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Old 7th July 2007, 09:11 AM   #211 (permalink)
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Re: Do You Write Poetry?

Blood Bonded

Don’t run to me I can’t save you. Time is tricky I’ve moved on. There was a time of us together, now the part you play is done. The darkness and the wind sweep up and surround you, lost in the crimes you’ve done. Never knowing what’s around you, with these four walls you become one.
A trail of fire through the heart shows only agony. Blood bonded trapped together, blood bonded you and me. Open your eyes to the pain you caused open your eyes to the truth. Blood bonded forever, blood bonded I know you. In two eyes I can see, how blood bonded you and me.
Love no, obsession yes, you don’t know how to care. You know only hate and malice. With a body you know how to tear. The fabric of my life turn into pieces when, it frayed and split, showing what is now, and what was then.
You’ll never know the pain you caused; your heart does not exist. Blood bonded, tied together, however I might resist. The bonds I wish to break will never come undone. I learned from the past, you cannot always run. But here’s the fun of it for me, I’m free, and you’re done. Blood bonded tied together, blood bonded I have won.
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Old 11th July 2007, 06:02 PM   #212 (permalink)
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I really loved this Mirinda. It shows a lot of grief and hurt. But most importantly it shows the tearing down of the old with an acceptance of the new. New things to come, good things to come. Great!
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Old 11th July 2007, 09:21 PM   #213 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Timelord! I put alot of effort into it.

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Old 11th July 2007, 09:48 PM   #214 (permalink)
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we are all secondhand reflections,
mirroring all emotions spelled out
with useless nouns and arid adjectives,
morbid grammar and malicious verbs,
incendiary,inflammatory,derisive,
denouncing the just,condemning the compassionate,
a cenotaph for hope,the offal of
what could have been
should have been
but never was
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Old 11th July 2007, 10:11 PM   #215 (permalink)
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Wow Ben...that makes you think...or at least it made me stop and think.
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Old 12th July 2007, 12:58 AM   #216 (permalink)
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Love both Ben and Miranda!
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Old 12th July 2007, 01:16 AM   #217 (permalink)
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Thank you dustinzgirl its MirInda with an I by the way.
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Old 12th July 2007, 06:10 AM   #218 (permalink)
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Thank you dustinzgirl its MirInda with an I by the way.
Yeah thats confusing. I respect your name but will likely type with an A because I don't think things through all the time.
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Old 12th July 2007, 08:53 PM   #219 (permalink)
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okay then i'll respect that you (like me) don't think when you type Do you have any new poems dustinzgirl?
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Old 13th July 2007, 01:05 AM   #220 (permalink)
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okay then i'll respect that you (like me) don't think when you type Do you have any new poems dustinzgirl?
Not really, I've been overly stressed and nothing's coming out right.
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Old 13th July 2007, 04:30 AM   #221 (permalink)
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Well when you do I'll look forward to reading it.
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Old 13th July 2007, 05:24 AM   #222 (permalink)
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mirinda ,you are like
dew on the morning grass
a flight of ducks,
in solemn formation,
purposefully flying
in the only worthwhile direction,
a sea breeze
wafting in from
soothing climes,a breath of fresh air
in a world fighting a losing battle
with all that's good
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Old 14th July 2007, 01:31 AM   #223 (permalink)
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What can I say to that Ben? You are so sweet. You make me smile for that I thank you.
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Old 15th July 2007, 12:31 AM   #224 (permalink)
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Do I write poetry? Hmm. Well, I write things like this. Whether you'd call it poetry...

In Transit

Focus, focus…
Okay, welcome back.
Welcome back to the place where lies work and the truth hurts.
This cage for such over-tarnished flesh,
Barbarous thought and treacherous feeling.
Welcome to your life’s current: past, present, future.
Walk, don’t run.
Everyone reaches their end in the end.
Watch and see –
Passion, fear, anger, sorrow, joy, hope, love…
Warning! Prolonged use may cause vague feeling of dissatisfaction.
Death.
Please note: batteries not included.
See all this world has to offer.
Lion and tigers and bears,
Oh my.
Remember to make your mark.
(Crayon provided. Use more sheets if necessary).
Please don’t leave your questions till the end.
Ensure you have all your baggage when you disembark.
The management accept no responsibility for dreams lost in transit.
Thank you for travelling with us.
Missing you already…
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Old 15th July 2007, 01:04 AM   #225 (permalink)
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Man,you are so like me i just got spooked,bigtime
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