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Old 8th July 2004, 03:16 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Re: Forum Story: Chapter 2

[Don't worry. It's completely ok with me... who knows, we might meet another dragon... ]

Vey knew that she should be scorched and burnt to death, but instead they were all quite comfortable, speeding along in a lulling haze of warmth.

Nobody cared to point out to Caterina that they hadn't been had, because it was far too obvious.

It was Alvis who posed the question running through all their minds: "And where exactly are we being taken?"
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Old 9th July 2004, 02:21 AM   #32 (permalink)
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I vote chapter end. Who's with me?

(and Hypes, I hope I'm not being rude, but I was wondering if you'd done any of the editing of 1? Don't think I'm trying to pressure you or anything, just curious).
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Old 9th July 2004, 02:08 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Yeah, good point to stop. I'm with you.

I'm also curious concerning that editing job...
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Old 9th July 2004, 07:14 PM   #34 (permalink)
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I agree that this is a good place to end the chapter.
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