Thread: please critique and proof read.
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Old 31st May 2012, 03:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
Jammill Khursheed
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Re: please critique and proof read.
Huxley...

You've centre-aligned the wrong bits straight off... I'll do a more in-depth crit once I've actually read it


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