Originally Posted by Vertigo
...you actually seemed to introduce extra words…
I did. The constraint of trying to retain the original words meant, for me, that I had to introduce additional words to make it clear. I would have preferred to assign the original piece to the bin, and start afresh.
Please don't worry about the 200 wd thing. I was just sharing some ideas I'd worked with before. You're right. I don't think they would work here.