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Old 18th August 2005, 05:10 PM   #39 (permalink)
Mark Robson
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Re: Dawn Dragon - the whole Prologue

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Originally Posted by Winters_Sorrow
Hi Mark - just got round to reading the prologue and was very impressed (and hooked!). I know you discussed this concept with me at the Worldcon, but I must have missed this thread in the past.
On a specific note, I noticed your use of the word "dragonspore" to describe the trail left by the dragon. Was this a typo of the word "spoor" or is a deliberate describing word. I ask because now I'm imagining special mushrooms left by the dragons as they move around

Seems you have plenty of fantastic proof-readers already onboard, so I'll just content myself with continuing to plow through the Darkweaver Legacy.
Hi WS,

Yes, you're right, it is a typo of spoor! I suppose I could edit it on here - I've already got the edited version stored in my laptop. But this was the raw draft, and in some ways I like the idea of people seeing the first version, mistakes and all. Just goes to show that nothing comes out perfect first time around!

I hope that you don't find The Darkweaver Legacy too much of a 'plough through' type story! I look forward to hearing what you think of it.
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