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Mouse · 11th October 2011, 09:32 PM

Excellent, TJ. You are right, as usual. I've just been looking through my chapter two and had things about Sorrel feeling weak and stuff, but deleted it out as I hadn't written her feeling very weak in the first chapter. I'll rectify that. (I thought it was a pretty dull first chapter too, to be honest!)

Yep, first time she's met Pasque.

Double bed is rubbish, come to think of it. I don't know why I just didn't write bed! What would be an older word for nightshirt?

Thank you!

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Mouse <3D~ Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Somerset Posts: 6,225 Blog Entries: 19	Re: Book three, chapter one Excellent, TJ. You are right, as usual. I've just been looking through my chapter two and had things about Sorrel feeling weak and stuff, but deleted it out as I hadn't written her feeling very weak in the first chapter. I'll rectify that. (I thought it was a pretty dull first chapter too, to be honest!) Yep, first time she's met Pasque. Double bed is rubbish, come to think of it. I don't know why I just didn't write bed! What would be an older word for nightshirt? Thank you!