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gategeek · 24th February 2001, 11:12 AM

enjoying it so far- i do wonder though why did jack leave? it's not like him to leave his team behind on a planet- especially when he has a bad feeling about it.
looking forward to more!

peachy · 24th February 2001, 11:55 AM

gategeek has a point there, but then again jack does get bored with all that teckno stuff, so i guess good excuse to leave. the story was great, i really enjoyed it
it was just like watching an episode, i got completly lossed in it, your a very talented writer, please hurry with the rest, and thank you,...peachy

skydiver · 24th February 2001, 12:49 PM

yeah...feed me more please...

the_Brainz · 25th February 2001, 04:01 PM

Chapter One has been added to the Hyperbole thread; it's all under the thread entitled "Stargate: Hyperbole: Prologue Part I." A bit of a naming oversight on my part, but I want to keep the whole thing together so you can actually find the blimmin thing.

Your comments are taken under consideration; Jack was not intending to be gone long, since he was just reporting back to Hammond and requesting a TA team. If that makes you feel better ;) Also, it's just supposed to be a description of events leading up to what actually happens in the book...I won't go on in case I do a spoiler...

gategeek · 25th February 2001, 07:02 PM

just read chapter 1 - sam going dark side- cool!! more please...

Abydos6 · 26th February 2001, 06:54 AM

Hello....

nice...just read the gateroom stuff..not read chapter one....

You goood...I love it...more...more...plz

book? Novel...*grins*

you should be writing these things....*grins*

gategeek · 7th March 2001, 08:40 PM

just read the next part - it's really good but i have a suggestion re format. why don't you give each chapter its own thread? then it'll be obvious when something's been added and people can post comments without worrying about spoiling it for people who haven't read as far.

the_Brainz · 7th March 2001, 11:03 PM

Hmm...I think I'll post two chapters to a thread. Originally I wanted the entire thing in one thread for continuity, but you make a good point.

25th February 2001, 04:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
the_Brainz behind the operation Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: plp://nz.p3.sol/hamilton.reg Posts: 95	More is here Chapter One has been added to the Hyperbole thread; it's all under the thread entitled "Stargate: Hyperbole: Prologue Part I." A bit of a naming oversight on my part, but I want to keep the whole thing together so you can actually find the blimmin thing. Your comments are taken under consideration; Jack was not intending to be gone long, since he was just reporting back to Hammond and requesting a TA team. If that makes you feel better ;) Also, it's just supposed to be a description of events leading up to what actually happens in the book...I won't go on in case I do a spoiler...

24th February 2001, 11:12 AM	#1 (permalink)
gategeek Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 396	enjoying it so far- i do wonder though why did jack leave? it's not like him to leave his team behind on a planet- especially when he has a bad feeling about it. looking forward to more!

24th February 2001, 11:55 AM	#2 (permalink)
peachy Daniels Beloved Join Date: Dec 2000 Location: i commute between cheyenne mountain & scotland Posts: 2,952	gategeek has a point there, but then again jack does get bored with all that teckno stuff, so i guess good excuse to leave. the story was great, i really enjoyed it it was just like watching an episode, i got completly lossed in it, your a very talented writer, please hurry with the rest, and thank you,...peachy

24th February 2001, 12:49 PM	#3 (permalink)
skydiver Trivia Goddess Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: topeka, ks, usa- 7 1/2 hours due east of Cheyenne Mountain Posts: 2,856	yeah...feed me more please...

25th February 2001, 07:02 PM	#5 (permalink)
gategeek Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 396	just read chapter 1 - sam going dark side- cool!! more please...

26th February 2001, 06:54 AM	#6 (permalink)
Abydos6 Confused? Totally!! Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Ireland Posts: 502	Hello.... nice...just read the gateroom stuff..not read chapter one.... You goood...I love it...more...more...plz book? Novel...grins you should be writing these things....grins

7th March 2001, 08:40 PM	#7 (permalink)
gategeek Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 396	just read the next part - it's really good but i have a suggestion re format. why don't you give each chapter its own thread? then it'll be obvious when something's been added and people can post comments without worrying about spoiling it for people who haven't read as far.

7th March 2001, 11:03 PM	#8 (permalink)
the_Brainz behind the operation Join Date: Feb 2001 Location: plp://nz.p3.sol/hamilton.reg Posts: 95	Hmm...I think I'll post two chapters to a thread. Originally I wanted the entire thing in one thread for continuity, but you make a good point.