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Nik · 22nd April 2009, 05:00 PM

Take a note-book with you, re-write a zillion times then go back and strip-mine...

You may find it easier to drop fragments of description into text. Like... he still remembered his amusement when he saw his first Terran aubergine. It was exactly his head colour before the blue binary's UV began in 2ndSpring...

Find a good thesaurus and go google...

22nd April 2009, 05:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Nik Speaker to Cats Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: UK: ENGLAND: Posts: 1,482	Re: help with Alein descriptions Take a note-book with you, re-write a zillion times then go back and strip-mine... You may find it easier to drop fragments of description into text. Like... he still remembered his amusement when he saw his first Terran aubergine. It was exactly his head colour before the blue binary's UV began in 2ndSpring... Find a good thesaurus and go google...