Originally Posted by juelz4sure
First I want to thank star beast and perpetual man just for the mention thank you and I can‘t wait till next month‘s challege.
I really liked your tale, it reminded me of the stories I used to read in horror comics. However I felt you missed on the theme "what lies beneath", a small mistake, but your tale was very well written.
I'm curious about what you'll come up with on the next challenge.