Thanks that had been my major concern - world, story and character are inextricable lol Not sure how serious I was - there was a little of what the hell are you on woman when I read it
I'm calmer now and realise it can't really be changed.
The world was created as I wrote the story, and the character is the first person narrator. It's his coming of age story. Character is such a pampered brat he'd die in a medieval world lol