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Old 4th April 2012, 01:20 AM   #25 (permalink)
Gumboot
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Re: When to do the reveal

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Originally Posted by I, Brian View Post
Secrets are only secrets if the POV characters really don't know - or are really suprressing it IMO.

If it's easy for a reader to figure, then the characters look dumb and not worth reading.

Hence why you have to be a good writer, who hides the clues in such a way that in retrospect you recognise them, but at the time they're not obvious.

Anyone can throw in a reveal that comes out of left field. There's zero cleverness in that, and frankly as a reader or audience member it's the sort of thing I despise. Too many "twist films" do this, and it's condescending towards the audience.

"Hah, you didn't see this coming!"
"Of course I didn't you didn't foreshadow it, you tool!"

Foreshadowing is an artform in itself.
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