Wow! (It's worth repeating that)
Although the subject matter is disturbing, this really is an awesome piece of writing. I felt like I was eating a beautifully prepared meal and drinking a fine wine; you've certainly got talent captain.
I wouldn't want to blaspheme your story with my own ideas, but your own thoughts on where this might go sounds interesting, and I'm certain you have the ability to pull it off. Though I cringe at the thought, let's just see where Gareth takes us.