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imported_Bee · 28th June 2001, 10:52 PM

Tread is great. I wouldn't mind meeting him, but my fav has to be Gian Ren. I would help him with his incarnations anytime

MsGudBod · 30th June 2001, 12:18 PM

Traed is very interesting, could have died when he sparked what's her name in "Rejar"
Gian Ren had me wishing for an incarnation or two also.
But it's just something about Rejars sleek sexy ways. I can't even say or think Rejar without flashes of him in all his glory. You must admit he knows how to get his "point" across. I would love to be chastized by him anytime.

:blush:

MsGudBod · 30th June 2001, 12:24 PM

Well here is a bit more of "Criss Cross"

Criss Cross Pt. 2

“It’s hailing us, Captain.” Harper says as he patches the message thru to the intercom system.
“Hello, this is the Nietzchean vessel ‘Kludgeni’ requesting assistance.” A female voice announced.
“This is Captain Dylan Hunt. What kind of assistance do you require?”
“My ship seems to have been injured as I exited slipstream. I am in need of an engineer’s assistance in making repairs.”
“I think we can be of assistance. Disengage your shields and come aboard.”
She disengages her deflector shields and Harper engages. Pressing buttons on his control panel. Harper gleefully declares “Kludgeni birthed on deck 12.”

The hatch of the ship opens to the sight of a small female dressed in a long billowing gray robe. The cowl of the hood hide her face, but the crew knew her to be female. It was blatantly obvious to all as she descended the steps and the robe parted to show just a tease of her shapely calfs and delicate small feet, bare feet. She kept her head slightly bowed as she approached the contingent before her.

As Tyr, Dylan, and Harper awaited her arrival they each had different contemplative thoughts. All of which their female visitor could hear as well. She could tell the shorter fairer haired one was of little threat to her , but the other two, she sensed, would indeed pose a threat. But of the two it was the Nietzchean that she would have to guard herself against the most. His superior senses would tell him more than his perfect vision ever could. They were engineered that way genetically. That was exactly why he would have to be the one she chose. And thank freya too. He was causing her body to go haywire. Her senses, like her nerve endings were all on edge. She would need a distraction. Now, before she gave too much away.
She stops before Captain Hunt to bow slightly. “Thank you very much for your help, Captain?” she says in a seeking manner.
Dylan speaks up “You’re welcome. The Commonwealth is at your service.”
“Commonwealth?”
“Yes, are you familiar with the Commonwealth?”
“Yes, Captain. We are allies.” She replied, but somehow there just didn’t seem to be any sincerity in those words.

KatDonovan · 30th June 2001, 04:46 PM

Ooh, more fic! HOORAY, HOORAY!! What a wonderful day!

*KatD does her happy dance*

Very good MGB!! Me like it lots.

(can ya tell?)

Yeah, Gian Ren is so sexy, and Rejar could chastise me anytime

, but there's just something to be said about Traed and sparkage!!:naughty: :naughty:

imported_Bee · 30th June 2001, 10:13 PM

Sparkage, chastizement, incarnations!

WOW! I'm getting hot over here.

I think I just might have to read all of those books again

The fic is great MGB. I'm waiting for more. For some reason I think Tyr is going to have a major part. I wonder why that is

MsGudBod · 2nd July 2001, 03:15 PM

I don't know, could it be because you know that the author has a thing for the big guy? LOL

But i hope to give Dylan a substantial role in here too. Kind of have a sweet tooth for him too, but Tyr as the strong silent type, just does something to me.

:blush:

then again i may turn it into a comedy. :alienooh:

imported_Bee · 2nd July 2001, 10:00 PM

Any way you want to write it honey. Just write it!

After all your bragging I feel I have to live up to the title so....
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

peachy · 3rd July 2001, 04:10 PM

need more fic mgb, this is great...peachy

KatDonovan · 4th July 2001, 01:38 AM

NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

LOL :lol:

imported_Bee · 4th July 2001, 04:18 PM

Have to keep my title, so....

NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!
NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

Write somemore soon, MGB! You know I only come in this thread for your fic

imported_Bee · 6th July 2001, 12:32 AM

Okay MGB, I noticed you changed your avatar back to Tyr. That should give you some inspiration for this fic. Girl, where's the next part?

MsGudBod · 6th July 2001, 09:59 AM

oh boy, am i inspired. :blush: I don't think i can post what i wrote however. Maybe i'll just have to post something like "PM me for next part" It might get me a strike on my until now unblemished record if i posted it openly, but then there is only us here. Let me know what you think. I'll start typing it so it'll ve ready. k.

imported_Bee · 6th July 2001, 09:32 PM

K

But you know that you can just PM me anytime. I don't mind a bit

KatDonovan · 7th July 2001, 12:35 AM

You can PM it to me MGB!! I'll definately read it !!

PM
PM
PM
PM
PM

LOL :lol:

imported_Bee · 7th July 2001, 01:13 AM

Hey MGB,

Did you know you have the most replies on a fic in this section?

I think we must be more naggy then the other poster here. What do you think?

28th June 2001, 10:52 PM	#16 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Tread is great. I wouldn't mind meeting him, but my fav has to be Gian Ren. I would help him with his incarnations anytime

30th June 2001, 12:18 PM	#17 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	Traed is very interesting, could have died when he sparked what's her name in "Rejar" Gian Ren had me wishing for an incarnation or two also. But it's just something about Rejars sleek sexy ways. I can't even say or think Rejar without flashes of him in all his glory. You must admit he knows how to get his "point" across. I would love to be chastized by him anytime. :blush:

30th June 2001, 12:24 PM	#18 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	Well here is a bit more of "Criss Cross" Criss Cross Pt. 2 “It’s hailing us, Captain.” Harper says as he patches the message thru to the intercom system. “Hello, this is the Nietzchean vessel ‘Kludgeni’ requesting assistance.” A female voice announced. “This is Captain Dylan Hunt. What kind of assistance do you require?” “My ship seems to have been injured as I exited slipstream. I am in need of an engineer’s assistance in making repairs.” “I think we can be of assistance. Disengage your shields and come aboard.” She disengages her deflector shields and Harper engages. Pressing buttons on his control panel. Harper gleefully declares “Kludgeni birthed on deck 12.” The hatch of the ship opens to the sight of a small female dressed in a long billowing gray robe. The cowl of the hood hide her face, but the crew knew her to be female. It was blatantly obvious to all as she descended the steps and the robe parted to show just a tease of her shapely calfs and delicate small feet, bare feet. She kept her head slightly bowed as she approached the contingent before her. As Tyr, Dylan, and Harper awaited her arrival they each had different contemplative thoughts. All of which their female visitor could hear as well. She could tell the shorter fairer haired one was of little threat to her , but the other two, she sensed, would indeed pose a threat. But of the two it was the Nietzchean that she would have to guard herself against the most. His superior senses would tell him more than his perfect vision ever could. They were engineered that way genetically. That was exactly why he would have to be the one she chose. And thank freya too. He was causing her body to go haywire. Her senses, like her nerve endings were all on edge. She would need a distraction. Now, before she gave too much away. She stops before Captain Hunt to bow slightly. “Thank you very much for your help, Captain?” she says in a seeking manner. Dylan speaks up “You’re welcome. The Commonwealth is at your service.” “Commonwealth?” “Yes, are you familiar with the Commonwealth?” “Yes, Captain. We are allies.” She replied, but somehow there just didn’t seem to be any sincerity in those words.

30th June 2001, 04:46 PM	#19 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	Ooh, more fic! HOORAY, HOORAY!! What a wonderful day! KatD does her happy dance Very good MGB!! Me like it lots. (can ya tell?) Yeah, Gian Ren is so sexy, and Rejar could chastise me anytime , but there's just something to be said about Traed and sparkage!!:naughty: :naughty:

30th June 2001, 10:13 PM	#20 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Sparkage, chastizement, incarnations! WOW! I'm getting hot over here. I think I just might have to read all of those books again The fic is great MGB. I'm waiting for more. For some reason I think Tyr is going to have a major part. I wonder why that is

2nd July 2001, 03:15 PM	#21 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	I don't know, could it be because you know that the author has a thing for the big guy? LOL But i hope to give Dylan a substantial role in here too. Kind of have a sweet tooth for him too, but Tyr as the strong silent type, just does something to me. :blush: then again i may turn it into a comedy. :alienooh:

2nd July 2001, 10:00 PM	#22 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Any way you want to write it honey. Just write it! After all your bragging I feel I have to live up to the title so.... NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON!

3rd July 2001, 04:10 PM	#23 (permalink)
peachy Daniels Beloved Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: i commute between cheyenne mountain & scotland Posts: 2,952	need more fic mgb, this is great...peachy

4th July 2001, 01:38 AM	#24 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! LOL :lol:

4th July 2001, 04:18 PM	#25 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Have to keep my title, so.... NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! NAG, NAG, NAG, MORE, MORE, MORE, SOON, SOON, SOON! Write somemore soon, MGB! You know I only come in this thread for your fic

6th July 2001, 12:32 AM	#26 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Okay MGB, I noticed you changed your avatar back to Tyr. That should give you some inspiration for this fic. Girl, where's the next part?

6th July 2001, 09:59 AM	#27 (permalink)
MsGudBod Cherokee Pride Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Louisiana Posts: 1,234	oh boy, am i inspired. :blush: I don't think i can post what i wrote however. Maybe i'll just have to post something like "PM me for next part" It might get me a strike on my until now unblemished record if i posted it openly, but then there is only us here. Let me know what you think. I'll start typing it so it'll ve ready. k.

6th July 2001, 09:32 PM	#28 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	K But you know that you can just PM me anytime. I don't mind a bit

7th July 2001, 12:35 AM	#29 (permalink)
KatDonovan Slainte` Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: Cape Girardeau, Missouri USA Posts: 1,608	You can PM it to me MGB!! I'll definately read it !! PM PM PM PM PM LOL :lol:

7th July 2001, 01:13 AM	#30 (permalink)
imported_Bee Who likes to play w/Legos Join Date: May 2001 Location: Missouri Posts: 1,766	Hey MGB, Did you know you have the most replies on a fic in this section? I think we must be more naggy then the other poster here. What do you think?