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Leelu · 1st February 2001, 12:59 PM

Kehgan wanted Karlan as she stroked his cheek
But he was distracted by memories he just had to seek.

She wanted to share his rations and his cot
The surface might be ice, but under his blanket was hot!

skydiver · 1st February 2001, 01:34 PM

(whoa, had to stop and think for a minute on that one)

poor tor, so very big and strong
shoulda known he was right all along

they had to stamp him twice
now that just wasn't nice.

Leelu · 2nd February 2001, 01:00 AM

Thera and Jonah, there they had a chance
No Air Force regs to ruin the romance.

Her shy smiles and a head on his shoulder
The feelings he remembered and actually told her.

But when the stamp wore off it was back to 'sir'
You could see his regret in the sad smile he gave her.

Skip · 3rd February 2001, 06:21 PM

And now when it is down in type,
You see the misfortune and the tripe.
Poor SG-1 and all their friends,
Will their lonliness and misery never end?

Can we do silly rhymes? I want to do a Aprils Fool's Day one but my efforts were pitiful and I scrapped em.

Great work, the rest! (And idn't that nice and personal- 'the rest'...

skydiver · 3rd February 2001, 09:23 PM

sure, let's go for april fools.

silly rhymes

jack o jack what did you do now
to get that scar on your brow

gray or brown makes not a diff
come here and i'll give it a kiss

jsc · 3rd February 2001, 09:53 PM

T-Man brown and strong he stands
muscles bluging like iron bands.

But gentle and kind is underneath
especially when humor he does unleash.

Skip · 4th February 2001, 02:42 PM

Danny's locks that did adorn,
We wonder by whom they were shorn.
Could it be a sneaky rule bound man,
If anyone knows... it'll be Sam.

Cap'tCrash · 6th February 2001, 04:41 PM

My lord god Apothis you are a dream,
You make those around you simply scream.
That wicked glint in you eye.
Makes me want to crush you like a fly!

Cap'tCrash · 6th February 2001, 05:31 PM

Oh Dannyboy you are a cad,
Making all us dreamers sad.
A new suit you do require,
The one you've got is really dire.

Leelu · 6th February 2001, 05:54 PM

Boy, oh boy, can Jack be mean
When he gets mad and vents his spleen.
Thoughtless words that cut like glass
Especially when Daniel gives him sass!

skydiver · 6th February 2001, 06:34 PM

sam o sam the perfect little major
even after they made her cut her hair
just once wouldn't you want to see
her actinj just like you and me

Skip · 7th February 2001, 06:53 AM

But my favourite just has to be
The Nox. Don't you see?
With fuzzy head and scruffy gear
They make me grin from ear to ear.

skydiver · 7th February 2001, 08:44 AM

aris boch is sorta fun
rogueish guy with a big gun

not totally bad he seems to be
get me some roshna & he can come see me

1st February 2001, 12:59 PM	#106 (permalink)
Leelu Tau'ri Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Houston, Texas (NASA Mission Control) Posts: 83	Kehgan wanted Karlan as she stroked his cheek But he was distracted by memories he just had to seek. She wanted to share his rations and his cot The surface might be ice, but under his blanket was hot!

1st February 2001, 01:34 PM	#107 (permalink)
skydiver Trivia Goddess Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: topeka, ks, usa- 7 1/2 hours due east of Cheyenne Mountain Posts: 2,844	(whoa, had to stop and think for a minute on that one) poor tor, so very big and strong shoulda known he was right all along they had to stamp him twice now that just wasn't nice.

2nd February 2001, 01:00 AM	#108 (permalink)
Leelu Tau'ri Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Houston, Texas (NASA Mission Control) Posts: 83	Thera and Jonah, there they had a chance No Air Force regs to ruin the romance. Her shy smiles and a head on his shoulder The feelings he remembered and actually told her. But when the stamp wore off it was back to 'sir' You could see his regret in the sad smile he gave her.

3rd February 2001, 06:21 PM	#109 (permalink)
Skip Odi et amo et- CRUCIO! Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: Manchester. UK. Or near as dammit. Posts: 4,636	And now when it is down in type, You see the misfortune and the tripe. Poor SG-1 and all their friends, Will their lonliness and misery never end? Can we do silly rhymes? I want to do a Aprils Fool's Day one but my efforts were pitiful and I scrapped em. Great work, the rest! (And idn't that nice and personal- 'the rest'...

3rd February 2001, 09:23 PM	#110 (permalink)
skydiver Trivia Goddess Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: topeka, ks, usa- 7 1/2 hours due east of Cheyenne Mountain Posts: 2,844	sure, let's go for april fools. silly rhymes jack o jack what did you do now to get that scar on your brow gray or brown makes not a diff come here and i'll give it a kiss

3rd February 2001, 09:53 PM	#111 (permalink)
jsc Registered User Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Los Angeles, California,U.S.A. Posts: 4,289	T-Man brown and strong he stands muscles bluging like iron bands. But gentle and kind is underneath especially when humor he does unleash.

4th February 2001, 02:42 PM	#112 (permalink)
Skip Odi et amo et- CRUCIO! Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: Manchester. UK. Or near as dammit. Posts: 4,636	Danny's locks that did adorn, We wonder by whom they were shorn. Could it be a sneaky rule bound man, If anyone knows... it'll be Sam.

6th February 2001, 04:41 PM	#113 (permalink)
Cap'tCrash Registered User Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: ENGLAND Posts: 166	My lord god Apothis you are a dream, You make those around you simply scream. That wicked glint in you eye. Makes me want to crush you like a fly!

6th February 2001, 05:31 PM	#114 (permalink)
Cap'tCrash Registered User Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: ENGLAND Posts: 166	Oh Dannyboy you are a cad, Making all us dreamers sad. A new suit you do require, The one you've got is really dire.

6th February 2001, 05:54 PM	#115 (permalink)
Leelu Tau'ri Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Houston, Texas (NASA Mission Control) Posts: 83	Boy, oh boy, can Jack be mean When he gets mad and vents his spleen. Thoughtless words that cut like glass Especially when Daniel gives him sass!

6th February 2001, 06:34 PM	#116 (permalink)
skydiver Trivia Goddess Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: topeka, ks, usa- 7 1/2 hours due east of Cheyenne Mountain Posts: 2,844	sam o sam the perfect little major even after they made her cut her hair just once wouldn't you want to see her actinj just like you and me

7th February 2001, 06:53 AM	#117 (permalink)
Skip Odi et amo et- CRUCIO! Join Date: Oct 2000 Location: Manchester. UK. Or near as dammit. Posts: 4,636	But my favourite just has to be The Nox. Don't you see? With fuzzy head and scruffy gear They make me grin from ear to ear.

7th February 2001, 08:44 AM	#118 (permalink)
skydiver Trivia Goddess Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: topeka, ks, usa- 7 1/2 hours due east of Cheyenne Mountain Posts: 2,844	aris boch is sorta fun rogueish guy with a big gun not totally bad he seems to be get me some roshna & he can come see me