Originally Posted by Bowler1
Have a good nose around this site and other posts that have been reviewed on crituques, see what other members think works and not of course. I still do that myself, go study corrections made by other members and ask myself, would I have written this way.
Your idea is yours, develop it as you see fit Myra, there is no right or wrong.
Yeah I will do that and I will definitely take my time in shaping the Prologue and the first couple of chapters with the suggestion you have given me.
Thank you for your input, Bowler
I will start thinking on it and not rush through anything