[Nickler]

Thanks to both of you very much

You're right about the character thing it sucks and for somereason that was realy hard for me. Usualy it is my strongest area.

For some reason i felt like i had to introduce him right there, but now i realize that i dont even realy need it, at least not there. I'll think of something thanks.

oh and Duat is the egyption underworld or at lest the path of hardships on the way to paradise as i understood it. That't why i chose it because it is not quite paradise. I'm realy suprised anyone got that but me I'm a little obbsesed with greek and egyptian myth and religion

Thanks again