| Re:Feedback
Actually, I just had a look at my first sample chapter again. Hm, it is looking a bit rough now. The entire thing is lacking a proper smooth polish. There's a definite editing need. I'll get onto it as soon as I've finished "Emperor" (I've just given the prologue a new edit - split the POV for better effect - I'll post that up in a few days on the forum link). |