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Old 1st October 2011, 05:32 AM   #187 (permalink)
TheEndIsNigh
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Quokka: For me, the first lines didn't build into a whole. They seemed detached from the punch line. Plus, I couldn't make a 'behind the scenes' connection.

Teresa: Yes, I realised you were some distance away although I've noticed you do span the time zones quite a bit in your post times. However...

Parson: For some reason - despite it being there, plain as day, in your location info, I always picture you in some quiet village in a south country shire, like deepest Kent, in the UK.
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