Re: Emmisary (about 1300 words)...
Yeah, I felt something was a bit off with it. Now I know what to work on.
And yes, English is my second language, sorry. Perhaps I just can't pull off the flow well enough for a written text. Even though I am positive most of my countrymen are worse in English than I am, the shortcomings will be picked up by those who knows English as a first language.
Thanks for your time, and sorry it bored you!