i say secret research" "really,what makes you say that" "for awhile there was talk of fighting Satans gaurds and the aliens with the sort,but all we ever got was two representatives from Earth,who said they might help,but they needed something from the Dentron forest,a likely step towards Melcore's involvement,but that we couldn't get much too dangerous" "tell me about it" "well there these banished" "i know...forget it,now then we have what two halls there and there,then some brainstorming if we can't find it" "very well,listen not to my stories....charleten!" |
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