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Old 7th March 2012, 09:43 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Naive Characters

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Originally Posted by Warren_Paul View Post
Okay, thanks for the responses. The PoV is not very bright in first half of the story - this is part of his development through the story-, everyone else around him sees it and get a good laugh out of it. Half the problem with him is that he likes another girl, so his blindness to the first girl's feelings for him is because of his feelings for the second girl, and the fact that they have all been friends for years before it started to become something more.

love triangles eh?
That should work. Friendship can make it hard to change mental gears to more-than-friendship. Throw in another romantic interest, even if it's unrequited, and your poor POV character should be totally blind to her feelings for him.
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