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Old 12th February 2006, 04:31 PM   #57 (permalink)
Mark Robson
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Re: Imperial Spy

Balinor, it is a good point. I cut the scene where they met in Lower Mantor, as I didn't feel it added much to the story. Perhaps the hole there is a little bigger than I thought. It was obvious when they arrived together at Femke's prison that they had met - and not within the palace. Danar and Ennas arrived in Mantor incognito, looking to find out what had happened before approaching the Palace. Ennas, as a trained Imperial Spy, did not take long to find out what they needed to know. He sought to intercept one of Femke's original party in order to find out exactly what had happened to her. The person out and about most in the city was Reynik, which was fortunate for Femke - had it been one of the others, events might not have been so kind. It was logical for Ennas to meet Reynik - most of my storylines follow a sense of logic ... at least I think they do.
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