| Re: Synopsis - Mayhem
Is this an official synopsis? The sort you would submit to an agent or publisher? If so, I think you'll need to sum things up a littler quicker and neater; a lot of concepts and ideas are introduced one after another quite hastily, so perhaps it'd be best to simply outline the main story, rather than every plot-point. Of course, I'm no expert on synopses either, so this is merely an opinion.
The story itself, from what you've mentioned, does sound very interesting. |