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MsGudBod · 7th July 2001, 11:57 AM

NO i didn't know that, Bee. I didn't even realize anyone else posted in here, to be honest. I only started because i got an itch one day to write about a relation for Tyr when i saw a near miss in my opinion, episode about him one day.

Now i owe you guys an apology. I have the part i told you guys about and i will PM it to you as soon as i finish typing it. But here is Part 3. Look for Pt 4 in PM.

Criss Cross Pt III

He did his usual tinkering and mechanical perusing as he complained to no one in general, as there was no one there with him. So he thought anyway. “Old Seamus Harper to the rescue.” He mimicked “As usual I get the ship and he gets the girl.”

“But mechanics is your forte. Why not stick to something you’re good at.” Romi, the ship’s avatar, says as she quietly approaches.

“Ha, ha, ha. I don’t remember programming that sarcastic humor as a part of your sub-routine.” He almost sneered. “Anyway, what are you doing here?” He inquires of her sudden presence aboard their ‘visitor’s’ vessel.

“Call it woman’s intuition, call it a warship’s defensive, but I just don’t believe her when she says she is an ally. Her vital signs exceeded normal each time an allegiance with the Commonwealth was mentioned. First when she meet Dylan here and even now as they discuss it alone.

“If we are to be allies, maybe we should know more of each other than just names.” Dylan had said before taking a seat across from her at the intimate little table.

“True, Captain.” The visitor called Zura, said as she demurely lowered her chocolate gaze. She new that this particular pose was most captivating on the opposite sex, had been taught all her technique by the best. With the glow of her burnish gold curls and her golden brown complexion she was beautiful, and she knew it. She also knew what questions that he would want answered too. Questions that she dare not answer too soon.

“Atleast, for starters, why you are traveling alone in a Highguard High Official vessel?” Dylan asked pointedly. The expression on his handsome face stating he would have the truth and nothing more.
The elation she felt was overwhelming. This question, though anticipated, was not the one that she feared. This question, she could answer truthfully. “I was not alone, when my journey began, but had a full crew and a ‘Royal’ contingent as well.”

“That must have been at least 30 or 40 people.”

“52 to be exact, including me.” She coolly supplied.

“Whew!” he let out on a whistle. “Must have been some royalty.”

“She was. She was to be an ambassador between our people…before the war.”

More than a little interested now Dylan stood to reply in disbelief “Are you telling me you are from the past? A Nietzchean ambassador on a Highguard vessel bound for Tarinfadra over 300 years ago?”

“Yes, And no. Yes, the ship was sent to escort the ambassador to Tarinfadra 300 years ago, but no I was not that ambassador. The ship was dubbed “klugeni” by the would be ambassador, Kolas. However, the criss cross of a Highguard vessel given a Nietzchean name, which was intended as symbol of our two peoples merger, was not accepted by enemy prides. We were attacked in route. All were killed, but I. I lay asleep in a stasis chamber until 3 months ago. I awoke to an empty ship on a collision course with an Asteroid belt. I emergency slipstreamed and the rest is as your people say “history”.

Exhaling on a sigh of incredulity, Dylan says “well.” As he rises from the chair he had taken halfway through her explanation “That’s an amazing story. One that I would find very hard to believe if something similar hadn’t happened to me, but why were you in stasis?”

She allowed her robe to part mid-thigh as she crossed her supple legs before answering “It was known that I adhorred long flights, but was greatly needed as a calming effect for my sister. We only have…excuse me had each other. So I agreed to accompany her in stasis.”

Fighting the sudden heat within himself, Dylan tore his eyes from her golden flesh as he wondered just how bare she was beneath that robe, but instead replied “Kolas was your sister?”

“Yes. I am now last of the house of Yar.”

“I’m sorry for your lose, Zura. Maybe with the Andromeda’s help you can find what remains of your people and your home. What pride do you belong to?”

There it was. The question she had feared. The one she would rather not answer just yet. As a diversionary tactic she brought up Tyr. “Thank you, Captain. That would be most appreciated however as female I am not bound by any one pride. We have the choice to join any pride we wish, because we alone choose our mates. The Nietzchean I meet earlier is he a part of your crew?”

“Yes, but more expressly Tyr belongs to Tyr.”

“How cryptic, Captain.”

“ No, just Tyr.”

peachy · 7th July 2001, 02:39 PM

oohhh don't forget me when your pm'ing out part
4, this is great...peachy

imported_Bee · 8th July 2001, 12:07 AM

*Bee checks her PM box. Nothing yet. *

That was great MGB. Can't wait for more.

*Bee rushes to her PM box again*

How long does it take you to type?

KatDonovan · 9th July 2001, 11:14 PM

Ooh, very good MGB! When you gonna PM us the next part? I keep checking my pm box as well, and there's nothing there

Can't wait! Keep it coming! Please!!

MsGudBod · 10th July 2001, 09:38 AM

Thanks guys. and Part 4 has been PM-ed to you. Let me know if you don't get it. Now I have to get back in my Teal'c mode and get back to writting "What if SG-1 came to visit...again?"

Someone send me a little inspiration.

Oh and Kat have you posted in your fic, yet? Never mind i'll just pop in and give you a boost.

:upto:

imported_Bee · 10th July 2001, 11:03 PM

One question, is part 5 going to be anything like part 4?

Can't wait for the next part.

I thought with 'threshold' you would have plenty of inspiration

peachy · 11th July 2001, 04:04 PM

after reading part 4 (phew) can't wait for part 5
hope it can live up to part 4:evil:
...peachy

Maria8475 · 11th July 2001, 04:16 PM

ooo i only just discovered Andromeda fic and really like yours!!! Can i get a copy of part 4 too, please? Pretty please?

:star:

imported_Bee · 11th July 2001, 09:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Maria8475
ooo i only just discovered Andromeda fic and really like yours!!! Can i get a copy of part 4 too, please? Pretty please?

:star:

*Bee starts in her best voiceover tone*

Part 4 has an age restriction. Do you meet the age requirements? You must be 18 or older to read this section. Please PM MGB if you meet this fic's criteria.

And thank you for reading MGB's fic

imported_Bee · 11th July 2001, 09:31 PM

*Bee's voiceover starts again*

Maria in checking your profile I've noticed you do meet the age requirements. MGB, please PM her with part 4. The members on this thread can not be held responsible for any embarrassment or shock one recieves in reading this section.

And once again thank you for reading MGB's fic

KatDonovan · 11th July 2001, 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by MsGudBod
Thanks guys. and Part 4 has been PM-ed to you. Let me know if you don't get it. Now I have to get back in my Teal'c mode and get back to writting "What if SG-1 came to visit...again?"

Someone send me a little inspiration.

Oh and Kat have you posted in your fic, yet? Never mind i'll just pop in and give you a boost. :upto:

yes I've posted on mine! So, when's part 5 coming?

KatDonovan · 11th July 2001, 11:17 PM

Geez Bee!

ROTFLMAO!! :laugh2: :laugh2:

That's hilarious! You do have a good point about the age restriction tho, don't want to corrupt the kiddies out there :evil:

Tho, now anyone who reads this thread is really gonna wonder what is in part 4 LOL:lol:

imported_Bee · 11th July 2001, 11:32 PM

Let them wonder. We already know:evil:

:evil:

Maria8475 · 12th July 2001, 02:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bee
*Bee's voiceover starts again*

Maria in checking your profile I've noticed you do meet the age requirements. MGB, please PM her with part 4. The members on this thread can not be held responsible for any embarrassment or shock one recieves in reading this section.

And once again thank you for reading MGB's fic

wow, you've done my work for me! And i enjoy embarasment and shock, so don't worry about me!

:star:

KatDonovan · 13th July 2001, 04:45 PM

Ok, MGB! Where is it? Where's part 5? We need more fic!!!

11th July 2001, 11:32 PM	#43 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Let them wonder. We already know:evil: :evil: :evil:

7th July 2001, 11:57 AM	#31 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	NO i didn't know that, Bee. I didn't even realize anyone else posted in here, to be honest. I only started because i got an itch one day to write about a relation for Tyr when i saw a near miss in my opinion, episode about him one day. Now i owe you guys an apology. I have the part i told you guys about and i will PM it to you as soon as i finish typing it. But here is Part 3. Look for Pt 4 in PM. Criss Cross Pt III He did his usual tinkering and mechanical perusing as he complained to no one in general, as there was no one there with him. So he thought anyway. “Old Seamus Harper to the rescue.” He mimicked “As usual I get the ship and he gets the girl.” “But mechanics is your forte. Why not stick to something you’re good at.” Romi, the ship’s avatar, says as she quietly approaches. “Ha, ha, ha. I don’t remember programming that sarcastic humor as a part of your sub-routine.” He almost sneered. “Anyway, what are you doing here?” He inquires of her sudden presence aboard their ‘visitor’s’ vessel. “Call it woman’s intuition, call it a warship’s defensive, but I just don’t believe her when she says she is an ally. Her vital signs exceeded normal each time an allegiance with the Commonwealth was mentioned. First when she meet Dylan here and even now as they discuss it alone. “If we are to be allies, maybe we should know more of each other than just names.” Dylan had said before taking a seat across from her at the intimate little table. “True, Captain.” The visitor called Zura, said as she demurely lowered her chocolate gaze. She new that this particular pose was most captivating on the opposite sex, had been taught all her technique by the best. With the glow of her burnish gold curls and her golden brown complexion she was beautiful, and she knew it. She also knew what questions that he would want answered too. Questions that she dare not answer too soon. “Atleast, for starters, why you are traveling alone in a Highguard High Official vessel?” Dylan asked pointedly. The expression on his handsome face stating he would have the truth and nothing more. The elation she felt was overwhelming. This question, though anticipated, was not the one that she feared. This question, she could answer truthfully. “I was not alone, when my journey began, but had a full crew and a ‘Royal’ contingent as well.” “That must have been at least 30 or 40 people.” “52 to be exact, including me.” She coolly supplied. “Whew!” he let out on a whistle. “Must have been some royalty.” “She was. She was to be an ambassador between our people…before the war.” More than a little interested now Dylan stood to reply in disbelief “Are you telling me you are from the past? A Nietzchean ambassador on a Highguard vessel bound for Tarinfadra over 300 years ago?” “Yes, And no. Yes, the ship was sent to escort the ambassador to Tarinfadra 300 years ago, but no I was not that ambassador. The ship was dubbed “klugeni” by the would be ambassador, Kolas. However, the criss cross of a Highguard vessel given a Nietzchean name, which was intended as symbol of our two peoples merger, was not accepted by enemy prides. We were attacked in route. All were killed, but I. I lay asleep in a stasis chamber until 3 months ago. I awoke to an empty ship on a collision course with an Asteroid belt. I emergency slipstreamed and the rest is as your people say “history”. Exhaling on a sigh of incredulity, Dylan says “well.” As he rises from the chair he had taken halfway through her explanation “That’s an amazing story. One that I would find very hard to believe if something similar hadn’t happened to me, but why were you in stasis?” She allowed her robe to part mid-thigh as she crossed her supple legs before answering “It was known that I adhorred long flights, but was greatly needed as a calming effect for my sister. We only have…excuse me had each other. So I agreed to accompany her in stasis.” Fighting the sudden heat within himself, Dylan tore his eyes from her golden flesh as he wondered just how bare she was beneath that robe, but instead replied “Kolas was your sister?” “Yes. I am now last of the house of Yar.” “I’m sorry for your lose, Zura. Maybe with the Andromeda’s help you can find what remains of your people and your home. What pride do you belong to?” There it was. The question she had feared. The one she would rather not answer just yet. As a diversionary tactic she brought up Tyr. “Thank you, Captain. That would be most appreciated however as female I am not bound by any one pride. We have the choice to join any pride we wish, because we alone choose our mates. The Nietzchean I meet earlier is he a part of your crew?” “Yes, but more expressly Tyr belongs to Tyr.” “How cryptic, Captain.” “ No, just Tyr.”

7th July 2001, 02:39 PM	#32 (permalink)
peachy Daniels Beloved Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: i commute between cheyenne mountain & scotland Posts: 2,952	oohhh don't forget me when your pm'ing out part 4, this is great...peachy

8th July 2001, 12:07 AM	#33 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Bee checks her PM box. Nothing yet. That was great MGB. Can't wait for more. Bee rushes to her PM box again How long does it take you to type?

9th July 2001, 11:14 PM	#34 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	Ooh, very good MGB! When you gonna PM us the next part? I keep checking my pm box as well, and there's nothing there Can't wait! Keep it coming! Please!!

10th July 2001, 09:38 AM	#35 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	Thanks guys. and Part 4 has been PM-ed to you. Let me know if you don't get it. Now I have to get back in my Teal'c mode and get back to writting "What if SG-1 came to visit...again?" Someone send me a little inspiration. Oh and Kat have you posted in your fic, yet? Never mind i'll just pop in and give you a boost. :upto:

10th July 2001, 11:03 PM	#36 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	One question, is part 5 going to be anything like part 4? Can't wait for the next part. I thought with 'threshold' you would have plenty of inspiration

11th July 2001, 04:04 PM	#37 (permalink)
peachy Daniels Beloved Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: i commute between cheyenne mountain & scotland Posts: 2,952	after reading part 4 (phew) can't wait for part 5 hope it can live up to part 4:evil: ...peachy

11th July 2001, 04:16 PM	#38 (permalink)
Maria8475 It goes on..... Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 4,690	ooo i only just discovered Andromeda fic and really like yours!!! Can i get a copy of part 4 too, please? Pretty please? :star:

11th July 2001, 09:31 PM	#40 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Bee's voiceover starts again Maria in checking your profile I've noticed you do meet the age requirements. MGB, please PM her with part 4. The members on this thread can not be held responsible for any embarrassment or shock one recieves in reading this section. And once again thank you for reading MGB's fic

11th July 2001, 11:17 PM	#42 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	Geez Bee! ROTFLMAO!! :laugh2: :laugh2: That's hilarious! You do have a good point about the age restriction tho, don't want to corrupt the kiddies out there :evil: Tho, now anyone who reads this thread is really gonna wonder what is in part 4 LOL:lol:

13th July 2001, 04:45 PM	#45 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	Ok, MGB! Where is it? Where's part 5? We need more fic!!!