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| Tal Shiar Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: San Diego
Posts: 264
| Very excellent story RG. Can't wait for more. Keep it coming. My favorite line from your first installment: "The tunnels the Hobbits were led along meandered bewilderingly, sometimes dipping, otherwise rising, often sharply and suddenly making them stumble, but always twisting. They quickly lost all sense of distance and direction." Very good writing. Love the descriptives. |
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| lost in Time Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Illinois
Posts: 9,373
| heh. you know what i think of it but to reiterate: I love it! it's the most awesome Sam fic I've ever read! I only wish I had thought of it myself. and heh I'll leave you with your thoughts...Oh didi you get many responses from the otherr board? alot of people have read it now. ![]() |
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| Registered User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Gwynedd
Posts: 3,582
| You can say nice things like that about my witterings as often as you like, I'll never complain! :lol: But as for DTR. No, I've not heard owt. But I don't think the story starts to liven up until chapter 7/8(ish) |
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