Re: Improving our Challenge Stories -- READ FIRST POST
Quokka: For me, the first lines didn't build into a whole. They seemed detached from the punch line. Plus, I couldn't make a 'behind the scenes' connection.
Teresa: Yes, I realised you were some distance away although I've noticed you do span the time zones quite a bit in your post times. However...
Parson: For some reason - despite it being there, plain as day, in your location info, I always picture you in some quiet village in a south country shire, like deepest Kent, in the UK.