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Old 11th October 2011, 12:42 AM   #23 (permalink)
Teresa Edgerton
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Re: For critique -- the bio to go with my press materials

Sorry, TEIN. I was posting the revision while you were posting, too.

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I believe I began telling stories as soon as I learned to talk. (unlikely - it sounds too far fetched - which to me is not a good convincer)
True, nevertheless, and true for a number of the writers I know. True for my my grandson Ethan as soon as he could speak coherently — and possibly before that, if we had only understood him.

I don't think you clicked on the thumbnail of the picture of me, or there is something the matter with your browser, because the picture is not in mono at all.

As you can see, I do mention alchemy in the press release. I cut out all that bit about the Green Lion books because people seemed to think I should, and cut out a lot of the things you felt were not expressed well, so I guess you could say I fixed them.
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Last edited by Teresa Edgerton; 11th October 2011 at 01:13 AM.
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