15th April 2012, 08:23 PM
Mad Mountain Man
Join Date: Jun 2010
Re: Writing Workshop Group - TOEGTW Exercise Discussion: Please Read First Post
I cheated a little with the restatement exercise in that I took a recent post of mine and adapted it . I will try and take a closer look at the posted submissions and comment on them but I don't think it will be until tomorrow (dinner is calling now). Actually I have a bit of a problem with the restatement stuff, although it may just be a terminology thing. To me restatement means to say the same thing several times in different ways. But all the examples in this chapter seem to be saying different things in the same way. This seems to me more like the syntactic patterning from ch13.