Thread: The Asylum
View Single Post
Old 5th December 2009, 11:09 AM   #11582 (permalink)
chrispenycate
resident pedantissimo
 
chrispenycate's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Switzerland
Posts: 5,423
Blog Entries: 9
Re: The Asylum

Chronic Phantom

You expect ghosts to be malevolent, excessive personalities. After all, there has to be a fairly serious reason why they’ve not moved on, right? Normally revenge, justice, a bequest – heavy, dark motivations.

So the revenant I met in the Asylum was not exactly what I was expecting.

“I wasn’t finished,” he – I’ll assume it was a ‘he’, although, as with the majority of chronics, there was no way of telling – he intoned. I was posting in ‘workshop’ when I felt a sudden, searing pain; massive embolism I suspect. Then, as it passed, I tried to finish my post, but my finger went through the keyboard. You know, that is even more frustrating than ‘Firefox cannot contact the site you are seeking; perhaps Brian is having problems with attackbots. Please try later.’?”

“Nothing is more frustrating than that, when you’ve prepared a long critique in ‘quote’, and not saved it anywhere. Certainly not death.” I’m as compulsive as any ghost.

“You could be right. Anyway, I couldn’t move on leaving that unfinished, could I? So here I was tied to the place I died, but not to where my body was, but where I really was, on the Chrons.”

“And very nice it is to have you here. We really need a resident ghost for the atmosphere, and you’re better adapted to the environment than some mediaeval shrieker.

“I suppose I ought to give you a chance to move on, though where you expect to go that's better than here, I don't know. In fact, if I die I'd like to join you here. Could you perhaps dictate your post to me, and I'll type it in for you?”

“I'm not sure I want to go either, but it's like an itch you can't get to to scratch. Well, I'd got this most splendid rhyme for…”
chrispenycate is offline