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| Reputo Iterum Join Date: May 2007 Location: Missouri
Posts: 267
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Blood Bonded Don’t run to me I can’t save you. Time is tricky I’ve moved on. There was a time of us together, now the part you play is done. The darkness and the wind sweep up and surround you, lost in the crimes you’ve done. Never knowing what’s around you, with these four walls you become one. A trail of fire through the heart shows only agony. Blood bonded trapped together, blood bonded you and me. Open your eyes to the pain you caused open your eyes to the truth. Blood bonded forever, blood bonded I know you. In two eyes I can see, how blood bonded you and me. Love no, obsession yes, you don’t know how to care. You know only hate and malice. With a body you know how to tear. The fabric of my life turn into pieces when, it frayed and split, showing what is now, and what was then. You’ll never know the pain you caused; your heart does not exist. Blood bonded, tied together, however I might resist. The bonds I wish to break will never come undone. I learned from the past, you cannot always run. But here’s the fun of it for me, I’m free, and you’re done. Blood bonded tied together, blood bonded I have won. |
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| The never on time lord Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Australia
Posts: 238
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? I really loved this Mirinda. It shows a lot of grief and hurt. But most importantly it shows the tearing down of the old with an acceptance of the new. New things to come, good things to come. Great! ![]() |
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| gnothi seauton Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Netherlands
Posts: 1,871
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? we are all secondhand reflections, mirroring all emotions spelled out with useless nouns and arid adjectives, morbid grammar and malicious verbs, incendiary,inflammatory,derisive, denouncing the just,condemning the compassionate, a cenotaph for hope,the offal of what could have been should have been but never was |
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| gnothi seauton Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Netherlands
Posts: 1,871
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? mirinda ,you are like dew on the morning grass a flight of ducks, in solemn formation, purposefully flying in the only worthwhile direction, a sea breeze wafting in from soothing climes,a breath of fresh air in a world fighting a losing battle with all that's good |
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| Per aspera ad astra. Join Date: May 2007 Location: Tyne and Wear
Posts: 630
| Re: Do You Write Poetry? Do I write poetry? Hmm. Well, I write things like this. Whether you'd call it poetry... ![]() In Transit Focus, focus… Okay, welcome back. Welcome back to the place where lies work and the truth hurts. This cage for such over-tarnished flesh, Barbarous thought and treacherous feeling. Welcome to your life’s current: past, present, future. Walk, don’t run. Everyone reaches their end in the end. Watch and see – Passion, fear, anger, sorrow, joy, hope, love… Warning! Prolonged use may cause vague feeling of dissatisfaction. Death. Please note: batteries not included. See all this world has to offer. Lion and tigers and bears, Oh my. Remember to make your mark. (Crayon provided. Use more sheets if necessary). Please don’t leave your questions till the end. Ensure you have all your baggage when you disembark. The management accept no responsibility for dreams lost in transit. Thank you for travelling with us. Missing you already… |
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