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Old 8th October 2011, 05:39 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Re: Short story introduction (350 words)

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'Mouse-y.' You know, I did think the voice was a wee bit me when I read it.

I've got Shade's Children to read. Is it any good? I love Garth Nix. You should check out Jeremy de Quidt's Toymaker for a pretty gruesome YA story.
You know what they say about imitation...

Yes, Shade's Children is really good. I love Garth Nix too but sometimes I get the impression that he was a little rushed when he wrote, e.g. Abhorsen. Shade's Children wasn't like that. Hideously dark, though. I'll have a look at Toymaker if I'm feeling brave one day.

Thanks Grizzgreen and hopewrites for your comments. hopewrites -- could you put your finger on what didn't work for you at the start? Was it the tense issues with 'the mad I'd marry' or was it more widespread?
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