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Jessa · 25th July 2001, 03:06 PM

I totally agree. we like Jacob! anywayz the previous part was the last part for about 2and a half weks cos i am going on holiday and have no more time towrite another part.

soz! Jessa:blpaw:

jsc · 25th July 2001, 03:27 PM

Just as we were hooked on the Story, OFF JESSA goes...ON HOLIDAY!!! WHAT ABOUT US>>>your begining fan base?

Jessa · 25th July 2001, 04:19 PM

I AM really sorry but it can't be avoided. i mean i will be lieing around in the sun all day while everyone else in here. i wish i didn't have to go!!!

Jessa:blpaw:

nic · 25th July 2001, 07:19 PM

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Originally posted by Jessa
i mean i will be lieing around in the sun all day while everyone else in here
Jessa:blpaw:

:evil: :evil: :evil: I'm jealous!

jsc · 26th July 2001, 12:53 PM

Hopefully you will be lying around in the sun with paper and pen in hand!:rolly2: Enjoy your WRITING vacation!

sportzgirl16 · 26th July 2001, 04:26 PM

so when r u going to post more??

nic · 26th July 2001, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by jsc
Hopefully you will be lying around in the sun with paper and pen in hand!:rolly2: Enjoy your WRITING vacation!

I've got to hand it to you jsc. You know how to hint!:rolly2:

pamie · 26th July 2001, 08:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by nic

I've got to hand it to you jsc. You know how to hint!:rolly2:

Thats for sure

nic · 26th July 2001, 09:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pamie

Thats for sure

and she uses her cattle prod when she's really hinting!!:rolly2:
(just joking jsc!)

jsc · 27th July 2001, 02:11 PM

NIC, you are absolutely correct!

I learned to hint to my son, Asgard, who refuses to listen! He can not be moved by slathering guilt on him... so I gotta hint! even with the torture rod and bovine persuader....:evil:

Jessa · 13th August 2001, 04:08 PM

GUYS AND DOLLS!!!!!

i am back from my not-writing-2-weeks-in-the-sun (JSC!) and am raring to write!

Starting from tomorrow:evil::evil: :evil:

*Jessa smiles sweetly*

bye bye:evil: Jessa:blpaw:

sportzgirl16 · 13th August 2001, 08:01 PM

I'm excited to read some more!!!!
I've posted on mine if you want to check it out ...

Jessa · 14th August 2001, 03:34 PM

I've already read it thanx SG-16 And it is really good!! Right lets get started shall we? (again)

"ummm Colonol?" Sam said aftera while, "Do you know where Daniel is?"
"No" came the short reply "Sam? Do you remember when we were in 'hell'?"
"Yes" Sam said, wondering where he was going with this.
"and you know we went to save your Dad?"
"Yes" Sam said again
"Wouldn't the Tokra come to save us?" Sam saw right through what he was saying. He was trying to take her mind off her father. She smiled sadly but decided to reply.

"Maybe, i don't really know. I suppose they might because 1) Selmac is supposed to be one of the oldest and wisest Tok'ra nad 2) They might miss you and your sacastic humour."
Jack laughed grimly and ducked his head. "You flatter me." he said

It was much later when a guard came to take both Sam and Jack. Sam could pretty much guess where.
The guards dropped them in a huge hall, where Apophis was waiting
"So," he said to Sam "you have recovered." Sam looked away from his glare but looked straight in to the question-filled eyes of Jack, Shaking her head she mouthed she would tell him later.

Suddenly there was a noise outside and both Jacob and Daniel were bought in.
"Dad!" Sam said jumping to her feet. *Big mistake* she thought as a Jaffa guard bought down his weopen hard on her back, forcing Sam back to her knees.
Jack flinched as he saw the pain across Sam's face.

Daniel was dropped beside Sam and he looked at her with concern.
"Are you OK?" he asked. Sam nodded, but she was looking at her father who was wearing rich gold coloured robes. He wouldn't meet her eyes.

"What is your decision?2 Apophis asked Jacob. Jacob gritted his teeth.
"Go to HELL" he spat "I will never tell you anything." Apophis looked slightly triumphant.
"So be it. Guard" The jaffa guard knew exactly what was wanted of him and he moved forward almost eagaly. Hauling Sam to her feet he slammed her against a wall and fastened the chains around her wrists and ankles.

Sam suddenly knew with a horrible dread what was coming. and Apophis wouldn't stop torturing her until her father told him what he wanted to know. Even if it involved using the sarcofagus.

A moment later a searing pain gripped her body and tryed with all her might and courage not to scream. She failed miserably.

Review please. good or bad? must know....

Jessa:blpaw:

Jessa · 14th August 2001, 03:47 PM

Hang on!!!! i've an idea!!!

Apophis looked over at Jacob and smiled. He could see the emotions written over his face but his mouth remained closed. After a while of watching Jacob Apophis grew tired.

"Guard, step it up" he said and looked as Sam writhed in pain. He regretted doing this to her. She would've made a good host and wife but he had to sacrifice something.

Jack closed his eyes. He couldn't watch one of his best friends getting tortured. It was too much. Glancing over at Daniel he saw his eyes were also shut but emotions were strewn across his face. No matter what he did he couldn't blot out the sound of Sam's screams. They were etched into his mind.

Finally the screams stopped and a dread filled Jack's heart. She was dead. He opened his eyes and looked at her.
Her head was slumped sideways and a bright light was shining out of her eyes.

Apart from that she looked like she was sleeping and it crushed his heart. He lifted his head and gazed accusingly at Jacob, who wouldn't meet his eyes. Jack had a feeling Selmac was in control and that was the only reason Jacob was not telling Apophis everything he wanted to know.

Y'know this kinda seems a bit wierd now cos i was reading my SFX magazine the other day and it said EXACTLY what happens in the first episode of the new series.

STUPID MAGAZINE!!!!!

Jessa:blpaw:

sportzgirl16 · 14th August 2001, 09:53 PM

Nice Post!

25th July 2001, 03:06 PM	#46 (permalink)
Jessa aka Padfoot Join Date: May 2001 Location: can't remember. if i don't know if i'm human, what makes u think i can remember where i live? Posts: 3,424	I totally agree. we like Jacob! anywayz the previous part was the last part for about 2and a half weks cos i am going on holiday and have no more time towrite another part. soz! Jessa:blpaw:

25th July 2001, 03:27 PM	#47 (permalink)
jsc God Like Member Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Los Angeles, California,U.S.A. Posts: 4,352	Just as we were hooked on the Story, OFF JESSA goes...ON HOLIDAY!!! WHAT ABOUT US>>>your begining fan base?

25th July 2001, 04:19 PM	#48 (permalink)
Jessa aka Padfoot Join Date: May 2001 Location: can't remember. if i don't know if i'm human, what makes u think i can remember where i live? Posts: 3,424	I AM really sorry but it can't be avoided. i mean i will be lieing around in the sun all day while everyone else in here. i wish i didn't have to go!!! Jessa:blpaw:

26th July 2001, 12:53 PM	#50 (permalink)
jsc God Like Member Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Los Angeles, California,U.S.A. Posts: 4,352	Hopefully you will be lying around in the sun with paper and pen in hand!:rolly2: Enjoy your WRITING vacation!

26th July 2001, 04:26 PM	#51 (permalink)
sportzgirl16 Moderator Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Ohio-State Univ Posts: 790	so when r u going to post more??

27th July 2001, 02:11 PM	#55 (permalink)
jsc God Like Member Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Los Angeles, California,U.S.A. Posts: 4,352	NIC, you are absolutely correct! I learned to hint to my son, Asgard, who refuses to listen! He can not be moved by slathering guilt on him... so I gotta hint! even with the torture rod and bovine persuader....:evil:

13th August 2001, 04:08 PM	#56 (permalink)
Jessa aka Padfoot Join Date: May 2001 Location: can't remember. if i don't know if i'm human, what makes u think i can remember where i live? Posts: 3,424	GUYS AND DOLLS!!!!! i am back from my not-writing-2-weeks-in-the-sun (JSC!) and am raring to write! Starting from tomorrow:evil::evil: :evil: Jessa smiles sweetly bye bye:evil: Jessa:blpaw:

13th August 2001, 08:01 PM	#57 (permalink)
sportzgirl16 Moderator Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Ohio-State Univ Posts: 790	I'm excited to read some more!!!! I've posted on mine if you want to check it out ...

14th August 2001, 03:34 PM	#58 (permalink)
Jessa aka Padfoot Join Date: May 2001 Location: can't remember. if i don't know if i'm human, what makes u think i can remember where i live? Posts: 3,424	I've already read it thanx SG-16 And it is really good!! Right lets get started shall we? (again) "ummm Colonol?" Sam said aftera while, "Do you know where Daniel is?" "No" came the short reply "Sam? Do you remember when we were in 'hell'?" "Yes" Sam said, wondering where he was going with this. "and you know we went to save your Dad?" "Yes" Sam said again "Wouldn't the Tokra come to save us?" Sam saw right through what he was saying. He was trying to take her mind off her father. She smiled sadly but decided to reply. "Maybe, i don't really know. I suppose they might because 1) Selmac is supposed to be one of the oldest and wisest Tok'ra nad 2) They might miss you and your sacastic humour." Jack laughed grimly and ducked his head. "You flatter me." he said It was much later when a guard came to take both Sam and Jack. Sam could pretty much guess where. The guards dropped them in a huge hall, where Apophis was waiting "So," he said to Sam "you have recovered." Sam looked away from his glare but looked straight in to the question-filled eyes of Jack, Shaking her head she mouthed she would tell him later. Suddenly there was a noise outside and both Jacob and Daniel were bought in. "Dad!" Sam said jumping to her feet. Big mistake she thought as a Jaffa guard bought down his weopen hard on her back, forcing Sam back to her knees. Jack flinched as he saw the pain across Sam's face. Daniel was dropped beside Sam and he looked at her with concern. "Are you OK?" he asked. Sam nodded, but she was looking at her father who was wearing rich gold coloured robes. He wouldn't meet her eyes. "What is your decision?2 Apophis asked Jacob. Jacob gritted his teeth. "Go to HELL" he spat "I will never tell you anything." Apophis looked slightly triumphant. "So be it. Guard" The jaffa guard knew exactly what was wanted of him and he moved forward almost eagaly. Hauling Sam to her feet he slammed her against a wall and fastened the chains around her wrists and ankles. Sam suddenly knew with a horrible dread what was coming. and Apophis wouldn't stop torturing her until her father told him what he wanted to know. Even if it involved using the sarcofagus. A moment later a searing pain gripped her body and tryed with all her might and courage not to scream. She failed miserably. Review please. good or bad? must know.... Jessa:blpaw:

14th August 2001, 03:47 PM	#59 (permalink)
Jessa aka Padfoot Join Date: May 2001 Location: can't remember. if i don't know if i'm human, what makes u think i can remember where i live? Posts: 3,424	Hang on!!!! i've an idea!!! Apophis looked over at Jacob and smiled. He could see the emotions written over his face but his mouth remained closed. After a while of watching Jacob Apophis grew tired. "Guard, step it up" he said and looked as Sam writhed in pain. He regretted doing this to her. She would've made a good host and wife but he had to sacrifice something. Jack closed his eyes. He couldn't watch one of his best friends getting tortured. It was too much. Glancing over at Daniel he saw his eyes were also shut but emotions were strewn across his face. No matter what he did he couldn't blot out the sound of Sam's screams. They were etched into his mind. Finally the screams stopped and a dread filled Jack's heart. She was dead. He opened his eyes and looked at her. Her head was slumped sideways and a bright light was shining out of her eyes. Apart from that she looked like she was sleeping and it crushed his heart. He lifted his head and gazed accusingly at Jacob, who wouldn't meet his eyes. Jack had a feeling Selmac was in control and that was the only reason Jacob was not telling Apophis everything he wanted to know. Y'know this kinda seems a bit wierd now cos i was reading my SFX magazine the other day and it said EXACTLY what happens in the first episode of the new series. STUPID MAGAZINE!!!!! Jessa:blpaw:

14th August 2001, 09:53 PM	#60 (permalink)
sportzgirl16 Moderator Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Ohio-State Univ Posts: 790	Nice Post!