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Old 7th April 2012, 10:27 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Re: Writing Workshop Group - TOEGTW Exercise Discussion: Please Read First Post

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Originally Posted by Vertigo View Post
...you actually seemed to introduce extra words…
I did. The constraint of trying to retain the original words meant, for me, that I had to introduce additional words to make it clear. I would have preferred to assign the original piece to the bin, and start afresh.

Please don't worry about the 200 wd thing. I was just sharing some ideas I'd worked with before. You're right. I don't think they would work here.
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