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22nd November 2001, 02:10 AM
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| My Final Fantasy  Join Date: May 2001 Location: Where ever I can find dead seksie bishounen
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| First, thanks for the pic. Second, it wasn't what I was thinking. I was thinking it looked like the attached pic. Third, YAY! Getting a lot written on this bad boy. Can't wait to see if Jack gets radioactive on us. Hey.. If you get bitten by a radioactive rat, do you turn into Ratman? I mean, Peter Parker got bit by a radioactive spider, and turned into Spiderman, so.....? Oh, and I know he didn't *turn* into Spiderman... Hyskos (my stupid Egyptian version of H***), does he get amazing rat powers? I hate all of you.  You make me pout Morrigan McPout |
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22nd November 2001, 02:21 AM
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| There can be only one!!  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| okay - you're welcome; no, it looks like the pic i posted; and yes i'm getting a lot written --- however, no - you don't turn into Rat Man if you're bitten by a radiated rat - and they don't have any powers except to be rats and bite -- so - no --- |
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22nd November 2001, 11:47 PM
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| There can be only one!! Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| <load game> *Great, more rats.* Jack and Ian make their way through the level, killing all the rats, avoiding too many bites. Ian's pretty good with that gun he has, but he uses too many bullets. Crazy man, should fight with his fists. "So, now what, Jack?" Ian tucked his pistol away. "Guess we ransack the place." Jack searched a locker and found some cool leather threads. He put them on, much better than that stupid jumpsuit. "Whaddya think, Ian?" "Eh, not bad, Jack. Look like a true 'Road Warrior'," Ian responded. "Great." Jack also grabbed the rope and other goodies from the locker, then scrambled around and snagged the box of bullets in the back. He did a quick perusal of the various bones and piles of rocks, then made his way back to the second elevator shaft, dropped the rope and shimmied down to level three. <save game> (psst -- save game OFTEN! so if you goof up, you can go back and fix it!) More rats met then at the base of the elevator shaft, including one of those Giant Mole Rats. "Hope your ready, Ian," Jack called, readying his fist and feet for battle. (good unarmed combat skills) The battle waged for several minutes, but finally, the rat was dead and Ian and Jack battle the smaller rats to clear their way. Jack located some ammunition in one of the abandonded rooms, which he added to his collection. In what appeared to be an old locker room, he found some dynamite and other weapons and a rope. Exiting this room and rounding a corner he examined a wall and gained 500 experience points for seeing that he would not be able to locate a water chip in this vault, as the way had been blocked by a cave-in of rocks. "Oh for cryin' out loud!" Jack rubbed his forehead and turned to walk to the other end of the corridor. "Ow! What the...." He looked down and noticed he had kicked something. A crowbar. He added this to his inventory. *Perfect, if I ever need to pry something open, I have the perfect tool.* "More rats over here, Jack." Ian was ready to annihilate more rodents at a moment's notice. Jack sauntered over to the corner to help Ian pick off the rats. He then made his way into the computer room, killing rats, and located another wall locker, retrieving the goodies from it too. *This stuff is starting to get heavy. I might have Ian carry some of it in a little bit.* "See anything else we need to punch, shoot, or otherwise maime, Ian?" "Nope. Think we got 'em all." "Let's move out." Jack and Ian returned to the surface and wandered back toward Shady Sands. <save game> |
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25th November 2001, 12:29 AM
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| CO, RDA's Leather Brigade  Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: South Carolina
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25th November 2001, 04:37 AM
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| There can be only one!! Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| <load game> Back at Shady Sands, Ian and Jack brushed the sand off, dumped it out of their boots and guns and underwear. Damn sand gets everywhere. Jack stood at the entrance to the town shaking sand out of his hair for fifteen minutes. Jack asked Seth, the man at the entrance, to show him to the Rad Scorpion caves, so he could help them out with that problem. "Man, are you crazy? Do you have any idea how many are in that cave?" Ian dragged his feet, not wanting to accompany Jack on this particular errand. "Ian, come on. Look, I'll even give you some stimpaks and another gun. Just don't shoot ME with it." Jack thrust a .10mm pistol into Ian's chest, along with some ammo and a couple stimpaks. "Fine," Ian grumbled and followed. *You're worse than Daniel. He'll at least come along, he'll want to look at rocks, but he'll come along.* Jack shook his head and followed the directions given him by Seth. They walked for about an hour and came to the mouth of a cave. "Jack, I'm not liking the looks of this place." "Ian, if you don't stop. Just come on. How hard can it be to kill a few over-sized scorpions?" Jack and Ian entered the cave slowly. Jack noticed that one of the walls appeared weaker than the others. "Guess we could drop an explosive there." He pointed toward the wall. "Yeah. Why don't we do that?" Ian found this idea much more appealing. "Because I need a sample of the poison for Razlo to make antidote." Jack waved forward. "Let's move out." Winding through the caves, finally they found a couple of Rad Scorpions. Jack took a couple shots, then Ian, then the scorpions would move in and attempt to attack, then Jack had another turn. The battle waged for several turns, Jack and Ian were both hit a couple times, but were not poisoned, and the scorpions perished. Jack snagged the tails and he and Ian ran back to the mouth of the cave. Jack set and laid the explosives, then the two hot-footed it out of that cave and dove into the sand, face-first, covering their heads from the explosion. "Okay, now that that's finished, let's head back and talk to Aradesh again." Jack stood and brushed some of the sand from himself. He located a canteen and took a drink, then handed it to Ian. "I'm all for getting away from Rad Scorpions. Raiders, thieves, bullies I can deal with, but big bugs - no thanks." "Right. I'll remember that." The two men trudged back across the hot sands and into town to tell Aradesh that the scorpions were no longer a problem, then off to see Doc Razlo for some antidote. Jack noticed a man moaning in pain in the back room. He crossed to the man and gave him a dose of the antidote (Jack had 2). The man felt better and thanked Jack profusely. "No problem." Jack rose and exited the doctor's building. "Allright, Ian, where to now?" "Junktown's good. Nice town, nice people, good stuff." "Great. Off we go." Jack and Ian bid farewell to Shady Sands and headed off to Junktown. <save game> |
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26th November 2001, 05:20 PM
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| There can be only one!! Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| <load game> Jack and Ian spent some time chatting about Junktown during their walk. "Oh, a piece of advice, don't get caught sneaking around Junktown," Ian offered. "Really? Why not?" Jack inquired, munching on a fruit. "It could get you landed in jail's why not. They're real particular about stuff like that there. Just watch your back." "Good advice, Ian. Good advice." Jack tossed the core of the fruit he was eating away and wiped off his hands on his pants. Several hot, burning miles later, they came across a pack of Rad Scorpions. "Oh, not these things again," Ian sighed, drawing his gun and shooting at the nearest over-sized, radiated, scorpion. Jack smirked and took several shots with his fists and feet at the scorpion nearest him. He glanced around, getting a lay of the land, and counting the scorpions - only four. Howver, there was no where to run and hide - just miles and miles of sand as far as the eye can see. The two men fought and finally defeated the scorpions, snagging the tails for sale at a later time. Jack had a feeling they would need bigger and better weapons later on, if he was going to find this water chip. "We're becoming old-hands at this, Ian." "Yeah. Sure. Keep those things away from me." *Wuss.* Jack shook his head, retrieved a dropped knife and started walking again. ******** At the gated entrance to Junktown, Ian and Jack had to stop and talk with a guard who told them it was okay to head on it, but to watch themselves. Jack nodded an agreement to the guard and crossed into the town. Noticing another guard just inside (and knowing how important it is to talk to everyone you meet in this game), he decided to say hello. From this guard he learned about a gang in town that was being a real pest, where to buy supplies, and where he could get some rest. It all sounded really good, he had even agreed to feed any information he got to Lars here, if he happened across anything helpful. Supplies sounded good, so he made his way to Killian Darkwater's store. (see below - attachment - pic of Killian) "I'd like to buy some things," Jack stated plainly. "Well, that's a damn fine coincidence. That's what this store's here for. Let me show you what I've got." (author's note - this is one of my favorite lines in the WHOLE game!) Jack and Killian chatter back and forth, discussing prices and such, and finally decide on a deal. Jack unloaded his scorpion tails and some other useless stuff and got some ammo and a couple guns in return. Then some lunatic came marching in with a sniper rifle and took a shot at Killian. Killian shot back, being the mayor and sherrif of the town and all, then Jack took a couple shots, so did Ian, and finally the assassin was killed. "Thanks for all your help," Killian told Jack. Then continued, "Now, I was wondering if you'd liked to help me out with something else? This guy, Gizmo's, been giving me a hard time and I need evidence to put him away." *Man, WHY do you look so familiar to me?* Jack had been staring at Killian the whole time, but could not figure this out; he was also hoping Killian did not think he was crazy. "Um, sure, yeah. Whaddya need?" "You've gotta wear a wire, or plant this bug in Gizmo's office. Either way, let me know when you've got the confession." "Sure. I think I can handle that. No problem." Jack accepted the wire and the bug, then headed off to find Gizmo, and on his way out, he stopped and looted the body of the assassin, snatching the sniper rifle, ammo, and money. (author's note: forgot this part -- had to add it in - he's gotta pick this stuff up now, b/c when he comes back, the body may or may not be there - weird game) "You are one strange man, you know that, Jack?" Ian stated. "Yeah? You're afraid of large bugs, so I think we're even," Jack spat. This guy was starting to bug him (no pun intended). Jack spotted Gizmo's place, but noticed a man being terrorized by an angry-looking dog. Taking a slight detour, Jack approached the man. "What's going on?" "That dog, he won't let us back into our house!" the man exclaimed. "Hmm." Jack crossed to the dog, who immediately vacated his post in front of the door and began following Jack. "That was easy enough." "Man, that dog is a menace. I wouldn't let him with in smacking range." The man then retreated into his house. Jack shrugged. The dog looked harmless enough to him. "What's your name, boy?" Jack asked, bending down to scratch behind the dog's ear. "Woof!" replied the dog. "All right. Whatever, Dogmeat. Come on." Jack turned and headed back toward Gizmo's place. <save game> |
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26th November 2001, 07:03 PM
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| There can be only one!! Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| yeah - it's hard tossing in the SG-1 comments - as you can tell, i can't get Sam and Teal'c into the convo -- i'll try to come up with something -- maybe i'll devise my own brand of 'random encounter' to get them in --- maybe Tanith or Apophis will drop in too ---- main thing is - i'm really good at writing Jack and suck at writing everyone else ---- but, i'll try to get everyone in here --- |
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26th November 2001, 07:31 PM
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| There can be only one!! Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Virginia
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| i'm working on it --- this one's easier than most of my others - no plot, no plan - well, except to find the water chip -- and i kinda know how it will end, b/c i've played the game several times -- playing it again now - i'll try to get my story caught up before i play much more --- |
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