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| sweet reazor blade kisses Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: milkyway planet earth united kingdom england london (north)
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| careless wind in the wind i hear the voices in the wind you cry to me in the wind i am calm in the wind i am careless i am free out at sea i am surounded by water up on the mountian i am at peace with all and one but not all is lost, in the wind you find me in the wind i am crying out to you in the wind im frozen down to the bottom of hell is were i have been in the wind i shall rise higher than any kite in the wind we find each other in the wind we will love till the end of time time is frozen when you cant her the voices in the wind when you stop loving all that youve loved you are the tree that fights the wind with out roots you will colaps and die in pain sorrow and anger rising up in you blinding you from what you know to what you need from all that you loved is blown away in the wind when the time is frozen when you stoped loveing all youve ever loved, COPY RITE 2003 |
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| sweet reazor blade kisses Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: milkyway planet earth united kingdom england london (north)
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| ooo thankies asmiley and 13jay i love the smiley asmiley dajavu?? anyway glad you like it and i dont know how i rot it, ot just flowed till it stoped buks ![]() |
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