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| Reputo Iterum Join Date: May 2007 Location: Missouri
Posts: 267
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Ben thank you for the poem you wrote me this is for you, and everyone else on the chrons! You are a cool breeze on a hot summer day, an oasis in a desert land. You bring comfort and joy to others through your words. They ring true like a million songbirds. Thank you for the peace you bring, you do not understand, Without you the chrons would be lonely, Like an empty land. |
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| Loopy Kit Extraordinaire Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Cumbria
Posts: 2,056
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Don't worry, I'm not after a critique. Like everyone else, I just wanted to get this out there. Sorry to subject you all to this. ME You keep me in the darkness You took away my peace You leave me locked alone Does this torture never cease? You make my decisions You never ask me first You've ripped away my soul Tell me, what is worse? You're always with me You're my constant friend You deceive me with lies Will this nightmare never end? You've killed all my dreams I am but a shell You took away my hope Now I live each day in hell You stole away my teenage years You blotted out the sun You've already beaten me You've already won |
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| Loopy Kit Extraordinaire Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Cumbria
Posts: 2,056
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Thanks, Mirinda. Don't worry, Ben and Scalem, I write poetry when things in my life just get too much. I like to tell it how it is; it puts things inpersepective for me, and it's my way of coping. And I'm sorry; every poem I've put in here has been kind of depressing, hasn't it? |
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| Professional Student Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Canada
Posts: 68
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? How about a soppy love poem to brighten things up? Or make us even more depressed. ![]() I wrote this one for my girlfriend because I'm a romantic at heart, at least that's what she says of me. So Near (To My Heart)There is a place, deep inside; Where love ever grows; This small glade of my heart; I keep locked and quietly un-shown. Only one woman holds the key; She rests there always; So near and dear; Yet without fear she smiles and plays. The rhythmic beating of my heart; Warms this glade of mine; Near to my love, my place inside; She'll rest there for all of time. |
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| Moderator Join Date: May 2006 Location: Texas
Posts: 8,629
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Quote:
Gregor>Sandor: You've been asked elsewhere to keep it civil. If you can't do that, you can move on voluntarily or otherwise.... | |
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| I am, the scallywag Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Belgium
Posts: 1,415
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? JD, long time no see he roars and pours in your drinks for you. A moderator he is that is so very true his appearance a bliss be afraid, but hide your gigantic enormous fear For JD is here! ![]() |
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| Professional Student Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Canada
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