Re: [Workshop] Engage me quickly!
That one seems like it's just a bit too flowery to evoke the feeling of rescue 'copters and why they're in the area. Kinda like looking at a painted picture of a rescue chopper. Good description, but it doesn't really evoke any emotions for me.
(Half the people putting up entries are ignoring your stipulation of "you walk into a room" :P)
Of course that doesn't stop them from being good, but...'